Date: 12/03/09 06:46 am Title: Chapter 8
ohhhhh my poor baby! idk I hate every time that Chris appears....
Date: 11/17/09 05:14 am Title: Chapter 7
OH MY POOR ALEX!!!!! next chap!!!!!!
Date: 11/17/09 03:56 am Title: Chapter 7
Poor baby!!! And is it bad that I pictured him looking sexy in his sweatpants and wifebeater? LOL. Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: No it's not at all 'cause that's how I felt too. lol That was one of the last things I changed for that exact reason, so you're definitely not alone in picturing that. I thought, "Hmmm...t-shirt or wife beater?" It just seemed more appropriate given the situation. ;) I'll definitely update again soon, I've been on a roll with writing and I am loving it! :D
Date: 11/13/09 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh my poor Alex!!! Next chap, please!!!!!
Date: 11/13/09 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awww...poor AJ. *makes him some soup* Sarah pissed me off when she got all mad at him for being sick. haha. I know it must be frustrating but she still pissed me off. Hope Nick doesn't get sick going over to their house! Great job =)
Author's Response: Haha, same here! I was pissed at Sarah when I was writing it, so I'm glad someone gets it! I think that's the reaction I was going for. Thanks for the review, I'll update again soon. :)
Date: 11/06/09 08:43 am Title: Chapter 5
So just finished reading your story... I have to say its cute... I like it AJ as a daddy is adorable. I can't wait to see where you take this. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I've read some good "AJ-father" stories on here and I like the idea so I decided to try it. I'm trying to figure out where I want this to go so hopefully I'll update within a few days. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. :D
Date: 10/30/09 06:32 am Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. I can only imagine Nick babysitting. LOL! I do have some feedback...The story is great so far, but I feel like there's nothing big going on. I keep thinking that something big is gonna happen...you know? lol. Not sure if this is helping or is leaving you scratching your head. But, it's almost like we're just kind of seeing the ins and outs of them each day without anything major going on. But I know you're probably leading up to something? Maybe if you ended the chapters a little bit differently or in a mini cliffhanger? But I really like it and hope you continue writing it. And I love the Arok love :)
Author's Response: LOL I'm working on it, I'm working on it...you'll have to wait a few chapters though. ;) Your suggestions are noted. Thanks for reviewing. Arok forever! :D
Date: 10/30/09 06:04 am Title: Chapter 4
LOL at the Backstreet Cold. Cute story so far!
Date: 10/30/09 05:42 am Title: Chapter 5
hun the only thing I can say is: NEXT CHAPTER, PLEASE!!!!!!!
Date: 10/30/09 04:15 am Title: Chapter 5
When I gave my review about hating Sarah, I meant like the real Sarah LOL not just this character. That may be why people aren't reviewing, cuz a lot of people hate picturing him with Sarah Martin. It's a great story though
Author's Response: Oh, that makes sense now. Thanks for elaborating on that and for the reviews of course. ;)
Date: 10/01/09 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
Cute story so far! Can't wait to see where you go with it...
Date: 09/20/09 10:14 am Title: Chapter 1
great story cant wait for more. do add soon.
Date: 09/19/09 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is cute but I cannot stand Sarah...at all.
Author's Response: Alright, I can understand that. Hopefully you'll continue to read this anyway. Now that you said that, I'll work on her character, she does seem kinda annoying. :)
