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This is another story, written by me. It was for an April Fool's challenge, where we had to write under a different screen name.

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Straight Through My Heart by ResaD Rated: R [ - ]
Summary: Past Featured StoryOnce upon a time...Alex and Kris were best friends. But they grew up, moved away, and as the story goes, life happened. Now Alex just got engaged to Theresa, but as he goes on vacation, he meets up with Kris. Shocked isn't even the word that either one would describe at seeing each other. Could an old love brew again?

Thank you to Kris for the banner!
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Group
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 60183
Read Count: 92186


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Published:
08/03/09 » Updated: 07/24/13
Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 01/30/13 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Yay! I think I'm all caught up on reviews! I'm just sorry it took me so long!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 06/09/13 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Obviously I'm behind here! I don't get on here nearly enough. I'm antsy to find out what else I have missed!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 06/09/13 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

....it's gettin good! LOL! It'd be so much easier if everyone just threw their true feelings out on the table. But I guess you wouldn't have a story if they did that. HA!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 06/09/13 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

*face palm* REALLY?!?

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 06/09/13 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I really dislike Kris...just so you know.

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 06/09/13 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Kris is a fucking bitch! I take that back...she's worse than that! Who gives a damn who the hell she loves or how much?!? She needs to keep her damn legs shut! What a slut! And to do that to her best friend?!? As if she deserves Resa's friendship...or anyone else's! People like that make me sick to my stomach. Kris...better lose both AJ and Resa. Karma comes back around and you can bet Kris is gonna be wishing like hell that she kept her pants on! Stupid homewrecker. And Resa actually loving Howie and not AJ...does not, for any reason, give a good excuse for this. Ugh. Ok...I'm done ranting. Nicely written tho. :-)

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Thank you to evergreenwriter83 for the banner

*THIRD in the Nick and Amanda series!* Meet Nick Carter, a rockstar with a big heart. He has always done what his heart has told him...and it has never led him wrong until now. All it took was one night. One night that would change his life forever.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Other, Nick, Howie, Group, Brian, AJ
Genres: Supernatural, Romance, Drama, Angst, Alternate Universe
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Content, Domestic Violence, Death, Child Abuse
Series: Nick And Amanda Series
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 50410
Read Count: 108746


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08/13/09 » Updated: 06/22/11
Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 02/11/10 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

You know I started reading yesterday, and I just finished.

While reading I did get a little confused/lost in a few areas. I think it's because there were a few transitions that were a tad choppy. These spots weren't bad, but could have used just a little extra something to make things flow smoother.

As far as characters, I feel that you have developed Nick's character more than any of the others. This may just be a personal preference, but I would have liked to see Amanda, and maybe a few other characters, developed a little more.

Overall, the story is cute. I didn't see many spelling or grammar errors and although a bit cliche, you put some interesting twists to the story line. I can tell you have fun writing it, and that's the most important thing because it helps the readers become more interested.

So...with that said...WRITE ON SISTA! And keep having fun with it! I'll watch for the next update!

Author's Response: Awww thank you so much Krystal!! Now my response is gonna be a bit long lol. Nick is the main character, so I have his personality and everything developed a lot more. Now the reason for Amanda not being as developed is because I am planning on writing a prequel to this story....Amanda is going to be featured more. I will try to put more of the others in there as the story goes. I got a lot planned for this one, so don't worry. I will try to explain everything. I really appreciate that you read this and gave me a detailed review because most people don't. Reviews actually help me a lot, and this is the first romance I have ever written, so I could really use people's feedback. Thanks for reading! ;)

Ten Things by Carter-Orange Rated: R [ - ]
Summary:

 

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Meet Steph, she's just turned 25 and thinks she's suffering a quarter-century crisis!  Everyone around her seems to have life all figured out and she feels left behind.  After a drunken night out, she comes up with a list of things she'd like to do...before she's 30!


