Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Brian, Nick
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sexual Content
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Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 44158
Read Count: 49957
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Summary: In a vain effort to get ex girlfriends and annoying boys off their backs, Nick and Danica forge a fake relationship. But when the two of them start to fall for each other for real, things start to get a little more complicated than they bargained for..
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Brian, Nick
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 44158
Read Count: 49957
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Brian, Nick
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 44158
Read Count: 49957
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Published: 07/17/08 » Updated: 05/17/10
Published: 07/17/08 » Updated: 05/17/10
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 07/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: One: 'Till The End
Date: 07/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: One: 'Till The End
Great start...yay you are writing again! More soon, I am interested to read this puppy! Hugs!
Author's Response: Thanks hun! Yes I am writing again, hopefully this one comes out easily haha.
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 07/31/08 Title: Chapter 2: Two: Hatching A Plan
Date: 07/31/08 Title: Chapter 2: Two: Hatching A Plan
A plan!!! I can't wait to read more. I think you are doing an awesome job writing from the first person, I think it is so hard to do well! Keep up the good work, update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks hun! I'm glad you think I'm doing a good job at first person, because I used to struggle with it a lot. It's fun getting inside the characters heads though :)
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 08/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Three: Leave It Up To Me
Date: 08/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Three: Leave It Up To Me
OK...loved this from Nick's POV! And so it begins...can't wait to read more once the scheme gets in full swing! Great job, hun!
Author's Response: Thanks girlie! I am going to be alternating from Nick and Dani's POV each chapter :) Things should start to get interesting once the break the news to the others.. ;)
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 08/12/08 Title: Chapter 4: Four: Girlfriend
Date: 08/12/08 Title: Chapter 4: Four: Girlfriend
So cute...I love the interaction between Nick and Dani...and boy, they don't do anything halfass! I must say that all of the food talk in the beginning made me hungry, and its only 8:30am lol...
Author's Response: Thanks darlin! They really are giving this their all, haha. Could you tell I was craving BK as I wrote this? lol
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 08/28/08 Title: Chapter 5: Five: Scandalicious
Date: 08/28/08 Title: Chapter 5: Five: Scandalicious
I'm finally catching up, sorry I have been a bad friend and haven't read your updates! I love the bros before hoes line...I crack up everytime someone says that! Great job hun, so funny...onto the next...
Author's Response: Thanks hun! You're not a bad friend at all, everyone has been so busy this summer I totally understand :) I love the bros before hoes too LOL a guy at my work said it, so I just had to use it.
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 08/28/08 Title: Chapter 6: Six: Keeping it Inside is Killing Me
Date: 08/28/08 Title: Chapter 6: Six: Keeping it Inside is Killing Me
Wowza...Dani is a hot commodity. I can't believe she blew her cover so quickly and easily. I can smell the drama you so love coming! Great job, hun...update soon!
Author's Response: Yes she is hehe! I guess her telling Brian right away shows how guilty she feels about actually hurting someone she cares about, but that doesn't mean there won't be drama to the extreme! Thanks Darby! *muah*
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 08/28/08 Title: Chapter 7: Seven: On The Rise
Date: 08/28/08 Title: Chapter 7: Seven: On The Rise
Of course! Glad to be of assistance! You are on a roll!
Author's Response: Thanks! Let's hope it continues!
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 09/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: Eight: Drawn to the Fire
Author's Response: Yay drama! I had that whole paragraph of it hitting her randomly written in my head since I started this story hehe. You're right, I do love the drama hahaha and trust me, there will be plenty! I'm glad you found it.. and I never get e-mail updates from the site when my favourites get updated so don't feel bad =P Thanks for all the lovely comments Darby! :o) I'm off to read your update now!
Date: 09/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: Eight: Drawn to the Fire
OOOH...I sense drama! I must say I didn't expect our Dani to start falling so fast...and I love the way it just hit her so suddenly. I can't wait to see what kind of drama comes from the Brian situation, because I know you...and you LURVE the drama!
I don't know how I missed this until now...I was going through recent updates and there it was...I know this story is on my faves (cuz you are one of my faves) and I never got an email...wtf? Can't wait for more!!! Hugs!
Author's Response: Yay drama! I had that whole paragraph of it hitting her randomly written in my head since I started this story hehe. You're right, I do love the drama hahaha and trust me, there will be plenty! I'm glad you found it.. and I never get e-mail updates from the site when my favourites get updated so don't feel bad =P Thanks for all the lovely comments Darby! :o) I'm off to read your update now!
