Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 07/01/09
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
OMFG!!! I nearly fell out of my chair, when I saw this update! You just made my entire night!
I can't believe after all this, that Jack never even had what they were demanding! How the hell could Jenkins be holding something like that? He actually stole that shit, from the evidence stuff? That's just plain INSANE! I want to deck that fucker in the mouth, right about now! How could he put himself, his family, and others in danger, like that? The stupid fucker!
Now what is with Jacklex accussing Crys, like that? He should know better, than that! He knows how much she loves him! Then he made her strip?!? UGH! Jacklex...seriously?!? I liked how she did it, though...throwing her clothes at him, and getting all snippy. I think I would have been tearing, too.
I thought it was oh sooooo smooth how he then laid the mack down, on her. Isn't that just like a man...ok...maybe not all men, but it sure IS like Jack...make her strip down to nothing, because you don't trust her, and then decide you want to suck face? I can't imagine what is going on, in her head, right about now! It has to be a total mix of emotions...hurt, offended, pissed, but yet relishing in the kiss. *sigh* Oh, to kiss Jack! LOL.
There weren't too many typos or anything, so you were pretty good there. I still completely LOVE the story and Jack. I miss you and Jacklex...I'm so bummed that all your stuff is getting cut off, it's SO not fair! I was hoping you'd be able to still get on Twitter or something.
Anyways...I'm sad that you can't update for a while, but am SO hoping it's sooner that you expect. You are an amazing writer and I love reading your stories, espescially SD and UD!! Keep writing, while you're disconnected, so you can UPDATE as soon as you get the net back!
P.S. I was all happy about being the first to review, but after getting longwinded, I don't know that I'll still be the first, lmao.