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Chronos Project by Purpura Lipstick Rated: R [ - ]
Summary: Past Featured Story



As an unsuspecting victim, a young woman is thrown through time when an experimental time teleportation device explodes one morning.  Five years later she meets the volunteer assigned to her case file. His mission, to retrieve her and get her home. 

A rogue volunteer and a love she knows can never be, soon have her back into the world she thought she wanted to leave behind.


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Brian, Howie, Kevin, Nick
Genres: Alternate Universe, Science Fiction
Warnings: Sexual Content
 Series: Chronos Project
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 64839
Read Count: 48938


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Published: 07/29/11 » Updated: 10/16/11
Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/28/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Holy shit! This chapter was just intense!

So... this strapping gentlemen is Kevin Richardson? I should have known! >:] Again, though not much to describe, loved the vivid imagery of Julie being sick and throwing up! As I read it, it was as if I was here... hunched over some toilet, heaving out practically nothing. I swear, I HATE that feeling with a passion! >__< But my my... all that Kevin revealed to her is so interesting! It's funny, because there were some parts where I got it, and some parts where I got confused, but ended up understanding it, lol. That's what time traveling information will do to you, lol.

But, I really enjoyed this chapter, but totally bummed that Julie jumped right after Kevin finding her, revealing the news and was going to help her. Now, he has to "look" for her again. :( Poor girl.



Author's Response:

Yes, I pulled from my memory what it was like to heave with nothing to expell when I wrote that chapter.  I HATE being sick like that. 

I tried not to be confusing when I wrote about the time travel stuff, but it has to be a bit confusing since you are being introduced the same time as the main character and she sure as hell doesn't know what's going on.  I hope the rest of the story clears up anything that might have been confusing. 

I couldn't have her be saved right away now could I? What fun would that be? LOL.  Thanks for the review Reb!

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/28/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my... loved the setup of this chapter! Reading the description of being at the beach bought back a lot of good memories of camping and that fresh sea water smell you're greeted with!

Anywho, reading this chapter toally reminded me of that movie, "Hot Tub Time Machine!", where the guy figured out that he could do cool stuff in the future, like create good or somethig!! Lmao. This is all very interesting though, and uberly cool that she's working with THE KING OF POP!! I love these twists that you're supplying is with hun! :)



Author's Response:

Being in a landlocked state I am happy to hear that I described the beach well! LOL.  I don't know what it's like to camp on a beach, I have very limited experiences with the beach. LOL.  As soon as I stuck her on the beach the first thing that I thought of when I wrote it was Hawaii in the '60's and when I startd researching my mind pulled Elvis out somewhere and I just HAD to use it!!!

I like to twist my stories around, my only hope is my twists work out in the end and I don't confuse the readers, too much. :)  Thanks for the review Reb!

Unsuspecting Sunday Afternoon by twofaced Rated: G [ - ]
Summary:

AJ enjoys memories of a relationship he wishes he still had. 

 

 


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Death
 Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1065
Read Count: 821


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Published: 08/15/11 » Updated: 08/15/11
Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 11/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: Unsuspecting Sunday Afternoon

I love how you paid attention to even the smallest of details! The simple line of describing her green eyes, that even emerald would be jealous captivated me for some reason! I love how you highlighted their Sunday moments, and man the way you described AJ and Cori's relationship with one another and engaging in slight foreplay makes me want a man now even MORE!!! Lmao!!

But that was such a sad, tragic twist you ended this story with! Wow... poor AJ! :( Truly an unsuspecting Sunday afternoon! :'( This was a great one-shot story Karin! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback! I figured a song like that needed sundays to be highlighted ;) Yeah, it needed a twist, though, otherwise it's just a sappy romance...

The Other Side of Nick Carter by Alexsgirl_ritz Rated: PG-13 [ - ]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The youngest member of the Backstreet Boys has a secret. Discover Nick Carter's Other Side.

Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group, Nick
Genres: Drama, Supernatural
Warnings: Death
 Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 43034
Read Count: 63231


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Published: 09/02/11 » Updated: 08/31/14
Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/22/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Darkest Hour

Damn Ritz... why haven't I read this fic sooner?! Lol. This is a GREAT story!! I've come to realize that you have a very interesting way of starting off most of your fics, and the way you start off really reels readers in! What a tragic thing to start off with, but the ending of this chapter is absolutely beautiful!

Poor Nick... to not only lose the one you love, but to have that ability as well. The ending, with Kate blowing him kisses and mouthing that she loved him, that he'd be okay and she'd wait for him... :'( And it's sooo cool that the girl's name is Leila in here, because I have Layla in Last Christmas, that was inspired by Eric Clapton's song. That only means we have great minds! ;) Lol.

