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Real Name: Rachel Crawford |
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I've been writing fan fics for going on 12 years and I can't get enough of them! |
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Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 90579
Read Count: 91358
Published: 07/11/06 » Updated: 10/07/06
Date: 06/14/08 Title: Chapter 2: ***Thats when it happend*
This story is starting to develop. I'm liking it so far. A couple of tips:
1) Be sure to check your spelling and grammar.
2) When you're telling a story, always keep it in the same perspective. This story is obviously being told in Nick's perspective, so the details of what's going on, on Brian's end of the conversation isn't needed. Keep it in one perspective to help the reader from having any confusion as to what's going on.
Other than that, the story is great! I'm off to read the next chapter.
Date: 06/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: When its done, its done!
This is a good story, but you need to go back and fix some spelling and grammar errors. Also, Nick's full name is spelled Nickolas, not Nicholas. It's great start though!
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Kevin
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1995
Read Count: 2290
Published: 04/06/07 » Updated: 04/06/07
Date: 06/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Coffee Talk
This is a good story, but it's a little confusing as to what exactly happened to set the mood of this story. It's a little bit of an incomplete plot. There a few minor grammar errors, but other than that, this was a good story!
This is a revised version of my 2nd fan fic ABLD. The first edition was written in 2000 when I first discovered fan fic. The story takes place in my head at the beginning of the Backstreet Boys. Brian's girlfriend is a talented dancer for the NYCB but there are a lot of stuff that she has to go through.
How perfect is life for this ballerina?
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian, Other
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 3090
Read Count: 3041
Published: 12/05/07 » Updated: 12/06/07
Date: 01/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really like this story. It's simplistic and cute. I hope you find a way to complete it someday. It's worth reading. :)
Author's Response:
thank you sorry i never wrote back i forget to check reviews. i heard i was unable to continue revising since the original is already there
Date: 01/03/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Cute cute cute! Oh, how I wish you'd finish this story! :)
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1826
Read Count: 664
Published: 01/03/08 » Updated: 01/03/08
Date: 06/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: So typically me always falling for the easy.
This is a great short story. There are a few minor grammatical errors. I understand this is a short story, but if given time and effort, you could turn this into an amazing novel.

While in rehab, A.J. made friends with a young girl. Years later, she is in trouble. She has nowhere to go and no one to trust. She turns to A.J. for guidance.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 2131
Read Count: 16449
Published: 05/05/08 » Updated: 03/16/10
Date: 05/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Memories
This story is off to a good start, but I think you need a co-writer on this one. I can definitely help you because this story has a really good plot line.
Categories: Fanfiction > TV Series > Touched by an Angel, Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Monica, Nick, Other, Tess
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama
Warnings: Sexual Assault/Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 5867
Read Count: 6790
Published: 05/10/08 » Updated: 06/05/08
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Aw! This is a great start! You've really captured the essence of how close their family is, despite their dysfunctional upbringing.
Author's Response:
Thanks a bunch!!!! :D I hope you keep enjoying it, & I hope I can keep it that way! :D
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Pool Party
You did a good job with the dialogue with this one. This is a good chapter, but the only concern I have for this story is the constant changing in points of view. It can sometimes lead to confusion with the readers. You might try figuring out which characters you want to focus on as far as perspectives go and give each chapter one perspective. This way the story will flow and your readers can get a better grip on the character's emotions as the learn about them.
Author's Response: I may try that, if I remember later. Thanks for your input!
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Years Ago.....
Nicely done on the flashback! These kinds of scenerios make it easy to switch perspectives without losing the reader. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank-you! I appreciate your feedback!
Yes! I'm having a bad day damnit!!
An answer to a challenge.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Dramedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2510
Read Count: 1156
Published: 07/08/08 » Updated: 07/08/08
Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
LMAO! My god what a horrible day! LOL! That was a cute one! I enjoyed it!
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 3450
Read Count: 1275
Published: 07/08/08 » Updated: 07/08/08
Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Challenge
You already know I loved this one! ;o) You should check out the latest challenge I posted. :O)
Author's Response: I saw that one! Haven\'t started it yet but I\'m cooking up some ideers!
One woman, One video camera, One Journey...
Follow Jessica McLean through a year of Life.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 47856
Read Count: 135486
Published: 07/08/08 » Updated: 01/10/10
Date: 04/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I've not finished reading this yet, but I like what I've seen so far. I've chosen it to be the fan fic of the month for my A.J. site. I made a graphic for it. http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q81/passionwriter81/Fic%20Covers%20For%20Other%20Writers/525600minutes.jpg
Author's Response: Aw -- thank you Rachel! I love the graphic :O) And I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I need to update soon. I'm having surgery this week so hopefully I'll get to write a bit!
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian, Kevin
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1122
Read Count: 1058
Published: 07/09/08 » Updated: 07/09/08
Date: 07/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Short Story
LOL! This was cute! Yay! :O)
Response to a challange So You Had a Bad Day...
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick, Other
Genres: Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 3643
Read Count: 1437
Published: 07/25/08 » Updated: 07/25/08
Date: 07/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Challenge
This was a really cute story! I loved reading it! I did notice quite a few spelling and grammar errors. It made the story a little confusing to read, but other than that it was great! If you'd like help fixing it , let me know. I'd be more than happy to help! Good job! =)