Reviewer: mary Signed
Date: 06/07/13
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Didn't think he would be the one with the sense to stop. Finally I have some respect for him. I mean he is still totally going to screw her over when Cora comes crying back and I feel like something is going to happen with Addison. :/ But otherwise I love how they got to know each other a bit better.
p.s do you like arrested development? in the new episodes theres an annoying catchy song called get away get away and every time I see this title I sing it in my head.
Author's Response: I've never seen Arrested Development... The title actually game from the cliched phrase "The One that Got Away", which was the original title. It wasn't until I designed the banners that I chose to drop the words "The One that". :) ....I was surprised too when I was writing the chapter that Nick was the one that stopped the action. Originally he WAS supposed to be on the phone when Samantha came back, then Samantha was supposed to hesitate like she did in the bathroom scene, but somehow when I wrote the moment it was all on Nick. There's hope for this character yet. ;) Haha