Date: 05/16/10 06:30 pm Title: ~*Destiny Calling*~
She's going to Japan wow....that's going to be great, I hope hihi.
I would like to give you longer reviews but English isn't my mother language so after every chapter, I just want to let you know that I enjoyed it and hopefully that inspires you to write some more for this awesome fanfic.
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Author's Response: Thanks, Paula! Your English is very good. I don't have any problems understanding you, silly girl. lol Glad to see that you are still enjoying it. I'll have more posted soon so stay tuned! ~Kel
Date: 05/16/10 04:52 pm Title: ~*Destiny Calling*~
Hey Kel,
First of all I'm a fan of this story.
Second I like the way the story's heading. Don't think you should change it. You are great in writing about their feelings, thoughts, etc...
Just keep on going I'll let you know if I think differently....
Hugs Smoon
Author's Response: Hey Smoon! Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like the direction I've chose for the story. I'm still working on a few little twists and turns, but it's slowly coming together. Took me long enough to get there. lol
Date: 05/16/10 04:41 pm Title: ~*Destiny Calling*~
This was a cute chapter. Love the webchat at the end. lol. Wondering if her going to see him is a good thing...I guess it is, seeing as she's been by herself for a bit now and is doing well.I bet he's gonna be excited! Can't wait to see.
Date: 05/16/10 04:33 pm Title: ~*Words*~
Great chap. The convo between AJ and Chris was interesting...and I don't blame Chris for being cautious even though it's not what AJ wants to hear. I'm glad that Shayne is taking care of her shit. Interested to see if she goes to that meeting!
Date: 05/16/10 01:28 pm Title: ~*Destiny Calling*~
thanks for this great chapters!!! i think shayne is on the best way to get over her issues... i'm glad that she is still going to her therapy, talking to elizabeth really helps her :D
unbelievable how difficult it is for her to talk about her feelings... and this interview with alex...great how he was answering the questions and the way he was talking about shayne... i really love it!!! i'm glad shayne decided to go to japan and i'm very keen to see how alex reacts... and chris... he will like her, i'm sure ;)
it's very difficult for me to describe my feelings in another language so i'm sorry about my reviews because they aren't that way as i would like them...
great job...can't wait for more :D
many greetings MEL
Author's Response: Hey Mel! Thank you so much for the kind review. And you're English is really very good. I understood everything you said. Glad you're enjoying the story. Stay tuned! ~Kel
Date: 05/16/10 06:46 am Title: ~*Words*~
Being a writer myself I definitely understand the frustration with a lack of reviewers. If you're taking the time to write the story then you should at least get some feedback. I saw that this was updated earlier today and I couldn't read it. I was waiting all day and now I finally got to read it. I really like where it's going. I can really relate to the depression that Shayne's going through. Sometimes when I write characters that are going through something like that I wonder if readers will think I'm overdoing it or they can understand it. I just wanted to say that you do a great job with this story. It's definitely one of my favorites on here. Great updates, and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Hey Sarah! Thanks for the review and thanks for understanding. I think a lot of fellow writers understand what I was trying to say. I had thought about it for a while, but didn't want people to think I was just trying to generate reviews. That wasn't it at all. It's just important to know what people are thinking. Anyhoo, thanks for the review. Glad you're enjoying it. :)
Date: 05/16/10 05:58 am Title: ~*Words*~
I hope that AJ can get the support he needs from Chris about his relationship with Shayne eventually. I can understand where both of them are coming from on the issue.
I can't imagine how draining touring around the world for any artist can be. I'm sure it's got its ups and downs. The fast pace of it all: flights/travel through different time zones, hotels, press/interviews, etc. soundchecks, the shows...a person can only handle so much before it wears and tears on them. I don't really know if AJ's Japan/Asia tour is going to be long or extensive in this story, but it might be something to think about...
I like that Shayne is continuing to talk to Elizabeth and that she seems to be okay/coping for now. I like that she might consider group therapy even though that's not really her scene, 'cause I can see that she's a special character and that therapy that Elizabeth suggested might work for her since it's not your typical AA stuff.
Still loving this Kel, I can't wait to read where this goes and as always thanks for updating!!
Now how's THAT for a review? ;)
Author's Response: Now, THAT'S what I'm talkin' about, MA. I took heed to your advice and I think I'm going to try to develop the Japan storyline a little bit more. I originally hadn't intended to, but I think it will work. Thanks for the input! :)
Date: 05/16/10 12:06 am Title: ~*Distance Makes The Heart Grow Harder*~
Aw, what they're both going through is so tough. I do feel bad for both of them. I love how each chapter of this flows so well, I think that's key in keeping readers interested and I know I definitely am. Still loving this... :)
Author's Response: Thanks MA. Yeah, I find myself getting stuck on how to keep it moving with them being apart now. lol It's all about the segue. :nod: Glad you're still enjoying it. :)
Date: 05/15/10 11:54 pm Title: ~*Distance Makes The Heart Grow Harder*~
Great chapter Kel. I love that he was kind of harsh with her...tough love. And he's got a lot going on as well. I love the ending. I'm picturing him all seksi half asleep on the phone and me likey. lol. Can't wait for the next chap!
Author's Response: Oh man...you totally got it. That makes me happy. I should have probably gone into more detail about how the cool breeze brushed along the skin peeking out beneath the hem of his t-shirt as he lifted his arms when he stretched. Oh well. LMAO
Date: 05/10/10 03:15 pm Title: ~*Relative Reality*~
AJ you did the right thing!
I was also shocked to read about Shayne's experience in NY...that was pretty intens.
Thanks for the updates oh and I like the new banner.
Date: 05/10/10 09:31 am Title: ~*Game On*~
Haha it's fine about the editing, I didn't notice anything, but then again I was really into the story, lol. Great chapter, please keep them coming! I really like this story, thank you for posting it! :)
Date: 05/10/10 09:17 am Title: ~*Tears and Fears for Affairs*~
What!? Nooo! I don't like where this is headed, lol. It was so sad when she left, I wanted to cry! I'm glad A.j. has her earring though, hopefully it means they will see eachother again. Great storyline!
Date: 05/10/10 04:44 am Title: ~*Relative Reality*~
Omg Kel...this chap almost made me cry. Very intense stuff. I've been waiting for AJ to start falling apart and I'm glad that he recognized it and talked to her about it. And as sad as it is, I think that him going back to LA is good for him...if he can handle being away from her. Can't wait until the next chap!
Date: 05/10/10 04:29 am Title: ~*Therapy Therapy - Boom Boom Boom*~
Wow. Intense chap. Good stuff Kel. I'm really glad that we're finding out more about Shayne's background and life. And I'm interested to see how their "arrangement" pans out.
