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Only in My Dreams by evergreenwriter83 Rated: NC-17 [ - ]
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DREAM: A dream is a succession of images, thoughts, sounds, or emotions which pass through the mind during sleep. The content and purpose of dreams are not fully understood, though they have been a topic of speculation and interest throughout recorded history...

One night, Brian Littrell fell asleep. It was a normal thing to do. But this night was different. This night started an escape from the every day. The temptation was high. But it was only in his dreams.

Or so he thought.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian, Group
Genres: Drama, Fantasy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sexual Content
 Series: None
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 74822
Read Count: 30290


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Published: 08/27/10 » Updated: 09/19/10
Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 09/13/10 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I bet Nick's new chick is going to be Kenzie! :-o Rut roh.

Author's Response: Rut roh. That would be bad ::grin::

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 09/14/10 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Glad I was right about Kenzie being Nick's date. ;-) But something is a little fishy. I just can't put my finger on it and its driving me crazy. LOL How the heck can he dream up someone and be the same exact person in real life? Career, background and physical appearance. I can't wait to see what this all means for Brian.

I'm also rooting for Brian and Kenzie. I know, he's married to Leighanne but this is a story not real life so I can write that. Ha ha!

Author's Response: Of course you were right! :) And it is a little fishy that she's so real isn't it? :) LoL and yes everyone is welcome to their 'who ends up with who' opinion! :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 09/16/10 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wow, so she said it first. I would rather have a mom and dad that were in love with each other then to have them fake their relationship for me. Its a little sad.

With that said, bring on Kenzie! LOL But if that happens I don't want her to be rebound check.

Oh and the synchronized swimmers? What was? that? Really man. And I don't just mean in the story. I mean real life. LOL

Author's Response: LoL I'm still not quite over the synchronized swimmers in real life. I love the Littrells to death but sometimes they're a little over the top for me, haha. I just HAD to put that in the story somehow. :) Anyhow, yeah a nice depressing chapter to end the evening. LoL enjoy everyone!

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 09/21/10 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

What the hell Leighanne? Why make it harder for everyone especially for Baylee? I know she's hurt but she shouldn't take it out on her child. It just shows how self centered she really is.

Btw I don't know if you've noticed but when Brian is by himself on tour in real life his clothes are always wrinkly. LOL

Author's Response: Oh this messy divorce is just getting started people.... LoL and I HAVE noticed his clothes are wrinkly when he's all by himself...boys will be boys! :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 09/21/10 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Ok what the? I got an email saying you updated 41 twice. Is it just your stories or is it others?

Author's Response: Carter-Orange was having issues this morning but it's resolved on her end. I'm still having issues. Just bare with me. :)

There's a Hole in My Heart by Sevily Rated: R [ - ]
Summary:
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The coming of age story of a Backstreet kid.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Other, Nick, Group
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Sexual Content, Sexual Assault/Rape, Domestic Violence, Death
 Series: In Front of the World
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 78665
Read Count: 76206


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Published: 08/29/10 » Updated: 12/01/10
Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 08/29/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very interesting. I'm intrigued. I can't wait for more.

American Honey by evergreenwriter83 Rated: R [ - ]
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My name's Brooke Carter and I'm sixteen years old. There's two important things you should know about me...

Number One: My first single hit #1 on the Billboard charts on my fifteenth birthday.

Number Two: I'm still a virgin...even though the whole world thinks differently.

Being famous isn't easy, but finding true love is even harder.

(part of the Coaster Girls series; a spin-off to the Coaster Series)
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Assault/Rape, Sexual Content
 Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 65170
Read Count: 102342


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Published: 09/03/10 » Updated: 09/20/10
Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 09/09/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The lake where they almost got it on! LOL Yay the whole Love Story song came true for them. :-) and Brenna is Shelby all over. :)

I love Brooke and Nick's relationship. Nick have kids already. Damn. LOL

Author's Response: LoL well the lake WAS their first big moment even if they didnt' get it on. But yup, their Love Story came true! ::) Nick is such a good fictional dad...I think he'd make a great real one too :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 09/18/10 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Forget Tropical storm Nick, its more like typhoon Nick. Damn Garretts balls are going to be ripped off. I can't wait.

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 09/19/10 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Nick and NoNo just put the smack down. Woot. But now charges are going to put on them. Its worth it though.

