Date: 08/08/10 05:21 am Title: Chapter 34
Man he really needs to get his shit together or he's going to lose Kim.
I want a girl. :-)
Great job. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I certainly hope not, but who knows?
Thank you so much for your answer, so far it's Boy: 1 - Girl: 2 based on votes. lol My readers' opinions and input are very important to me, but I can't make any promises on whether "Gumby" will be a he or she just yet. I'm just hoping that the votes will help me decide. lol Thank you so much for the review, sometimes it's hard to feel inspired to write when I don't receive any feedback. But now that I have I'm gonna make sure to get a move on with this chapter, I feel bad about these monthly updates. :( lol Thanks again!
Date: 08/05/10 05:31 am Title: Chapter 24
Aww poor Jordan. I hope he'll be okay. And poor Kim too. That's gotta be tough, not being able to go in to your child. They'd have to tie me down because I'd fight them tooth or nail if i were in that situation lol. Good chp. And yes, I'm still working on getting this fic read. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked this chapter. Yeah, it's a pretty stressful situation and I would feel the same way as Kim does, motherly instinct and all of that. No worries, at this point you're only ten chapters behind. lol I hope you'll continue to enjoy it. :)
Date: 07/13/10 02:43 am Title: Chapter 33
Another great chapter!! You never disappoint and are a very talented writer!!! Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will update again soon! :D
Date: 07/11/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aww what a cute family they are! :) That's exciting that she's going to have another baby ... I think a little boy would be adorable. I can see Aj with two sons strolling along the beach lol. Let's hope AJ's drinking doesn't get out of hand because I just have a very weird feeling about it. Gonna continue to read...slowly catching up lol.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm still on the fence about the gender of baby McLean #2. lol Oh please do continue, I hope you're finding that this story gets better the more you read it. lol
Date: 07/10/10 06:32 am Title: Chapter 33
I'd send ya a big email, but I miss post my thoughts here.... So here we go: He helped his friend, faced the drug dealer, made his kid sleep and when he will sleep his wife come with cocaine.. LORD! Jesus, I know he is hurt, but if I were in her shoes I would be freaked out of my mind. Plus she is pregnant, this makes your entire soul freak out! Okay, she isn't easy normally, but they have background issues, and isn't easy to say that you were wrong...
I do hope they can manage a decent talk, for they sake! God Bless!
Author's Response: Thanks for your response, I really appreciate it. :)
Date: 07/07/10 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 17
Aww poor AJ is sick again lol. He and Kim have an interesting relationship...they love each other but they like to argue it seems like. And that beginning part with Jordan reminded me of that Lonestar song Already There ..I think is the title. Anyway, good chp and I'm working at reading the whole thing. :)
Author's Response: Yep, AJ and Kim are both stubborn. lol Yeah, it does remind me of that song now that I think about it. That song makes me cry. lol Thanks so much for the feedback and take your time with reading, I have a feeling you'll like the next few chapters. ;)
Date: 07/07/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 33
From AJsgirl021: Wow, I wasn't expecting that! Update soon! Can't wait for more! This is AJsgirl saying goodbye and god bless!! Peace!!
Date: 07/07/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter 33
From luna610: Great chap! Very interesting...we learned a lot about AJ's past here. I have to say that I can't blame Kim for being a bit suspicious although she should hear him out. Although the way he was talking about his cravings makes me wonder if he's lying...
Date: 07/06/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
AJ is such the tease lol. And yes, I'm still reading it. I hope to catch up eventually. :) It's good so far..poor AJ getting sick though. And Jordan is such a cutie. I'm gonna keep reading and see what happens next. Good job!
Author's Response: Yes he is. lol Thank you, I'm glad you like it so far. Yeah, poor AJ. :( And I hope if AJ has kids one day they'll be as cute as Jordan. lol I hope you'll continue to enjoy the further chapters and this story. :)
Date: 07/05/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
So originally Kim was Sarah? So glad you changed it lol. This first chp was so cute and AJ with a little boy is adorable. :)
Author's Response: Yes...she was. Don't worry, I learned my lesson. LOL Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I hope you'll read the other 31 chapters so you'll be up-to-date on the story 'cause I'm updating later today. :)
Date: 06/14/10 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 32
Cliffhangers are EVIL!! Now I'm gonna be wondering! LOL
I had a feeling Luke was a friend of AJ's that was an addict. I feel bad for him, I hope he stays in treatment. I loved the way you wrote this whole chapter, it is very descriptive and is very accurate of what drug withdrawl causes. Great job! Please update soon!
Author's Response: LOL that's the point, I gotta keep you all guessing.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked this chapter and appreciate my accurate writing. I'll be going out of town this weekend, so I'm hoping to have an update done before I leave. :) Stay tuned...
Date: 06/04/10 07:50 am Title: Chapter 32
Great chap MA! This Luke is an interesting character and his story (and hints of AJ's past) are bringing something new to the story. Great job and can't wait to see what's up with that cliffie. You are evil for that. lol. Thanks for updating.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like the things I'm coming up with, I gotta keep it interesting for y'all. And yes, I am evil for the cliffie, but I had to do it. ;) There will be another update soon!
Date: 06/04/10 02:25 am Title: Chapter 32
MAN!!! update soon please!!! what did she do tackle him cause they got interuppted the first time?????? lol i hope!! This is AJsgirl saying goodbye and god bless!!! Peace!!
Author's Response: I will, I promise. You'll see... ;)
Date: 06/04/10 01:34 am Title: Chapter 32
she better just be seducing him or something
Author's Response: You'll see... ;)
Date: 06/04/10 01:30 am Title: Chapter 32
wtf why did she smack him???
