Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed
Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Wine Me, Dine Me, 69 Me
Scandalous!!! I am getting so wrapped up in this. Something about affairs is just so.. gah, I love it! Nick and Alyssa kissing in the basement was hot hot hot! I wonder where this will lead? Oh man, this is awesome. You're doing a great job with this Mel, I'm totally absorbed. Keep it up darlin!
I think its like Kim said in the last chapter. I think the reason why people find affairs so hot is totally the fantasy aspect. It's knowing that it's forbidden and I guess the risk of being caught. It's the whole temptation that's in front of you too. Like you know its wrong, but you can't stop and then it just escalates and snowballs until it becomes almost an addiction. Not that I condone having one, but this situation is a little more unique as you'll see as the story progresses. There will be a lot of "grey" areas.
I'm glad you enjoyed the kissing scene. I was SOOOO proud of that because looking back on like UMS and stuff I always fought for ways to describe kissing scenes and a lot of them came out sounding a lil lame. I knew this moment called for something like WHOA and I'm glad that I was able to pull that off. Even my beta was impressed and she writes some of the hottest sex scenes I ever read lol. So, hopefully I can keep up that level of intensity. Thanks Saka!