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 09/22/08 Title: Chapter 9: Nine: Totally Oblivious
Date: 09/22/08 Title: Chapter 9: Nine: Totally Oblivious
I love the back and forth, and Nick's processing of the events...poor, dense boy. You are doing a great job with the first person and I love the alternation between perspectives. Great job hun! Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Darby! I'm glad you like the first person, it's fun to write it this way, even though it can be difficult at times. :)
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 09/23/08 Title: Chapter 10: Ten: Cause and Effect
Date: 09/23/08 Title: Chapter 10: Ten: Cause and Effect
Boys will be boys...but that little sneak attack on the kiss, how unexpected. Dani is in trouble. Can't wait for more hun!
Author's Response: Thanks hun! Yeah, leave it to Nick to do something completely random like that. Dani is definitely falling fast, I'll try to write more soon :)
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 09/24/08 Title: Chapter 11: Eleven: Back-Up Plan
Author's Response: Thanks Darby! I'm glad you noticed Nick's internal monologue about not wanting Dani for himself. You're right, it does seem like he's trying to convince himself that he doesn't have feelings for her. We'll have to see how it plays out. He is definitely cocky! Trying to prove AJ wrong could potentially lead to a messy situation. Glad you liked it :)
Date: 09/24/08 Title: Chapter 11: Eleven: Back-Up Plan
OK...I noticed something in this chapter, it is like Nick is always reassuring himself by saying things like "Besides, it's not like I wanted her for myself. Nope, not at all." - is he trying to convince himself or remind himself that he doesn't have any feelings for her? HMMMM...
The kiss, now his POV was TOTALLY different that Dani's...and he is a cocky little shit. I am interested to see how far he will go to prove to AJ that he can get her into bed.
Keep up the good work hun...great stuff! Hug!
Author's Response: Thanks Darby! I'm glad you noticed Nick's internal monologue about not wanting Dani for himself. You're right, it does seem like he's trying to convince himself that he doesn't have feelings for her. We'll have to see how it plays out. He is definitely cocky! Trying to prove AJ wrong could potentially lead to a messy situation. Glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 10/19/08 Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen: It's Not Awkward...
Author's Response: Nick's definitely silly. Thanks Darby, you're awesome! AC never e-mails me for updates from my favourites either..grr!
Date: 10/19/08 Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen: It's Not Awkward...
YAY! An update...I just found this, I am not getting my emails for some reason!!! I love Nick's inner monolouge...boys...so silly!
Great stuff, can't wait for more, hun! Hugs!
Author's Response: Nick's definitely silly. Thanks Darby, you're awesome! AC never e-mails me for updates from my favourites either..grr!
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 11/18/08 Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen: Dinner Date
Date: 11/18/08 Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen: Dinner Date
YAY, an update! How could I forget about that sneaky little Brian...Nick needs to remove his head from his you know what and get hip to the program here! I love the way you are writing this...you know that I think first person is tough to do well but you are doing a fantastic job. Keep it up!!! Hugs!
Author's Response: Yeah Brian is a sneaky mcsneakerson lol! Nick better figure out what he's going to do, or he might just lose her to Brian after all. But of course, we'll see more of what he thinks next chapter. Which is irritating, because I know we all want to read (and I want to write) about Dani's lunch date. Oh well, it'll come soon. Thanks Darby, muah!
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 01/22/09 Title: Chapter 15: Fifteen: Raise Your Glass
Author's Response: Thanks Darby! I definitely have a lot of fun writing in first person! Yeah, Dani does have all these guy who want her, but I think her focus really is on Nick and what he wants. We'll have to see what happens though, she might surprise you! I agree, yay for hump day updates! I'm so excited to see that you updated as well! :)
Date: 01/22/09 Title: Chapter 15: Fifteen: Raise Your Glass
I have told you this like a million times, but I love the way you write first person...it is so realistic and it really sounds the way I know I think. You are very talented!
It just occurred to me that Dani has 3 men hot for her, she is extremely cool considering, obviously a little bit freaky because of the Nick situation, but still hanging tough.
I can't wait for more! YAY for Hump Day Updates! Hugs!
Author's Response: Thanks Darby! I definitely have a lot of fun writing in first person! Yeah, Dani does have all these guy who want her, but I think her focus really is on Nick and what he wants. We'll have to see what happens though, she might surprise you! I agree, yay for hump day updates! I'm so excited to see that you updated as well! :)
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 02/04/09 Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen: First Date
Date: 02/04/09 Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen: First Date
Dani cracks me up! She is so skitzy, which I love...poor thing has been riled up for a while now. Hopefully she will get her equilibrium back. I was secretly hoping that Nick caught a glimpse of the kiss and maybe didn't like it so much??? We shall see...can't wait for more, good stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks Darby! Dani is so fun to write, her thoughts are always so jumbled and confusing. I love that you were hoping for Nick to see them kiss. Maybe he did, we'll have to see next chapter! I'm glad you liked it hun! :)
