Reviewer: cabybakes Signed
Date: 05/29/08
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32
Ahhhh...what an amazingly frustrating chapter. So close...yet so far. I totally understand why, but I am still frustrated that they can't just admit their feelings!!!
I love Nick and the ice cream...hilarious, reminds me of how we (as in gals) are when it comes to this stuff. I love that he recognized the bond between the other couple and longed for that. I also love that he is wanting to put his daughter's needs first.
BUT...I want them to be together...ugh!
Update soon! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks I do try to keep you guys guessing! I know its very frustrating, it\'s frustrating for me to write! I thought the ice cream idea was what was needed. Originally it was just going to be a Nick and AJ scene but I incorperated Rachel in as well just to give it the more motherly depth. Also easier to show how Nick realises that he wants that. \r\n\r\nI should be updating either tomorrow or sometime over the weekend.\r\n\r\nThanks for posting \r\n