Summary: Detective Kevin Richardson is working a very hard case. One involving a serial killer who preys upon young children. At least he knows at the end of the day he has his family to fall back on. His three brothers and his best friend will help him through the mystery and be the glue that keeps him together as he gets closer to finding the madman behind it all. AU/suspense/drama (obviously lol) rated R
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Kevin, Group
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Suspense
Warnings: Violence, Graphic Violence, Death
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 120913
Read Count: 72790
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Well, I'm from New Jersey. I work in fast food and I love pineapple pizza, Harry Potter, traveling, Disney, one direction, sailor moon and star wars. I like going to the beach and writing/reading fanfiction....plus going to lots of concerts. I'm a huge Weird Al fan as well. I've been writing since about 1999. Started off on Fanfiction.net, but made my way to AC after taking a few years off. Joined Absolute Chaos in 2009 and have been here ever since! I like to read just about everything and am open to writing almost every genre. Nick is featured the most in my work but I have something for everyone. I'm also open to co write or toss around ideas and beta read, so hit me up on yahoo messenger or shoot me an email. Hope you enjoy my stories, and happy reading :) feel free to check out my favorites as well. If you're on Facebook check out my FB group, BSB Fanfiction! Awards/Recognition Featured Author for June 2011- Figured You Out Featured Author for November 2013 - Finding Carter     |
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Published: 03/05/05 » Updated: 01/06/06
Published: 03/05/05 » Updated: 01/06/06
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 23: 23
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 23: 23
I think Kevin is right about Patty and talking to her will reveal a lot that possibly was overlooked before. Side note just wanted to let you know that my friend Ali has been reading this too, she told me she's on the sequel and said you were a "sick puppy," for all the mean cliffies LOL i told her to read It Stays as well ;)
Author's Response:
Glad to now she's reading. Tell her to leave a review one day! And yes, my cliffies in the sequel are pretty mean! LOL Hopefully she'll like It Stays! Thanks, Tracy!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 25: 25
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 25: 25
I seriously want to punch the asshole in the throat for doing this to them. UGH!!! I really do think Nick went with the guy thinking he is his dad or something, and the.guy tricked him into thinking nobody wants him :( asshole. I couldn't wait to get home from work to read lol
Author's Response:
aww lol glad you're finding it so addictive!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 26: 26
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 26: 26
Its now 2am and my night off, I'm still reading LOL goddamn it!!! I still think I'm right that Nick went willingly with the asshole and whoever he is it's right under Kevin's nose. Thia Maria chick is awfully suspicious too....hmmm
Author's Response:
LMAO aww go to bed! That's Maria for you! If you notice Maria and Ariana are in this one as well as Separate Ways too! I didn't realize that until I started reading it the other day.
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 27: 27
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 27: 27
Omg the memories flashing in his mind almost made me cry, especially the one of him falling asleep in Kevin's lap watching Blue's Clues and him taking his first steps :( i knew Nick wasn't dead, I think the guy who took Nick is someone who Kevin isn't thinking about. i can't click Next fast enough LOL
Author's Response:
That chapter was so hard to write :O(
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 28: 28
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 28: 28
Oh geez..... I.... Wow, this is so good I almost want to bite my nails, I am in total shock about the "dad" stuff already and now Kevin Senior might still be alive? Maybe ge didn't really die and it was all a cover up. Can't wait to see...
Author's Response:
LOL And the cliffies keep coming! Thanks, Tracy! I am loving your reactions to this!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 29: 29
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 29: 29
Ohhhh so Kevin senior was in witness protection.....that explains so much, especially about Maria, but I still feel maybe Tyler is working with the killer/kidnappers and it's someone in the department helping.
Author's Response:
Boy you really don't like this Tyler fellow, do you? LOL
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 30: 30
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 30: 30
Wow, this just gets crazier....I don't blame Kevin at all for being angry with his dad. Matt was a surprise....wonder what is up with Tyler then???
Author's Response:
I would be pretty angry too!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 31: 1
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 31: 1
Eep. I might finish this tonight, but wow. Loving all the action in the last couple chapters and the details you put in are great. I think this guy is going to the hospital to.finish off AJ maybe? Yikes!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tracy! :O) I tried to out a lot of action sequences in. Sometimes they look better in my head though but occasionally they come out the way I want them. The ones in this one did!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 31: 1
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 31: 1
Eep. I might finish this tonight, but wow. Loving all the action in the last couple chapters and the details you put in are great. I think this guy is going to the hospital to.finish off AJ maybe? Yikes!!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 32: 1
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 32: 1
Omg i wanted to slap Brian so much. Hasn't he heard the song "Billy Don't Be A Hero" LOL. Kids, I swear. While he had good intentions, not so smart to go chasing a serial killer.
But now the ending of the chapter bothers me. Where the hell is Nick????
Author's Response:
LOL I know! Duh, Brian!!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 33: 33
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 33: 33
Whaaaaaa??? See I knew Patty had a link in this whole thing and it's her damn dad. wow. I am literally speechless!!
Author's Response:
YAY!! Glad I caught you unawares!!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 34: 34
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 34: 34
Oh that Tyler LOL geez hes asking for trouble questioning AJ like that. I really loved this chapter, it was very dark and suspenseful like your writing is now....it is so awesome to see you haven't changed at all ;)
Author's Response:
Only have gotten darker and crazier! Thanks, Tracy! LOL at all the Tyler mentions.
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 35: 35
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 35: 35
I KNEW IT WAS TYLER.....oh shit. I love being right, bet he ends up dead too.....love the lie he told Nick and Patty, I knew he got Nick willingly.
Author's Response:
LMAO see, there ya go! Good instincts!!! i love waking up to a ton of reviews from you! Thanks, Tracy! You are almost finished! Wow!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/19/13 Title: Chapter 37: 37
Date: 07/19/13 Title: Chapter 37: 37
I was on the edge of my seat with this chapter. Poor....well poor everyone!
Author's Response:
Yeah, this is not a happy, fuzzy chapter! :O(
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/19/13 Title: Chapter 37: 37
Date: 07/19/13 Title: Chapter 37: 37
I was on the edge of my seat with this chapter. Poor....well poor everyone!