But man oh man, what a way to start this story off, the introductory really sucked me in!! I seriously LOVE what I'm reading so far, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)



Author's Response: YOU, my dear, just put a HUGE smile on my face. Try to imagine my reaction when I saw 62 reviews, and I couldn't believe it. lol To be honest, I re-write the first chapter thrice and I was glad this was the end result. I couldn't believe I was able to write something like this... Thanks to Lore for helping me out, she suggested the beautiful ending. Thank you for giving my fic a chance. :)

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/22/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Time to let go

I swear, this story is just interesting, I love it! Very different from anything I've read! I can't imagine how hard it is for Nick during this time, but Leila has a point, even though she came across harsh. Kate is definitely in a better place, and doesn't have to stick around to complete unfinished business. He should be happy, but happiness is hard to find during a time like this. :(



Author's Response: This is a sad chapter but by far my favorite. I felt like I was really there when I was writing this one. I was sad the whole night after writing this. Writing Nick's relationship with the four guys was something I am really proud of. Thank you again, love! :)

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/22/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Silver Anniversary

I like the way you write Nick, as well as the interactions between them! Lol. Simple things like Brian wanting to try a new restaurant in the Chicago area, to the boys' singing "Happy Birthday" horribly off key, lmao. And of course, gotta love AJ, who will just shoot anyone down! Lmao. But aww man, on to the next chapter where I'm sure things will start to get a bit more serious...



Author's Response: I was trying to write a romance Nic fic and I just can't write him well there so I stopped it. I'm glad you like the Nick in this story, I love him too! lol You know I love AJ, so at one point he would be a star on this story, too! lol thanks again!

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/22/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - First Mission..... Part 1

Okay, I just gotta say, I LOL at Nick being sure that the women preferred his smile over Howard's wink! LMAO!! That's sucha Nick thing to say! Hahahaha. I really enjoy how you wrote this girl... started off as if she were just another fan watching the show, and then she was in shock when Nick was staring at her and started giving her attention.

Then you threw this curveball at us with the fan suddenly disappearing and reappearing backstage, letting Nick know that she did happen to be a fan of theirs, but was also seeking his help. I gotta admit, I kinda freaked out with the ending of her suddenly looking dead, but you did a great job setting up this chapter!



Author's Response: LOL I seriously believe that at one point in the past seventeen years, it crossed Nick's mind that we loved his smile over Howie's wink. LOL. I think really hard how to show Nick's ability though it was already stated in the chapter 1 what was Nick's gift. It took me hours to find a place where Black and blue and Never gone tour was held on the same place, so I could put Patty in. And I'm happy to know that you liked how I presented it! and we both know how hard headed Nickolas is, so he won't believe Patty if she won't show it to him. LOL

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/22/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2

I giggled at AJ brushing off spiders to be nothing... Alex honey, I know good and well your ass would be the first one to run off, screaming like a little girl! Lol.

But oh wow... the ending of this chapter is simply heartbreaking! The way Patty begged and pleaded for Nick to tell her mom that she's dead, to the look she gave as she watched him walk away. :( Soooo sad.



Author's Response: LOL that was so freaking true! but we also know that AJ won't admit it and take every chance he could get to tease Nicky. :) I know it was heartbreaking but Nick's reaction was just normal. If I was him, maybe I won't even consider going back to help her at all. Thank you for reading this far! :)

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/23/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3

Aww damn, this just got deep! I'm glad Nick went back and decided to help Patty! :)



Author's Response: I was so proud of Carter! LOL I can't thank you enough for giving this story a chance. :)

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/23/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4

I really love how you wrote this chapter! It's hard for me to explain, but it's like simple, yet so profound! I love the interaction between Patty and Nick! And gotta love AJ's response to Nick's favor! Lol. But, even with the smallest details in this story, you can tell that you really thought out of the box!

Now... the reveal. My GOSH that seriously tugged on my heartstrings! Definitely reminded me of the movie "Ghost". Poor Patty and Barbara! :'( That was really nice of Nick to also supply her with tickets to "claim" her daughter. This was really heartwrenching, and I loved the way you ended it!



Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! One of the nicest thing I've ever recieved for this story. You can really see how much I love AJ. lol I think Nick doubted that Barbara would believed him, so he thought giving her tickets would make it easier for her to check out MN. I loved the ending as well, you can tell I can't let go of Patty. lol

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/23/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5

Wow. This was an absolutely beautiful chapter!! And I don't blame Nick, I fucking hate goodbyes too and wouldn't want to part with Patty sooo soon! The way you wrote Patty really draws you in, and like you said, I'm gonna miss her as well! :( I'm glad she's found the light though!

