Date: 11/25/11 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 24
oh shit!!! can't wait to see what happens next!!! This is AJsgirl sayin goodbye and god bless!! Peace!!
Date: 11/20/11 03:59 am Title: Chapter 1
It's taken me awhile tonight to find a story that grabbed my interest. You have definitely done that in this first chapter! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 11/11/11 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I meant to review this last night after I read it but I was still processing. After that ending, I am so looking forward to its sequel! Hurry up!
Date: 11/10/11 08:34 am Title: Chapter 24
Who the hell is Layla???? Could it be Rochelle because of the red lips that you kept mentioning? Or Jenn?ugh!!!!!! guess I have to wait for the sequel.... Congratulation on finishing your story. This is one great story! :)
Date: 11/10/11 02:27 am Title: Chapter 24
Yay! A finished story! Well kind of, now we've just got to get to the sequel, can't wait for more. Funny that I never thought about it before, but "Last Christmas" has some pretty creepy, evil lyrics if put into the right context. lol
Date: 11/09/11 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 24
Oh man, I knew AJ was missing when no one knew where he was. Can't wait for the sequel, Reb! Brilliant work.
Date: 11/09/11 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 24
Wow Reb! What an ending! Wasn't expecting that, but after the last chapter anything was possible! Well done, loved it :)
Can't wait for the sequel, I'm sure I'll be just as hooked as I was with this one :)
Date: 11/09/11 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 24
Okay you better get started working on that sequel! You can`t leave us hanging too long!
Anyways good story, I really enjoyed the premise and the bickering between Kevin, AJ and Nick!
Date: 10/21/11 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 23
I did leave a review for this chapter, but it somehow vanished!
Anyway...I love the twist with Layla (love that song too btw) and wonder who she is and what the boys did to her to make her want revenge. Can't wait for more, really enjoyed everything about this story :)
Author's Response:
LOL. It's all good hun!
But yeah... before writing this chapter, for some reason that song popped into my head. I YouTube'd it, began to listen to it and was like that's it... that will be the main bad girl's "name", Layla. I could totally see her committing the crimes she does and walking away clean to this song, lmao. Yeah, I'm weird like that, but I will say that you will be shocked once I reveal who Layla is. Well, I think ya'll will be shocked, lol. But, thank you sooo much for the review hun! :)
Date: 10/20/11 10:58 am Title: Chapter 22
Aww I loved that scene between Kev and AJ, and how no matter what, he'll always be his big brother.
Date: 10/20/11 10:50 am Title: Chapter 23
I'm loving this chapter until that part where Layla showed up. I was just having too much fun with the boys goofing around. lol
Yay for the sequel! Just don't hurt the boys too much, alright? lol
Author's Response:
LOL. I promise you, I think you'll be shocked when you find out who Layla really is! ;) And yeah, I had fun writing the boys goofing around, lol. I myself can't wait to start working on the sequel and where it goes... it's now up to Layla and her boytoy to determine how much the boys' get hurt and exactly whom. ;) LOL. Thanks for the review Ritz! :) *muah*
Date: 10/19/11 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 23
What an epic video! LMAO Loved it! Ooh, I am so intrigued by Layla...great work, Reb.
Author's Response:
LOL. Leave it to those guys to make a funny ass video, lol. I love watching their antics and stuff on YouTube. And Layla... well, she's gonna be real interesting for all the readers, lol. I'm gonna reveal her pretty soon... and, just remember, not all is what it seems! ;) Thanks for the review MA! :) *muah*
Date: 10/19/11 11:40 am Title: Chapter 23
dying to see who this layla is
Author's Response:
Lol. You'll come to see soon enough! ;)
Date: 10/13/11 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 22
What an emotional exchange between Kevin and AJ. Amazing job, Reb.
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much MA! :D
Date: 10/13/11 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 22
Yay! *wipes tear* that was a very emotional moment between Kevin and AJ. And I thought Nick would be the one to have those 'Kevin come back drama'. LOL I love this! I love you, reb. lol
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks Ritz, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) And yeah, Nick's apart of that too, but AJ's always been the vocal one, of his hopes of Kevin coming back and whatnot, so I figured he'd be perfect to play off of. But thanks for the review my dear, and I love you too! :)
