Date: 05/19/10 04:08 am Title: ~*On The Spot*~
Great chapter! You have a great way of describing these scenes because I can picture them happening :). I'm glad that Shayne told AJ she was bothered...I totally understand her! And we all know this would totally happen bc AJ can't keep his mouth shut. lol. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Date: 05/18/10 11:22 pm Title: ~*On The Spot*~
I'm glad that Shayne told AJ how she was feeling about him telling everyone about her drinking problem and for him putting her on the spot about her writing and guitar playing instead of keeping it inside and resenting him for it, although she might still. I'd be upset with him too if were her.
Thanks for another great chapter Kel, I'm happy to read that my suggestions/comments have helped you in some way. :)
Date: 05/18/10 09:19 pm Title: ~*Kawasaki*~
Loving this! Can't wait for more! :D
Date: 05/18/10 06:59 pm Title: ~*Kawasaki*~
Ok Kel...you're killing me with the first half ofthe chapter. Damnit! You know I'm at work! *stomps feet*. The second part was hilarious. I love how everyone was thinking the same thing about Denise. And the ending was funny. I can totally picture all of this.
On a different note, I'm interested to see how Brian feels about Shayne and if/when he finds out about what she's going through. Great job! And since you're off today I'll keep checking for another update! Lol
Author's Response: LMAO. Yeah, the first part was a little NSFW. Shoulda thrown out a disclaimer. Oh well...SURPRISE!
And yeah, the Brian part. Hadn't thought much about that yet, but you gave me a few ideas. We all know he's so opinionated. :roll: Thanks for the review, girl!
Date: 05/18/10 07:57 am Title: ~*All In The Family*~
LOL... this one was funny. I can't wait for the next chapter. Glad she got to meet more of his friends and family...
Date: 05/17/10 07:04 pm Title: ~*All In The Family*~
Pretty funny chapter...
Date: 05/17/10 12:41 pm Title: ~*All In The Family*~
another amazing chapter... love it!!!
I think that it wasn't easy for Shayne to fly to Alex and to show him at this way, how much she missed him...but i'm glad she did it =)
i think alex is really happy to have her with him...
this situation at the beginning between chris and shayne was really awkward but meeting his parents and the other friends was okay and funny :D
hope they enjoy their night together ^^...
please update soon... MEL
Date: 05/17/10 07:17 am Title: ~*Distance Makes The Heart Grow Harder*~
I am a whale!!! THAT WAS SO CARTER! I had to say it.
Author's Response: I know! I thought people would get a kick outta that. I did. Thanks for reading and reviewing, hun! *kisses* ~Kel
Date: 05/17/10 06:57 am Title: ~*Destiny Calling*~
LORD!!!! This chapter was amazing, that question and answer was... mmm... Oh Lord... I would do the same. And I HATE flights!
Date: 05/17/10 06:38 am Title: ~*All In The Family*~
Great update, hun! I could feel her fears and all! Oh those two.. Nick and D.. what a kids! haha... Oh Alex... go have some fun!!!
Date: 05/17/10 05:18 am Title: ~*All In The Family*~
I love this story...it's grown so much from where it started and I hope it continues.
However, I will give you $10 to have someone beat the shit outta AJ for drinking. Period.
Author's Response: LMAO! That's awesome...hmmm...something to think about. Don't worry, if it happens, I won't charge you anything. Haha!
Date: 05/17/10 01:13 am Title: ~*All In The Family*~
LOVE this chap Kel! The beginning was so amazingly awkward with her and Chris. lol. And the part with drunk Nick being the whale seriously had me cracking up! This was a fun, light chap :) Good job!
Author's Response: LMAO! Sel, I was cracking up when I wrote it too. Hmmmm...a whale just seemed so appropriate. Nick is a fun character to write. Gotta say...lol
Date: 05/17/10 01:11 am Title: ~*All In The Family*~
Aw, that's cool that Shayne got to meet everyone. And LMAO at Howie and Nick throwing back shots of tequila and Nick being drunk and being a "whale"!! I love this story!
Date: 05/17/10 12:59 am Title: ~*Destiny Calling*~
Oh snap! Definitely wasn't expecting that! Their relationship is definitely going places...their web chat was cute. Kel, you're really good at writing AJ. Almost like the real thing. ;) LOVING THIS, on to the next update...
Date: 05/16/10 07:44 pm Title: ~*Destiny Calling*~
Ok... so I finally got a chance to read all your awesome updates... I've been pretty busy...but never the less I think you are doing a marvelous job don't change anything...I can't wait to see how AJ reacts with shayne going to Japan... update soon. Loving your story..
