Date: 09/03/10 11:11 am Title: Chapter 37
well being sick is no fun. :). I thought it was cute he called Mommy lol.
Author's Response: Nope, it isn't. :/ Yeah, I thought it was too, hehe. Thanks for reviewing, there will be more soon!
Date: 09/03/10 05:00 am Title: Chapter 37
Sick again? Poor AJ. I hope that he can start to feel better soon. I can imagine how miserable it is to be sick on the road with no time to rest. I like the conversation with his mom. Great job!
Author's Response: Yeah, I feel really bad for making him so sick and miserable but he's all stressed out and that can take its toll on a body. :( Thanks Sel, there will be more soon. :)
Date: 09/03/10 04:39 am Title: Chapter 37
great chapter. update soon. i wanna know what is going to happen with alex. i think his health is going to be worst if he does not take things slowly
Author's Response: Thanks. :) I will update soon. And I definitely agree, we'll see what happens.
Date: 09/03/10 03:52 am Title: Chapter 37
No, it's a normal thing that happens with them. I hope he gets better and that he can talk to Kim and Bob. They all have things to be said to each other.
NEXT!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, there will be more soon! :)
Date: 08/21/10 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 36
Poor Kim being sick while she's preggo. How miserable! Loved the soundcheck bits and how you got them all together. And Brian is totally on to AJ. Interested to see where that'l go. You're on an updating roll :)
Author's Response: Yeah, that's gotta suck big time. :( I thought the soundcheck was pretty funny. "It's God Howie." LMAO Brian's no fool and the others really aren't either, but since they're sharing a bus he will notice things more than the others. But remember, AJ's not stealthy like Howie. ;) I'm glad that you liked this chapter, there will be more soon... :D
Date: 08/21/10 04:48 am Title: Chapter 36
I loved that chapter, the soundcheck was hilarious :)
Author's Response: Thanks, there will be more soon. :)
Date: 08/21/10 03:30 am Title: Chapter 27
Aww why are they having so many issues? I like that you make them very realistic though and it's not all omg I love you so much, forever and always and never fighting lol. Seriously, who is like that?
I had to laugh some at all of Kim's sneezes. Poor girl is sick and her baby is in the hospital and she can't see him, no wonder she's on edge. AJ needs to give her a little break. But I understand he's on edge as well. Gosh, you can't win lol. Nice chp.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like that I'm pointing out that their marriage is nowhere near perfect. I try to write as realistically as I can, putting myself in the situation and figuring out how I would feel as any of the characters and so far it's a good strategy.
Ha, I find it funny that you found Kim's sneezes funny. lol Yeah, this whole accident thing is a lose-lose situation. :( I'm glad that you liked this chapter and that you like the rest of them as you catch up to the latest one. :)
Date: 08/21/10 01:29 am Title: Chapter 36
A part of me s afraid too Brian.
Oh sweetie, I love ALL those songs, my faves: Unmistakable and Helpless When She Smiles!
Okay, bad that Kim and Lill J are sick. AJ won't be able to hide his feelings for too long, even more with Brian at the same bus. But most important, he won' be ale to hide it from himself any loner.
NEXT!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, I'm sure AJ will make his stresses known to the others eventually, only time will tell. I really appreciate your reviews, there will be another chapter soon!
Date: 08/17/10 06:37 am Title: Chapter 35
Great job with this chap, MA. I'm glad that we got to find out more about Kim. It was sad though when Jordan was asking about her parents. Love the beginning part with AJ and his therapist. Seems like he definitely has some stuff that he still needs to work out.
And yay for a boy! I had a feeling :)
Author's Response: Thanks Sel. :) I'm glad you liked the Kim backstory, and it was sad when Jordan asked that question. :( But Kim's character is just as important as AJ's, so I figured it was time to shed some light on her past and whatnot. That therapist part came from your comment in your last review, thanks for the idea. :) And I'm glad that you like that the baby's a boy, that's what I wanted it to be all along. I already had its name picked out and it won't be revealed until the birth. ;) There will be more soon!
Date: 08/17/10 03:00 am Title: Chapter 35
Loved it as usual!!! I really like the way you write A.J., especially since he's such a complicated person to begin with. I also liked that we got some more insight on Kim. Can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that comment gives me a lot of confidence. I'm happy that you think I do AJ's character justice, I actually mentioned AJ's complicated nature to a friend yesterday. lol And I figured it was about time to Kim's character some more depth, she's just as much an important character in this story as AJ is. Thanks so much for the review and I'm working on the next update as I'm typing this, it'll be posted soon. :)
Date: 08/14/10 04:16 am Title: Chapter 35
That's why she gets more worried with Alex's 'get aways'... she doesn't want her Fam ruined again, for her and the kids now.
Author's Response: That's a good theory, I'll keep that in mind. ;)
Date: 08/14/10 03:52 am Title: Chapter 35
NOT YET? Uuuuu, tho I would love a girl, it's nice for Kim to be THE lady of Mclean's casa!
Cute & drama free.... LOVELY!!
Now the name....
P.S.: I cried with Kim... more Fam issues..
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't think that Kim minds being around a bunch of boys. She's deal with AJ, Jordan, and the Boys for awhile now. ;) Yes, the name is next, but that won't be revealed until the birth. I've already decided on it. And yeah, now you find out that both AJ and Kim have family issues. Thanks for your review! :)
Date: 08/14/10 03:27 am Title: Chapter 34
I just can type few things, my laptop have issues!
ALES WTH!!!!!! GROW UP OR YOU WILL LOOSE YOUR FAM!
Date: 08/11/10 01:53 am Title: Chapter 34
Another great update as usual :)
Can't wait to see how AJ deals with all of the internal stuff he's got going on. Hopefully he and Kim are able to eventually work things out. Oh, and I think "Gumby" should be a girl :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and input. I should update again within a few days. :)
Date: 08/08/10 07:32 am Title: Chapter 34
Aw this was a sad chap. Poor aj seems to be falling apart. Maybe he needs to pay another visit to his therapist. I hope that he can work things out with Kim because with the way he's acting, I'm sure she's not happy. Jeff seems like a nice guy too.
And I think that Gumby should be a boy. :) Thanks for updating.
Author's Response: Yeah, he's struggling with some things right now. He's sort of losing an internal battle at the moment and that therpist visit is a good idea, I didn't really think about that. :) Yeah, me too. I think I'm trying to get across that AJ is trying run away from or forget about his issues which he has done in real life. I see either a good talk or another blow out between him and Kim in the future about all of this. And Jeff, yeah he's a nice guy who is trying to be there for AJ, he can see that he's going through some things and just wants to help. AJ could really use some friends like that. :)
Thanks for the vote! Now it's Boy: 2 - Girl: 2 lol And you're very welcome for the update! There will be more soon, I promise! :D