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Brian, Group, Howie, Kevin, Nick, Other
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 72630
Read Count: 99349


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Published:
11/17/09 » Updated: 08/23/10
Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 02/24/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Alright, Steph...I've finally gotten around to starting this story! I'm interested to see what happens.

Author's Response: Hope you enjoy reading it Kristal :)

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 02/24/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This sounds like something I need to do! I'll be 26 this year and I'm having my own little crisis! I'm liking this so far, so on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 02/24/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice going! I did that one just recently...without the finger, LOL...it feels so good, too! So far, so good Steph. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 02/25/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Waking up married to AJ?!?!?! Now THAT is a night I want! DAMN!

Author's Response: Oh me too!  Thanks for reading Kristal :)

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 02/25/10 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Ok so yeah...now that I'm reading...and addicted...that means you have to update like ALL THE TIME! *squee* I'm totally digging it Steph!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Kristal, so glad you are enjoying it, more on the way soon :)

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 05/13/10 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

OMG!!!! Are you trying to put me in early labor?!? I bet that the preceding statement from AJ was more like "I don't want to end the marriage." or "I want her to stay my wife." And here she is thinking that he wants to break up. but then what would be the point of the story, if they just ended like that? It's like those TV shows that goes to a commercial before the person does a death defying stunt...you know they will survive, otherwise it wouldn't be on TV. Right? Right! So now the question is...what the hell is he gonna do to fix it? I mean she isn't going to just TELL him that she overheard. I'm guessing she will just start acting like SHE doesn't want HIM or will just avoid him at all costs...because she doesn't want to actually hear him say that he doesn't want her...even though I know that it's ending the marriage that he doesn't want. Have I rambled enough? If you don't update soon, I will be forced to ramble more and bug the life outta ya. So get right on the next chapter, woman! Oh yeah....and I still love ya Steph! *big grin*

Author's Response: Are you in my head Kristal? lol.  Thanks for reading and I'm so glad you are still enjoying it.  Hope you're OK and got over the sickness stage now x

Summary:

For Krista Hemmings winning the NASCAR championship is everything. But when AJ McLean, a young rookie, shows up to give her a run for her money, Krista must decide what's more important: love or war. Winner takes all in this story about the inner workings of one of today's most popular sports.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ
Genres: Action, Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 15928
Read Count: 23203


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Published:
05/04/10 » Updated: 05/04/10
Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 05/04/10 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

I'm a sucker for AJ romance...so if you got any more, post 'em. LOL. I don't write much romance, but I like reading it, no matter how old, cheesy, cliche, or whatever...if it's AJ, I'm there! HA! This story though, I thought was really cute. I was about to freak, thinking you off'd him at the end. LOL. I'm not a Nascar fan, so I liked that you had the detail about the tracks because otherwise, I never would have known. The plot was sweet and I liked the different take on the old hate to love concept. I think you're a good writer and hope I see more AJ stuff. *grin*

Author's Response: AJ is the second hardest boy for me to write about...Kevin being the first. But, after I finish With the Band, who knows what will come to mind! :) Thanks for reviewing

Shades Of Gray by summer Rated: R [ - ]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Life doesn't always give you what you want. Sometimes it gives you what you need...rather you realize it or not.


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 188386
Read Count: 72738


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Published:
05/07/10 » Updated: 01/01/12
Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed
Date: 07/17/10 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

Ok seriously...I'm not sure if anyone else has mentioned it yet, but I've had this gut feeling since Renee announced she was pregnant....and now that it's a 'son' when it's way too early to tell, just confirms in my mind that Renee is SO FAKING THIS PREGNANCY! I got 20 bucks that says she made the whole story up, just because she was pissed about Brielle and thought that if she was pregnant, Alex would forget about Brielle and stay with her. So now you just need to keep on updating so I can confirm that I'm right, LOL. ;-)

Author's Response: Yay, you're reading this story! I'm so glad you are and I hope you like it. I've missed your wonderful reviews lol, they always made me smile. I wish I could comment on your thoughts with Renee and her pregnancy, but then I'd give too much away. I can continue to update though so you can find out. Thanks again! :)