What a touching chapter, and I know it'll only continue to be more touching! :)



Author's Response: I had a feeling that if Patty wasn't a ghost, Nick would definitely asked her out. lol I became so attached to Patty that I didn't want to let her go, but she deserves to be peaceful at last. I'll always miss her, though. :)

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/23/11 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1

Wow Ritz... this chapter was amazing! Definitely different! I truly thought Big Ben was really there, until, of course, Big Ben was surprised that Nick could see him! Man... this whole story, but particularly this chapter really makes me think if that's how our deceased loved ones are... standing beside us, making remarks that they know we can't hear. :'( I can't stop saying how truly amazing this whole fic is Ritz!

Ironically, when I was in middle school, we had a security guard named Ben, and we called him "Big Ben". He was such a sweetheart... the biggest teddy bear you'd ever meet! One recess, when I was playing volleyball with my friends, he came into the court and started joking with us. He went off to play basketball with some boys while I took a break from volleyball to finish up some homework. Next thing I knew, a golf cart came racing into the courts, urging kids to move. I looked up to see Big Ben on the ground. Staff chased us out of the courts, and as I walked past, I heard someone say, "He's not breathing... I can't revive him!" Big Ben had died from a heart attack. :(

So, of course as I read this chapter, I thought of an old security guard that became a friend of mine. :( But again, this is just truly amazing Ritz, and I fucking LOVE you for writing this great fic! :)



Author's Response: That was a really sad story and I'm sorry if this story brought up some memories. :( Hope Big Ben is in a very good place right now. I am using names that first comes to my mind, the only names I'm reserching are the last names because I'm not familiar with those. I believe in this ghost stuff because my sister can see them, but luckily they don't talk to her and ask for her help. Thank you, Reb and I hope by now you know that I freaking LOVE you too!

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/23/11 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Mr. Big Ben..... Part 2

I LOL at Kevin stating that Nick, Brian and AJ were the popular members of the group and he needed to take one of the three! LOL

But awwww shit!! That was sooo freaking emotional!! Man... this really makes me feel like this all really happened... that Nick can really see ghosts and help them fulfill their unfinished business so they can finally make it to heaven! Ugh Ritz, this is sooo beautiful!! >__<



Author's Response: hahaha. that was bad, wasn't it? It shows that I won't listen to an interview if it were just Kevin and Howie... Thank you for your beautiful and encouraging words. :)

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/23/11 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?

So, I gotta say, I LOVED that line, "Jeez Brian, you talk Leighanne now!" LMFAO!!!

But, you've managed to do it again with yet another chapter... thinking and writing outside the box! The way you introduce these ghost characters to us really intrigues me! And man... just when I thought the "Michael" ghost was a good guy, you have someone to make Nick wonder again about this mysterious fellow. Unless... unless the girl isn't a good spirit, and perhaps a bad spirit that doesn't want these souls to cross over. Hmm...

I love the way you wrote Nick going into a "vision", so to speak, of him being present during a shooting that happened in the restaurant it seems. And how he connected back with the presence, and still couldn't separate the two. Man... he's got a lot of explaining to do I suppose for shouting what he did! "/



Author's Response: Why do we keep loving the same lines? LOL . For the record, I love Leighanne! :) Blame it to Nick, he was the one who decided that Michael isn't a good guy after all. lol. It was the first vision he saw and thought it was really happening. Poor Nick. I hope you won't get tired of my Thank Yous.... :)

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 10/23/11 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Andrea

Poor Nick... to have people's eyes on and think you're crazy is not a cool feeling! Especially when what you're going through would be enough to make ANYONE feel like they're going crazy!

But, ahh... this is THE Andrea! So, I guess Nick was right with his uneasy feelings of Michael! And totally random, but reading how spiritual this story is, you would've been the perfect collab person I could have asked to work with me on my Archangels story! ^_^ Lol. But anywho, this is all getting so interesting!

Of course, I'm still in love with this story and I seriously can't WAIT for the next chapter!! ^_^



Author's Response: Yep poor confused Nick. I really hope Andrea would help him not make him more confused. :) Can I favorite this review? LOL. If you have asked me to write that story with you, I would have turned it down because you write that story so perfectly well, and I would just ruin it. :) Thank you for ALL your amazing reviews.... hope you'll be with me until the end of the story. :) *hugs*