Oh my, so they got that ferry guy to help them across, but poor Alan. :( And I'm with Brian on feeling uneasy on who to trust... these guys could easily turn them in and just save and worry about themselves, but they're luckily helping them, and I hope their good nature continues! Great update Mare, can't wait for the next one! :)

Ooooooh my, this story gets more and more interesting and intriguing with every chapter! And this whole "finding Nick Carter of this universe and kill him off so that the new, real Nick Carter can survive" is just crazy, but the crazy I love of course! Again, can't wait for the next chapter, and damn girl, that's a hard decision... hmm... I say short, more frequent chapters! ;)

LOL!! Now, I must say, I loved the Spam and Hawaii reference you've made, represent!! I freaking LOVE Spam, but I've met a lot of mainland people that beg to differ. I've actually had a friend from the mainland tell me that Spam is poor people's food, and if you ate Spam, then you were poor. I stared at the boy and was like, "Uhh... you know you're in Hawaii, where Spam is a staple, and most of us are far from poor? Those are some fighting words!" Lol.

I guess you could say Spam is an aquired taste, but it's really not bad! Even our local McDonald's sells Spam with their breakfast platters! Besides cooking it up for breakfast and making spam musubis, I like to dice it up and add extra meat to fried rice or whatever else dishes! I especially love the Tobasco Spam! Yum, but anywho, let me end my rant about Spam, I just got excited reading about it, lmao.

Man, their situation is becoming more grim! When I read the part of AJ mistaking the swimming/floating people as fish, my mind went back on the testimonials of survivors of 9/11 and the Titanic, where it all seemed surreal and they at first believed what they saw was something else... not really bodies floating in the water, or people jumping/falling from towers. It's crazy when your mind tries to comprehend it and it can't, and I could seriously feel what Howie was feeling at that moment. Poor guy; such a grim and vivid chapter! And now Howard has fell unconscious! >__< Man, hope things start to look up! Can't wait for the next update!

Ahh fuck dude!! So, the "other" Nick comes out, which definitely makes things that much more harder! >__< I love how you sucked us readers right into Kevin's complex situation and thoughts because here I was, hoping I'd just read about the "other" Nick being killed and the actual Nick being saved. Now, here we are, reading about the "other" Nick, which definitely helps us tap even further into the thoughts and feelings of Kevin and Howie, with staring at their youngest brother and knowing they have to supposedly kill this Nick to save their REAL Nick. WTF Mare... WTF?!? Lol.

Can't wait for the next update! :)

Thank gosh I've stumbled across this story under the recently updated list! When I read the summary, I was like "oooooh, me likes and wants to read!!" When I seen how many chapters this story already had, I was like "O__O Why am I only knowing about this story now?!?" Lmao!! Well, it's good for me because it gives me MORE to read!! ^_^ Lol. Love the way the first chapter started out... it's as if I could actually hear Nick reading your dialogue, talking to us, especially the part where he changed his life around and how he was much more healthier and confident! And AJ hesitating about this... our little hypochondriac, but it did seem like he had an idea of what they'd be getting themselves into... his hypochondria might've just helped them, lmao!! Great first chapter, and I can't wait to read more! :)

Ooooooh my, this chapter had my heart pounding. Why? Because the way you described the bungee jumping!! It's like I was going up there with them into the helicopter, standing outside of it and jumping. I'm fucking scared of heights as well, and just reading was enough to give me that feeling when you stick your head out of the window of a moving car, and there's so much wind blowing in your face that your start choking on it, lmao. That's how I felt reading this chapter. Really got my adrenaline going, that's for sure! Poor AJ and Brian, but glad they all did it! :)

Okay, I'm sorry, but I had to laugh with Eduardo. He sounded TOO CALM for my liking, like he's used to this shit, lmao. GOSH DAMN YOU EDUARDO!!! Lmao. But ooooh my GOSH!! That's some crazy shit right there!! Poor boys, hope it'll all end okay. You can't be killing off the boys this early in the story... right?!? AHH!! *bites nails and quickly runs to the next chapter*

Yay for Nick taking charge, but poor thing for feeling like everything has came down on the very guy who fucks up from time to time, lol. It's nice to see Nick in this light and not the casual damsal in distress, lol. I'm glad they got Howie free! On to find out what happens next...