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After signing up for Celebrity Adrenaline Rush - an action packed reality show - the boys find themselves in the ultimate game of survival and one which could possibly cost them their lives.
Wow, this chapter seriously made me gag! Yikes, I give credit to Nick for trying to free the remaining deceased boys and give them a proper burial, but if that were me, there is NO WAY I'd even go back to the fucking plane! Lol. And yay for Nick and AJ taking charge! Man, I feel so bad for Jordan. :(
I know, poor Jordan, he must be devastated. I wouldn't go back to the plane either, I'd be running as far from it as possible, lol.
Such a frustrating situation to be in, poor guys!! And man, envisioning Nick with a machete, hacking away at trees and shit is a pretty hot image! Lmao!! Love that quote by Brian... "Have a little faith". Faith, even if a little, gets you a loooooooong way. :)
Mmm yes, Nick with a machete and all hot and sweaty is quite an image! Glad you are still enjoying it :)
Howie has such high spirits, which is exactly what they need, considering the situation they're in, especially Howie! Night one down, how many more to go...
He is in high spirits considering his situation, I always see him as the optimist.
Mmm... shirtless Backstreet Boys... I mean O_O
Mmm indeed! Thanks for reading :)
I couldn't help than to chuckle at AJ's reaction to everything... made me think back to the video BSB on Ice, on how he was exaggerating the whole situation, but the only difference is that he had a reason to with this one! I seriously LMAO with AJ's comments: "Hell no, you stay the fuck there!" and "Shut the fuck up Carter, I'm losing my concentration here!" LMAO, leave it to AJ to keep on with his vulgarity in any and all situations, hahahaha.
I love writing the AJ bits, one minute he's such a girl and the next he's got that 'fuck you' attitude. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Hahahahahaha, poor AJ getting bit by ants! Wonder if it were fire ants; heard those fuckers bites hurt, because they bite AND sting you. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter with more "jungle nasties", lol.
I wouldn't fancy being stuck with some of these jungle nasties, I think the ants might to tame compared to what's coming :)
Yay for AJ being gung-ho about doing shit! And I seriously laughed at Nick saying, "We had to have it, we just had to!" in reference of the wild boar, lmao!! Go AJ for catching the boar, killing it and slinging it up on his shoulder like a badass! Lmao.
Yeah, I liked badass AJ catching the boar. He has his macho moments, lol.
Aww man, sooo close with that helicopter being near their area. And LMFAO at your end note!! Bwahahahahahaha, that's what I like to hear! :P
Damn that helicopter! Thanks for all these lovely reviews :)
Oh GAWD!! My hands were seriously tapping because my stomach was growing weak and sick with this chapter. My my, that's just... written very descriptive and vivid. I seriously lost my appetite, lol. Poor Jordan, that's a fucked up way to go. And shit, now my head fucking hurts. >__< Lol.
Pretty gross! Poor Jordan. I was making myself feel sick as I wrote this chapter, lol.
Man, nice descriptive chapter! I could envision the waterfall and wide river and wish I could take a dip in something like that myself! And yes, banana leaves are great for cooking! Us Hawaiians, we wrap pork with banana leaves, dig a hole in the the ground and create like an underground stove, or imu, and allow the pork to cook in the banana leaves, thus having kalua pork! Sooo freaking good! And LMAO at AJ catching their dinner yet again, and Nick wondering how the hell he does it. I'm wondering the same thing too, but I'd rather have this AJ then hypochondriac, backing out of everything AJ, lol.
That sounds lovely, making me hungry. Yeah, I think AJ can be a girl with certain things but the tough guy with what he feels confident doing. Hope he's written OK in this, lol.
Thank GOD you decided against killing AJ. Girl, you should know he's my favorite. :( LOL. But damn man, that was scary and a close call! Glad they were able to save him in time, and hopefully he'll be okay. I have a feeling something might happen to Brian next.
I did consider the snake eating him whole, but thought that would be a bit too cruel, especially after the Jordan bit, lol. Hmm, we'll see about Brian. Thanks for reading :)
Ooooooh no Howie. :( I hope something goes good for them for a change. They must keep strong with their faith! *nods*
They're having the worst luck ever aren't they? It's about time I wrote something nice for them, lol. Hopefully Howie will be OK in the end. Thanks for all the reviews, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Oooooh my, poor Howard indeed!! :(
Again, I cringed with this chapter update, but it was great! Can't wait to see the next update, hopefully things will start to look up for the boys guys'. :(
Sorry for making you cringe, lol. I think the boys need a bit of luck too, things can only get better right? Thanks for reading :)
Aww damn!! I can't believe we reached the end!! :( But this was a great story I enjoyed reading my dear!! I'm glad Howie's leg was saved in the end... I wouldn't be able to live on with my life if he could no longer do the salsa, LMAO!! And Nick sure is right... we should not take things for granted, and life is too short and precious! Again, great job, and I truly enjoyed reading it! :)
Aww thanks so much for all the lovely reviews, I'm glad you enjoyed this story. I know it wasn't all that long, but there's only so much torture you can put them through lol! We can't have a legless Howie, lol.
As an unsuspecting victim, a young woman is thrown through time when an experimental time teleportation device explodes one morning. Five years later she meets the volunteer assigned to her case file. His mission, to retrieve her and get her home.
A rogue volunteer and a love she knows can never be, soon have her back into the world she thought she wanted to leave behind.
Wow Lore. I'm sooo glad that I now have this WHOLE COMPLETED story for me to enjoy! Your writing is truly amazing, the way you describe even the smallest, simplest details is so vivid! What really stood out to me as you depicted the scene was the simple thing of the flashing "N" of the open sign, and the way a table was set up in the diner, with an empty pie plate and all that. You truly painted a lovely picture within our minds with this first chapter. I really like it because your descriptions aren't wordy, where it'll lose me... but it's just enough to give you a visual, and you move on.
I am truly intrigued by these gentlemen; has chilvary came to exist in the year 2020?! Lol. Can't wait to find out more about this guy. As for Julie, poor girl! She goes through a lot when she time travels, and happens to be sick now! Loved the way you described her being sick by the way... I was just reading it and nodding, like "Yup... this is exactly how I feel or what I do when I'm sick with a stomach bug" or something, lol. What a GREAT way to start off this story; just on the first chapter, and I'm already enjoying it so much! ;) Can't wait to read the rest!!
aww yay a Reb review! I love all my reviewers but I love the new perspective you bring with your reviews. I told you I hunt down stories you are reading just to read your reviews, is that bad? LOL. Thanks so much for trying this story, it has been one of my favorites to write and I'm so glad to share it with people and actually find readers who enjoyed it as well. :) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, I don't know how well I keep up the whole description "thing". Thanks again. :)
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