Drama!! I almost forgot all about this story until I got the email saying it had been updated... LOL I hda to go back and re-read it to remember what it was about and why I had favorited it, other than the fact that you wrote it. Now I remember! I can't wait for another chapter now! This one was great, especially the end - dying to find out more!

Author's Response: LOL....yeah since I had initially wrote it back in 2007. I had to re-read it myself! Thanks for the feedback!!

Aw, he made a new friend! LMAO I'm starting to have some interesting suspicions about this story, but I will keep them to myself for now. I'm really curious to see where this is all leading. And poor Nick, hopefully he didn't screw up his hip too bad. Hope you update again soon!!

Author's Response: Yeah poor Nick has a new friend! LOL. I am anxious to hear your interesting suspicions about this story...you have a clever mind and probably a graphic mind when you need to! I'm glad I got your curiosity. Hopefully it is a good thing that you're thinking and I hope I won't let you down. Don't worry, Nick didn't screw up his hip too bad. He was just the receiver of some incredible bad luck over the past few days. Thanks for the feedback!

Awww... very sweet songfic; you tied the lyrics in perfectly!! The flashbacks were cute, and the whole thing seemed very real, emotions and all. Excellent job, especially for your first! Keep writing and post more stories! =D

I just got caught up on what you have posted of this story, and I have to say, it is SUCH a cool story!!! I don't usually get into fantasy, but this one really sucked me in. It's really unique and just "weird" enough to be interesting without being too bizarre. I especially love Lene - the whole concept of her projecting her child self to help Nick and growing up the entire time is so neat! I hope you update soon!!

Author's Response: Wow, it is really cool to know that other people from the boards are reading my story! :3 Great observations, by the way. I\'m happy to know that people can understand my ideas without me having to spell it out; I worry sometimes that I\'ve not been clear enough. Thanks for the awesome review. It\'s definitely got me motivated to update (still have about half a chapter left to write, though ^^;)

Ahh, I was so excited to see that this story had been updated again! And with an actual chapter this time! Whoo-hoo! It's nice to see it back, and you definitely delivered: awesome chapter!! Seeing the development of their powers is pretty cool, and the whole apple tree part was freaky! Can't wait to see where they ended up! Hope it doesn't take you two years to write the next chapter... LOL ;)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I'll try not to make you wait so long for the next one.  :O And OMG at your lightning fast review; I feel so loved (and maybe just a little whiplash, lol)

Loved it! Very cute and funny! I enjoyed the characterization and the dialogue, and how the story kept coming back to the green house, and then it turned out it was a yellow house they were standing in front of the whole time... hahaha. Like I said, funny!!

Author's Response: Thanks Julie! :* And as to why the yellow house... I just thought if I were going to be nice and have them eventually find the house, that it needed a little twist. ;)

LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!! Wow, Anita... wow. That's all I can say. That was freaking awesome! =D I'm not sure what my favorite part was... the "blow your mind" scene, or where it turns into CB hospital torture. The fried chicken thing was awesome LOL. Two extra crispy thumbs up!

Author's Response: hey jules thanks for the review you are awesome. hope you dont mind i borrowed some of your stuff

I just stumbled onto your story, and I'm intrigued by it so far! I'm dying to find out exactly what happened in those three weeks in hell. I thought maybe this was a sequel, but it doesn't look like it... so hopefully you'll update soon and solve the mystery eventually. Great job with the writing; Nick and Carrie are really cute!! Impressive debut story! =D

Author's Response: Oh wow! Julie is reviewing my story!! I\'m really flattered. I had the original story in my head but I felt more of an urge to write the \"sequel\" with the emotional drama than a prequel with action /suspense. It\'s been awhile since I\'ve updated but this might have just motivated me to write more! Thanks for reviewing!