Uh ohhh. I'm sensing two very sneaking teenagers are going to get into a little bit of trouble at this party... cant wait HAHA!

I love how fatherly AJ is to Shelby. Of course he's her father, but still... its clear he loves her like his own and thats so cute. I want a dad like that LOL.

Daaaaamn that was hot! I'm glad they didn't go all the way though, but i have a feeling they won't be able to wait much longer.

And hahaha i can't wait for Kevin and AJ to find out. AJ will most like have steam coming out of every crevice and Kevin... well probably the same. AJ will probably kill Kevin haha

Although i do think Shelby is quite responsible and mature. She's got a good head on her shoulders.

And awww at her realising she's in love with Mason. Honey you've been in love with him since you were five don't deny it. HAHA

"...just centimeters from my hoo-ha."
I actually cracked up when i read that haha!

loved this chapter. Mason is definitely a dare devil and does exactly what he wants. And LMAO at them getting caught. I had a feeling that might happen.

I was so sure by the begining of the chapter that Kev and Addy had them sussed... maybe not? Or maybe they have and they are testing them... hmmm. Next chapter please? HAHA

Author's Response: At least they just got caught my a salesclerk! :) Addy and Kevin aren't stupid but Mason's not dumb. Dan was a great decoy wasn't he? :)

Ok so im all caught up!

Poor Poor Shelby. To have a partial misscarriage at 16.. well thats alot for someone so young to take on, and then ontop of that realise she still is pregnant. I'm glad she's gonna go through with the pregnancy, and a biiig part of me wants her and Mason to keep the baby too. I think she would be a good mom!

And as for Molly and AJ... im disapointed in them. I mean they knew that Mason and Shelby were trying to sleep together, and even though they banned Shelby from talking to Mason Molly still could of taken Shelby to get birth control. Especially is Molly had been exactly the same. Major fail there.

And i have a feeling that even though Shelby thinks she's going to be a bad role model for Ally, i actually think this will be a positive for Ally. I mean the kid seems so much mature that her brother (which is normal anyways) but by Ally watching her big sister go through pregnancy and birth thats enough to put a young girl off doing anything silly.

then again i would hope Aj and Molly see sense and put Ally on birth control as soon as she gets a boyfriend.

Aaaaanyways thats the end of my review haha. Any chance of another update today? :::cheeses, batts eyelids and anything remotely stupid that might make you post more::: haha

Author's Response: Did I mention I love in depth reviews? Because I do. :) No, I can't even imagine going through what she's going through at only sixteen years old. As I told someone else in a response, Molly and AJ just totally screwed up. You can't even sugar coat it. Molly had a similar experience and she put on blinders and didn't get Shelby what she needed. As for Ally...you might be on to something there :) And, last but not least, there WILL be a third update today! I do enjoy remotely stupid things, btw. LoL

Aww loved that they got a chance together! And love that Kristin understands. I think Shelby and Mason are going to use that to their advantage at some point.
Does he still live with her for certain times of the year?

And wanna hear something funny? LOL i finished work and saw i had an email from AC bout your update, and i actually walked home in the rain, under my umbrella reading your update. haha am i hooked or what!

Author's Response: Per the custody agreement Kev was supposed to have Mason during the school year and Kristin was supposed to have Mason during the summer. Because of his job, he stayed for the summer too...BUT he made a bargain that he would spend Fall Recess in October, Christmas break and Spring Break with her to make up for it. :) As for the second part of your review -- That is so awesome! Just make sure to look both ways when crossing the street, haha!

GAaaaah how am i gonna cope with no updates lmfao.. stupid backstreet boys (hahaha)

no seriously.. have a blast! i have a few friends going as well and i'm SO jealous im so bloody far away and cant go.

and onto the story... im totally feeling frustrated for Shelby. I know i would of already blown a fuse right now. Shelby has alot of patience. They are being waaaay to harsh. Like Shelby said.. they are states apart, at least if they were allowed to talk on the phone that would take some of the pain away.

Author's Response: LoL they might be stupid (sometimes) but OH how I love them! ::squeezes BSB...but not too hard:: Frustrated is a good word for it. :( I like writing happy SO much more but it's a necessary evil.

Uh ohhh... i smell morning sickness!

And those kids on the bus... totally deserved her barfing up on them! Ugh i so dont miss school days!

Author's Response: I don't miss school either...AT all. been there, done that!

HAHA im replying to your response... i think you should mark half the papers, write the rest of the chappy, post for your adoring fans (is that what we are? LMFAO) then mark the rest and come back to hundred of reviews.

cos you know we're all dying here right? AHHAHA

Author's Response: Oh I know you're all dying...wait, what am I doing on here? I have to start my homework!