Author's Response: Yeah, they don't do a lot of thinking about repercussions when they're beating the shit and balls out of everyone do they?

Fallen Angel by evergreenwriter83 Rated: NC-17 [ - ]
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My name's Kayleigh Littrell and I'm sixteen years old. There's two important things you should know about me...

Number One: My father and brother are famous Christian artists. Needless to say, I've lived a pretty sheltered life.

Number Two: I break free whenever I can.

I love to walk on the wild side. I don't mind getting hurt. Been there, done that. But the biggest danger is getting caught...
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Assault/Rape, Sexual Content
 Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 80887
Read Count: 43617


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Published: 09/22/10 » Updated: 11/13/10
Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 10/08/10 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Its going to be a tough road for her. But it sucks that something like this has to happen for her parents to realize something was wrong. But what's done is done. I was really hoping for a Brian POV chapter though. Something like this killed a little something inside him. Great work.

Listening to Wakey!Wakey!'s, War Sweater while reading the last chapter gave me chills.

Author's Response: I don't think I'm strong enough to do a Brian chapter. Nick gets angry and energized when a problem occurs, but I have a feeling Brian would do more internal soul searching and prayer. And I'm not strong enough to delve into that. It does suck that it took this for Brian and Leigh to realize, but it also took Brooke stepping up as well...

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 09/27/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aw great moment between father and daughter. I really hope that this party is about her and the wedding planning isn't thrown in there somehow.

I think Kayleigh is a ticking time bomb and she's going to go off at any moment. She has way too much inside that she's bound to break. Loving this continue the great work. :-)

Author's Response: Glad you're still enjoying! I'm so excited for Kay's party, haha. She is a ticking time bomb...that's a great analogy. When will she blow? Hm I don't know

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 10/16/10 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Aw, at Kay for saying Noah is her boyfriend but I think its going to bite her in the ass. Hopefully not. Ew Claudia is back.

Am I the only one who pictures Luke Ford (from The Mummy: Tomb of The Dragon Emperor) as Baylee? LOL

Author's Response: I had to look up Luke Ford, but you're not far off. I'm thinking a little more Brian in that boy and it's totally close to my picture, haha.

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 11/03/10 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Aw, I miss Shelby and Mason. Squee. And Shelby's right its going to be tough for Kayleigh. Having kids is no picnic in the park but have them when you're still a kid yourself. Sigh. You live, you learn.

Btw I stopped getting email updates. Don't know why. Everything seems ok in my preferences. If you could you should make a twitter account and sent out update tweets.

Author's Response: I miss Shel and Mason too! I'll work on a Twitter option this weekend.. I'm in the homestretch of my semester at school and I've neglected every one of my projects...I might actually disappear from righting for a couple weeks while I catch up. Either that or updates are going to slow way down.

Heartbreaker by evergreenwriter83 Rated: R [ - ]
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When Brooke Carter embarks on a whirlwind tour, the last thing she expects to do is fall for Nate, her sexy new photographer and web tech. To make matters worse, just when her love life starts to sizzle, someone else reappears to shake things up. Will Brooke make the right choice in the messy game of love? Or will she be the one to get burned?

(part of the Coaster Girls series; a spin-off to the Coaster Series)
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
 Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 68965
Read Count: 104574


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Published: 10/12/10 » Updated: 12/10/10
Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 10/15/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hm, she seems to be moving a little too fast with Nate I guess she's still stinging from the rejection with Trevor and trying to make up for it. I like her with Nate though. Team Brate? Team Nabro? LOL Doesn't quite work like Naley. From the show One Tree Hill. LOL

Can't wait to see what throwing Trevor in the mix does though. Great work. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: LoL yes we'll see what happens when Trevor reappears...

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed
Date: 10/19/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh man. Talk about a dilemma. Although I feel bad for Trevor it still didn't give him the right to talk to Kayleigh the way he did and his dad was nowhere near that. I know it stems from his family relationship but yeah that was a no no. (No pun intended). As for Nate letting her test her options, I see nothing but trouble in that and I don't think Trevor is going to be so open about it. Nate's heart is in the right place but that means he can date other people too and Brooke isn't going to like that. Great work. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm still in agreement about the Kayleigh issue! haha Nate's heart is in the right place but trouble is evident (and so much fun to write!)