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This is another story, written by me. It was for an April Fool's challenge, where we had to write under a different screen name.

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Permanent Tracings by sweet18_2003 Rated: PG-13 Liked [ - ]
Summary: After sinking in to a deep depression, one of the Boys starts a terrible habit of cutting himself. He hides it well and keeps it secret from the world as well as his best friends. Will the other Boys find out on time and be able to help their friend before it is too late?






Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group
Genres: Drama, Suspense
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Graphic Violence, Violence
 Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 26525
Read Count: 39827


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Published: 07/12/04 » Updated: 08/10/05
Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue

NO HOWIE...BAD...BAD BOY! *gives him big hug* aaaw, you can talk to me!

lol, very good story! I am off to the sequal...what is it...mirror something? oh well, I'll figure it out. *grin*

Author's Response: Awww...thank you so much *hugs* You made me cry happy tears!!! *sniffle* I'm glad you enjoyed this one.  It means a lot to me.

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! *freaks out*

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine

*sigh* I still can't offer much for critisism because this perticular story has me captured. I guess that I wouldn't see flaws if they were present because I am so wrapped up in it, lol.

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

now I knew that they had to make Nick look like a fool, lmao. I would like to see that tabloid cover! I am growing increasingly worried over our cutter's emotional state. Someone needs a therapist or something to help deal...this isn't healthy!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six

sounds more like a biography than a fan fic, lol. it seems so real! I can't believe Kris and Kev are coming to an end! oh the drama! those poor guys :-(

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

blizzards suck!!!!! I know the snowed in feeling, lol. I am still intrigued, you have a good attention to detail but don't sacrifice the needed dialoge. *smiles*

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

intense much? It is a bit depressing to read about someone going through that but yet it is good to show that the Boys have flaws, emotions, and problems too. (besides romance related issues) after all, they ARE human, too. good job!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

uhoh. I started with this one because I saw that it has a sequal (which is also complete) becasue I am impatient when it comes to waiting for updates *blush*

But, so far, I like your writting styls and I am already drawn into the story.

It Stays With You by Mare Rated: PG-13 Liked [ - ]
Summary: In 1996 while on a mini tour in Philadelphia Brian and Nick after playing an innocent game of basketball encounter something that will forever change both of thier lives as well as the rest of the group. Told from Brian's Point of view. Suspense PG13 - R
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian, Nick, Group
Genres: Suspense
Warnings: Violence, Graphic Violence
 Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 70637
Read Count: 84299


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Published: 09/18/04 » Updated: 02/22/05
Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 08/01/11 Title: Chapter 30: 30

WOW! I made it through the whole story! Yay me! Whoot, whoot! As you know, I'd never have read this, if it weren't for the challenge...so I'm glad I participated. You're a good story teller, Mare...cuz I really feel like you were depicting a true story, as if you knew them and were around when it happened...which I knopw you were presenting yourself as Brian, so I guess in a weird twisted kind of fictional way, you WERE there, LOL! Anyways...good story. I've gotta go fill out the survey thingy now. :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this Kristal! I really appreciate it. I know it's not exactly in your comfort zone but I hope it made you a semi fan of the genre at least? LOL I promise I don't always maime the boys. Mentally torture on occasion but most of my stories are actually dramadies. Thanks again!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 08/01/11 Title: Chapter 26: 26

You gotta be kidding me! The same hotel too?!? What are the flippin odds?! I'd flat out refuse to go in...like...take me somewhere else! I'd sleep in a freakin McDonald's booth...or in the corner of a dang gas station, LOL!

Author's Response:

I know! That was plain cruel on my part, but I figured I might as well go with it. I mean what other form of torture was left? LOL

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 08/01/11 Title: Chapter 24: 24

Go freakin' figure...they just HAD to end up back there, didn't they? I can't even imagine how nerve wracking that would be! I'd be flipping out, big time! I'm not entirely surprised Brian wrote to that doctor...but I didn't expect himt o actually ask about him. I guess that it made him feel a little less guilty about the whole incident...I know I'd feel terrible for nearly ruining someone's life and/or career over something that didn't even turn out to be real. Anywasy...still enjoying the story.

Author's Response:

Once again I didn't remember where you meant by back there, then I thought maybe it was Philly? I had totally forgotten I had them go back there at the end. I have such a bad memory. LOL Sometimes i'm like "Did I write this?"

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 07/20/11 Title: Chapter 1: 1

Oh dear...what have I gotten myself into?! *hides under my bed* So far it seems to flow well...other than there are a few things you word differently than I would, so I have to pause and re-read it, LOL. But that's not anything you can really fix, now is it? I didn't think so. Now...why is it that men always act all big and bold but then turn to puddles of goop when a situation like this arrives? I mean...where is the guy that stands up and kicks the bad guy's butt? Well obviously we know that guy isn't in the room with Brian and Nick, now don't we? Ha! Ok...I'm off to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Yeah, this isn't really a fluffy bunnies and rainbows type story. That's why I picked this one for the challenge. If you get creeped out easily it's probably best to read it during the day. I would probably turn into a pile of goop myself if that happened to me. LOL poor guys. I do torture them in this one. Thanks Kristal!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 07/20/11 Title: Chapter 2: 2

My tummy is twisting, LOL! I want to stop reading...I know I'm gonna have messed up dreams...but I can't...I'm hooked...I gotta find out what happened! Is Nicky ok? What did the guy do to him? Why did the guy do it to begin with? What the HECK is going on?!? *whines and goes to the next chapter*

Author's Response:

Eep! Sorry, hope you don't dream about this tonight. Like I told Erika, I'm a big cliffhanger type person, just wanring you ahead of time. lol

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 07/20/11 Title: Chapter 3: 3

AAAAAAAAAAH! Ok...there goes any and all chance of me ever watching Star Wars again. Thanks Mare. :-P I'm so happy I didn't start reading this last night. I'm a weirdo when it comes to this stuff...*shudders yet again*...you may or may not be happy to know that this will DEFINITELY be invading my dreams tonight. I'm anxious to see what happens though. Oh...right...I'm supposed to be reviewing the story not just freaking out about what's happening. Well um...it's written well and I don't detect anything wrong with it...except the tummy ache it's giving me. LMFAO!

Author's Response:

LOL I have no idea what you're talking about with Star Wars. It's been so long since i've written this one, I am going to have to go skim to see what you're talking about. No worries, I enjoy reading your reactions more so than concrit every chapter. The suspense person in me enjoys the reactions. Thanks for reading it Kristal. I hope you realy enjoy it.

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 07/20/11 Title: Chapter 4: 4

Really? Really?!? Oh dear heaven...the writing is good...you have a good way of making people see what you're writing. I definitely picture it all in my mind. And now I'm going to take a break from reading because my poor tummy is SO queasy! I'll be back later. :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment Kristal!