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Undying Devotion by kevmylove Rated: R [ - ]
Summary:

( Sequal to Sinister Devotion) Crystal thought Jack was dead...and she was right. Jack did die that fateful day, at the farm; however, Alex McLean is still alive and kicking. He's got a new life, but the past, still seems to haunt him. What he doesn't know, is what is in store for him, now.

 

~~ON HIATUS~~

 


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ
Genres: Action, Alternate Universe, Romance
Warnings: Death, Domestic Violence, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content, Violence
Series: Jacklex Series
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 28457
Read Count: 26981


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Published:
04/03/09 » Updated: 04/02/12
Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 07/01/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

OMFG!!! I nearly fell out of my chair, when I saw this update! You just made my entire night!

I can't believe after all this, that Jack never even had what they were demanding! How the hell could Jenkins be holding something like that? He actually stole that shit, from the evidence stuff? That's just plain INSANE! I want to deck that fucker in the mouth, right about now! How could he put himself, his family, and others in danger, like that? The stupid fucker!

Now what is with Jacklex accussing Crys, like that? He should know better, than that! He knows how much she loves him! Then he made her strip?!? UGH! Jacklex...seriously?!? I liked how she did it, though...throwing her clothes at him, and getting all snippy. I think I would have been tearing, too.

I thought it was oh sooooo smooth how he then laid the mack down, on her. Isn't that just like a man...ok...maybe not all men, but it sure IS like Jack...make her strip down to nothing, because you don't trust her, and then decide you want to suck face? I can't imagine what is going on, in her head, right about now! It has to be a total mix of emotions...hurt, offended, pissed, but yet relishing in the kiss. *sigh* Oh, to kiss Jack! LOL.

There weren't too many typos or anything, so you were pretty good there. I still completely LOVE the story and Jack. I miss you and Jacklex...I'm so bummed that all your stuff is getting cut off, it's SO not fair! I was hoping you'd be able to still get on Twitter or something.

Anyways...I'm sad that you can't update for a while, but am SO hoping it's sooner that you expect. You are an amazing writer and I love reading your stories, espescially SD and UD!! Keep writing, while you're disconnected, so you can UPDATE as soon as you get the net back!

P.S. I was all happy about being the first to review, but after getting longwinded, I don't know that I'll still be the first, lmao.

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/05/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I'm a bit tired, after our long ass trip, to leave a long ass review, tonight. LOL. But I will say the chapter came out VERY well and that I still have love for Ja...I mean Alex!*grin* I'm looking forward to the next chapter...I hope it will be up soon!

Author's Response: Aw I knew you were tired that day...and I love all your reviews no matter what. Haha...I still have the name issue too, I'm so used to Jack, it's weird. T/hank you. love ya!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

*dances around screaming* I knew I could talk you into posting this sequel! I am so happy and excited...it's going to be great! *MUAH* We'll have to get crackin on the next chapter, right away!

Author's Response: You are too funny woman. Thanks for helping me out with this. I'm excited too. woot for Jack...damn it, I mean Alex. Thanks love!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/18/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Jacklex and the beach?!? Now I've seen everything! His life has drastically changed, hasn't it? I see that even as he gets intimate...well, as intimate as he gets...with Yelina, he's still thinking of Crys. I can't imagine how hard it would be, to be in that situation. Now he's seeing and hearing things, too? Man, my nerves would be on edge, BIG TIME! It's kind of good that he has the 6th sense, when it comes to his surroundings. He's sensitive to everything around him and I have a feeling that it will come in handy awfully soon!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/18/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Hot damn! What the hell?!? First they are being followed and then he walks in, finding the house in shambles? I would be fucking PISSED OFF...and as everyone knows...things that piss normal people off, REAAAAAALLY piss Jacklex off!!!

Looks like his past has caught up to him! That, definitely, can't be good! Sure, I'm lucky enough to know what's going on, who, and why, but it's still like WTF?!? So often, in life, things don't turn out to be what they seem, and it really can throw you for a loop!

I'm biting my nails, now, because it is obvious that someone wants something, from him! Poor Yelina, is in the mix, too, and so they are both in danger. I sure hope they are able to avoid getting hurt, or worse! (Yes, Jacklex, I mean her too!) We know that his past is a dark one, and anyone from his past showing up, is bad. I don't think any of them did all that, just to give him a birthday card and a hug!

Here is where we start seeing the action, again! I'm both excited and nervous...with a hint of anxiousness. I need to know what's going on and what's going to happen! Preferably NOW WOMAN!!! Love ya, girl!

P.S. - Sorry it took so long, to review, Jacklex...you know I could never forget you! LOVE YOU.

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/19/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

OMFG! That came out awesome, Erika! I didn't think you would get it finished, after I left last night! I thought you were going to bed, too. Oh...wait...Jacklex was probably snoring so loud that you couldn't sleep, huh? LOL. He got the action, though!

What do they want? It's sad that Yelina got hurt, so badly! Poor girl...and she doesn't even know what the hell, is going on! Why are the the bad guys always such assholes?

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 05/02/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

DAMN...it's just one thing right after another, for poos Alex, isn't it?!? I kinda feel bad for Yelina, still...seeing as it's not her fault and all. I wonder what is going on, with the blond...I can't imagine Crys as a killer, UNLESS she has a really damn good reason! Maybe it IS her and she DOES have a good reason? I just know there is something going on, that is WAAAAAAAY bigger than Jacklex expects! I can't wait for the next chapter...things are really starting to build up and get good...not that Jacklex was ever NOT good, but you know what I mean. LOL. So yeah...UPDATE soon, and don't let my man be hurt TOO badly, in that accident you left off with.

