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Hey! Well, I am 23 years old and have been writing fan fic for about 6 years now and have been a BSB fan for 13 1/2 years. I love writing drama in to my stories, if you haven't noticed, although my short stories are more on the humor side. I love meeting new people, so send me an IM....altrockangel0316 on AIM On top of BSB and writing, I enjoy spending a lot of time with my boyfriend, , reading, meeting new people, and doing stuff like mini-golf and bowling. I'm an easy going person...takes a lot to piss me off. |
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A response to a challenge from Rose on the AC forum. Read the details in my author's note. :O)
LMAO...this is truly one of a kind! haha. AJ and Nick and their bets.lmao...another Mare classic. :)
Author's Response: Aww thanks! :O)
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Raidyn is unhappy with her life, everything in it seems to be a struggle for her, from getting along with her alcoholic father, to her obsession with wanting to be thin. In order to make ends meet she finds herself stuck cleaning houses with her mother; temporarily. But things only get more complicated when she meets Nick Carter while cleaning the Dorough’s home.
I can't believe that I haven't started this sooner. What an amazing beginning. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more. I cannot believe what an ass Nick was towards Raidyn though. Men can be suck pigs. UGH! Hopefully he straightens up...but asshole rich boy could be interesting too...lol. Reading on...
Author's Response: Well I'm glad that you are interested now, and taking the time to read and review it. Yeah men are such pigs sometimes! Yeah you'll be surprised how he turns out. thank you very much.
Nick was so close....and AJ ruined it! lol. Grrr. Again, I feel for Raidyn and her being self-conscious about her image. Everybody seems to judge from outside appearance alone without getting to know the person deep down. I agree with Maria though...Rai should stay away from Nick until he proves he isnt all jacked up.
Author's Response: Yeah the influence friends can have over people is amazing. I feel for Raidyn too, cause sometimes people miss out on a great person, cause they only see the exterior. Glad you are into the story. Thank you so much.
Mia can't take Nick from Raidyn! I know he was never technically her's, but I think she was getting close to getting a chance. I'm glad that Leigh is so kind and gave Ray a chance to help out for the evening. Hopefully Howie is that kind when he gets home...
Author's Response: Yeah, that really sucked, I think he was gonna give her a chance and here comes Mia all confident. darn it! I thought I would make Leigh's character a pleasant one. Thank you.
I like how you gave some insight as to WHY Ray is afraid of the water...and who it was she was talking about when she mentioned that her father blamed her for the death. Nick is being such a sweetheart...and he kissed her...YAY!!! :)
Author's Response: She's still very upset about her sisters death, it could be cause her father spends whatever time he can blaming her. Yay for NIck showing a soft side. Thank you!
shit...what a way to end the chapter. I hope that Ray is alright. What Nick did was pretty damned low. I would never give him the chance again after that. I would hate having a sister like Mia..who is so perfect and who everybody wants to 'fuck' just to know what it is like. she is a whore. I wouldn't ever forgive her either.
Author's Response: Yeah men they have no control over their hormones. Haha! That is what my best friend said, but I was like 'It's Nick'. Oh yeah Mia makes me pretty happy I only have brothers. Thanks so much. I'm glad your so into it.
Okay...since Ray insists on giving in to Nick every time...he better not hurt her. Ray should keep her guard up though...because Nick is...how shall I say it...cares too much about what others think of their relationship that he wants.
Author's Response: Yeah she's a sucker for the blonde guy! Nick is damn trouble...that's all I will say! Thank you.
I HATE NICK. I can't believe he cheated on Ray with this Melanie slut now. I hope Ray does find out. I hope she hears alll about it and kills Nick. Or at least casrates him so he can never use his unruly dick again. Freaking asshole! UGHH
Author's Response: castrate!!!! :o sounds good to me. Thanks Ashley! Your reviews also crack me up, you get so into it.
Well that night didn't go as expected...Adam is even worse than Nick. I can't believe he could be so cruel towards Raidyn. Poor girl...and Mia has to tell somebody abot the baby...;and find out who the father is...
Author's Response:
Poor Ray seems to have a lot of bad luck with jerks. Mia is a little on the complicated side, but we will know who the baby daddy is very soon. Thank you Ashley.
Yeah...she definitely can't resist the blonde idiot. ha....he better not be caught with Mia, Melanie, Tara...or any other slut for a little blast from the past. Ray deserves his FULL attention. At least Mia pulled Mel away to let Ray and Nick sort out their thoughts. I will give her credit for that...
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She's drawn to him, like a moth to a flame (However you say it) Haha! Damn Nick he is going to begin to settle down, maybe. Mia owes poor Raidyn that much, to help her get with Nick. Thanks
Nick better behave his raging male hormones...that is all I can say. If Ray walks in on him making out with one of the other girls at this party...I hope she drown his sorry ass in the ocean
Author's Response: LOL! I hope she does too...cause he's a manwhore!
If only Ray knew just how far from the truth her thoughts are. Mia has to tell her about the pregnancy and the truth before it destroy her and Nick due to her inecurities
Author's Response: Yeah Mia would help if she would just open her mouth or NIck. Thanks girl.
Am i seeing a soft side to Adam...or is he just catching her when she is weak to make a move? I realize she is pissed at Nick...and the way she found out was horrible...but the kid may not even be Nick's. Ray needs to let Nick explain..because for once, he didn't fuck up other than not telling Ray sooner.
Author's Response:
Your the first to ask that about Adam! Could be, you never know with that man. Thank you!
Oh shit.....well...I can bet that Nick and Ray will have even more problems now. Damn... is this steph the same one that Ray works with? If so, that has got to hurt big time. Adam and his friends all seem great though. Maybe Ray can make some new friends?
Author's Response: Yup she is the same little witch! I thought I would make some rich people nice to her, not all of the are snobs. Thank you girl.
ill likely be the only one, but I am glad that Ray slept with Adam. she needed to for her confidence to feel worth and beautiful. As for Nick...he's already cheated like, 3 times...now 4. He is an ass. He really truly is. I know..double standard...but...now how can Nick judge Ray when he cheated too AGAIN.
Author's Response: Your like the third one that is glad and ok with her sleeping with Adam. Go Ray! Oh my when you say the numbers out loud, Nick is a manwhore! He cheated on her over and over...Thank you.
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