Although this was a great piece, I kinda agree with you,...I thought Jasper was more of a "tortured soul," he did roam around, after fighting in a war for such a long time...I think what you wrote was more accurate for him if he had more time to come to terms that he was no longer fighting anything...but it really doesn't matter because I really do think that you wrote a great piece. And you should be proud of yourself for it.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! I agree with you that he is sort of a tortured soul, especially with what he has seen and been through.
I actually wrote this story 3 years back before I read Eclipse, so I didn't know his backstory yet. That is why this short sort of focuses on his feelings about Edward's girlfriend being human. Thanks again. ^^