Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/08/10
Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
--I didn't have a chance to finish the sentence. Even though I was sure his fingers hurt, Noah still had the insight to turn around and yank the fire alarm.-- I'm so glad Noah stopped her from telling... She would most definately regret it
--"Is it raining?" he asked drowsily.-- Landon, so cute :)
"I NEED A BOAT!" I heard Brenna scream nearby.-- And then there's miss Brenna.... :)
--"Kay's hurting, Brooke," he said softly. "I want to help her."
"You can't," I said. "She's going to hurt you. She will never love you like you love her."
"I don't care. It's my choice to make. You broke her freakin' heart up there Brooke," Noah said.-- I knew NoNo would be Kay's knight in shining armor. :)
Uncle Brian started to smile, but then he caught a look at my dad's face. He tried (and failed) to adopt a stern posture. He started to laugh. Aunt LeighLeigh covered her mouth but I saw her smile. My eyes widened.-- Just be thankful "Bride-zilla wasn't there... oh, i could only imagine the fire works....
--"She wasn't feeling well, so she went up to my room to lay down," I said. I swore I saw Noah's shoulders relax.
"No," Trevor said.
Everyone looked at him in surprise, but before he could say anything else, I saw a couple firefighters come out. One was talking loudly on a walkie.
"No fire, all clear, but we need an ambulance on the third floor. Teenage female. Nonresponsive."
Our whole group turned towards the firefighters. I looked around wildly. I didn't see Kayleigh anywhere. I was sure there weren't many teenage females on the third floor.-- OMG OMG OMG! NO! NO NO NO NO! Not Kay! Oh hellz... i don't think Brooke will forgive herself for this, feeling like she (in part) drove Kay to attempt suicide...
Author's Response: I think Brenna's 'I Need a Boat' is my favorite line. And You're right...Claw-dia wouldn't appreciate that fire stunt. As for Kay...well, stay tuned