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 06/09/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

LMFAO...it's so good that you didn't go with my ideas! *cracks up* But I liked that you still used the part about him covering his junk, it was great! I cracked up just as much as when I came up with it...I liked your scenario, of how it happened, better than mine tho. I think the chapter came out well...as always, I was sitting on the edge of my seat, wondering how Jacklex was going to get them out of it. Update again soon, please!

Author's Response: Well I did kinda used some of your idea. Haha Yeah the covering his junk, really made me laugh. Haha...well actually Crystal kinda saved his ass. I shall update very soon. You'll be the first to know member. lol!!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 11/15/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Oh gee, that was so nice of you, to stick a bomb on her wrist! Hmmm...I'm curious as to how Jacklex will handle this one. Is he just gonna say "fuck it" and let her blow? Or is he gonna man up to his feelings and do whatever he has to, to save her? GAH! You always keep me on the edge of my seat woman! I sure hope you will update again soon! Please? I will beg, if I have to...you know I will!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/03/12 Title: Chapter 15: Sorry...

I don't get on to AC very often anymore since I'm now working 2 jobs and all...but when I do, I see this on most recent and get all excited...then this is all I get. *pouts*

Author's Response:

Wow!! I am amazed you got on AC. I really miss seeing you around. Maybe if someday you have the time I can bring this back alive. Jack can't work without his muse :(

 

Honey and Almonds by Chaos Rated: R [ - ]
Summary: Tony shows up at Abby's a little after 2:00am. Wanting...needing...
Categories: Fanfiction > TV Series > NCIS
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Tony DiNozzo
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2474
Read Count: 723


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Published:
04/25/09 » Updated: 04/25/09
Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 04/25/09 Title: Chapter 1: Honey and Almonds

Very Nice, Ash!

Author's Response: Thanks! =)

Straight Through My Heart by ResaD Rated: R [ - ]
Summary: Past Featured StoryOnce upon a time...Alex and Kris were best friends. But they grew up, moved away, and as the story goes, life happened. Now Alex just got engaged to Theresa, but as he goes on vacation, he meets up with Kris. Shocked isn't even the word that either one would describe at seeing each other. Could an old love brew again?

Thank you to Kris for the banner!
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Group
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 60183
Read Count: 92190


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Published:
08/03/09 » Updated: 07/24/13
Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 10/10/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WOW! Is it me or are feelings getting heated inside Alex? And he's engaged? To his best friend's other best friend? But none of them know that his best friend is his fiance's best friend? And then his old feelings for his best friend are resurfacing? and she is supposed to be the maid of honor in his wedding, but he doesn't know because they are all unaware that his best friend is her best friend? So then he is falling (again) for his fiance's best friend which was originally his best friend to begin with, that he now just got reunited with? His best friend is her best friend that he is in love with? So that means that he is not only falling in love with his life long best friend, but his woman's best friend? And he is lying to his fiance about his best friend because he has feelings that he doesn't want to fess up to? Now, Howie is lying, for Alex, too? I'm thinking Alex is gonna either die, or get his balls chopped off!

*takes a breath*

What a story! I can't wait to see what is goig to happen! Maybe Theresa will end up going after his best friend since he went after hers....but then it's still not quite the same because he fell for her best friend which is also his. And I am making my head hurt! Ha ha! Well I hope that you are able to update as soon as you get back from vacay...since I assume vacay means no updatey. *pout*

I WANT MORE!
That is all.

Author's Response: Honey...you made MY HEAD hurt! Dang girlie! but thank you for that...ever...wonderful and confusing review, lmao! and to answer your question(s)..uh...YES! Because I got lost after the second question! lmao! But...I do want to know that I was thinking of some things on Vacay so...my butt should be writing here for ya, so i'm hoping to have some updates rather soon ;) and i'm very happy you're loving the story, thank you!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 09/19/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

**jaw drops** OH MY GOD! Kris is...with him....and her...and then...WOW! I smell a love triangle! **squee** You better....better...BETTER...now wait so damn long to update with the next chapter! I have net back so I expect updates at least four days a week....you got that? You wouldn't want me to put you through withdrawls...now would you?!? I didn't think so! So get cracking on it woman!

Author's Response: HAHA...so damn funny! Thank you! And yes...one huge as triangle...if not a square....but that all depends! So, i am hoping update...let's just pray that writing bug is back and not giving me tons of problems! HA! So many ideas...and no bug is never a good thing! ;)

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 08/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The beginning is cute! I wonder why he questions marrying Theresa? A year isn't really that long...he could have waited longer before asking. Maybe he's just nervous. I'm interested to see what's going to happen...him being reunited with his best friend! UPDATE woman!

Author's Response: LMAO! Well, I'm glad you're enjoying it and you left a review...yay! Hmm...I'm thinking he's nervous too. But, oh, let the drama begin...it's so early on in the story too...dang, lmao!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 08/05/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really enjoying it, thus far. You've got an interesting plot line here...well...a different twist on a cliche plot! But I gotta admit...the whole best friends falling in love thing is my favorite cliche! *grin*

But how can Kris not realize that her Alexander is the man her best friend is engaged to? Why couldn't he mention Kris, to Theresa? What is going on inside that man's brain? And how is it that Howie is already getting vibes about the relationship between Alex and kris? Oh girl, you should update!

Author's Response: YAY! You like it, you like it! *does a happy dance and wips forehead* so glad you do girlie! So, on to the story, Kris doesn't realize...oh, wait, it's in Chapter 3 hon! Lmao! Which yes, I am working on, should have it edited and updated *checks watch* within another week ;) And as for Alex...he's just being Alex, so diffcult! How D knows about Alex's feelings, *shrugs* it's D. But I promise you, more is coming and you'll like! And thank you for the review ;)