Date: 11/30/09 07:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Damn U Carter,lol. Good timing. Glad they're going 2 try at something. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: It's always Nick's fault! Hahaha... thank you for the review.
Date: 11/30/09 06:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, sadly this doesn't happen inreal life, or does it,lol. At least when they came to Puerto Rico, they didn't stay at my house, damn,lol. NIce start. Let's see what happens next.
Author's Response: I wish it was true as well... I certainly wouldn't mind sharing my bed! Hahaha. Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/30/09 05:53 am Title: Chapter 3
Awwww great update! I want more lady, I feel so deprived of this story lol.
Author's Response: Thank you, heh. I will be updating again in a couple of days, I promise.
Date: 09/18/09 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
LMFAO! Go figure and leave it to Carter to come in and ruin the moment. Wow...Loved the humor you had weaved through this. And yes, you are doing wonderfully with the 1st POV. :) Keep up the great work and update this soon. Or...I won't update SPR. *smirk*
Author's Response: Y'know... when we meet up again next tour... when you least expect it, I'm going to karate you! And you'll be like "Oww... what was that for?!" and I shall respond with "For threatening me updating by hanging SPR updates in my face!" ......But thank you for the review. =) You know how I worry.
Date: 09/18/09 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
You're doing great with the POV! It's great so far. I love the ending! HAHA
Author's Response: Thank you, Sel! That means a lot! =)
Date: 09/18/09 08:02 am Title: Chapter 2
lmao....this chapter was really amusing and good and you really have the 1st person pov thing down - it makes me want to try it, as I've told you lol. Good job, More soon please!
Author's Response: I'm glad it made you laugh, it was supposed to. AJ has that mix of being serious and bringing in humor when he can't handle much more. Or just doesn't wan to. Haha. I'm glad the 1st POV is looking good to you, that is one thing I still worry about. Thank you!
Date: 09/16/09 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1
More, please! asap! I love this.
Author's Response: LOL, that's what everyone has been saying... thank you!
Date: 09/09/09 02:36 am Title: Chapter 1
That was way too incredible to just leave it there. I put a vote in for more. Please?
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I am planning out the story as we speak... er, type. Just give me some time! =)
Date: 09/08/09 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh i loved it! great job. but i am think you should make it a longer story too :-)
Author's Response: Thank you. =) You probably will see future chapters, I just like keeping y'all in suspense. LOL.
Date: 09/08/09 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'd love love love to see this turned into a full-length story! And great job with 1st person POV so far!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am thinking about that... we shall see!
