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American Honey by evergreenwriter83 Rated: R [ - ]
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My name's Brooke Carter and I'm sixteen years old. There's two important things you should know about me...

Number One: My first single hit #1 on the Billboard charts on my fifteenth birthday.

Number Two: I'm still a virgin...even though the whole world thinks differently.

Being famous isn't easy, but finding true love is even harder.

(part of the Coaster Girls series; a spin-off to the Coaster Series)
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Assault/Rape, Sexual Content
 Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 65170
Read Count: 100682


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Published: 09/03/10 » Updated: 09/20/10
Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/08/10 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

--Even the room approved of what I was about to do. Or at least that's what I imagined.-- too frickin funny, the room giving her the "green light" heeheehee

--"I'm sorry," he said. "I can't do this tonight."-- aaawww, Trevor.

--"It's not you. It's just..." he trailed off. "It's just that I feel guilty. I mean your parents got these rooms and they flew me out here and I don't feel right doing this knowing that."-- heeheehee, awkward :)

--"I can buy another room," I said meekly. He laughed.-- Oh, BooBoo, you crack me up!

--"How could you?" I asked Kay. Her eyes widened.-- Oh, Brooke... be careful....

--"Noah, she just used you. Just like all the others," I said sadly. "What number was he, Kay? Sixteen? Seventeen by now?"-- OMG, OMG, OMG! I can't believe she just blurted that out :(

--I might feel horrible about it tomorrow, but I would worry about that in the morning.-- there is no "might feel guilty." You definately will, Brooklyn.

Author's Response: Only a sixteen year old would have a silly comment like the green light giving approval. That whole moment was totally awkward. If I was Brooke, I would have been mortfied. And that mortification turned to a little moment of Brooke craziness. Her mouth didn't have a lock on it and Kay got the bullets.

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/08/10 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

--"How's your eye?" I asked. It was already turning the odd color that bruises turned as they started the healing process.

"To be honest, I haven't even though about it," he replied. He smiled. "There were too many beautiful things today to distract me."-- aw, Trevor, what a charmer

-- Landon and Brenna were breakdancing (even through slow songs).-- what lil cuties :)

-- OoOoOh.... here come's the 'big' moment... possibly?

Author's Response: LoL I won't ruin it for you..just read on!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

--I laughed. I could just see me singing my thank you speech. It would be like I was on an episode of Sesame Street or something.-- strangely (or, maybe not-so-strangely) i could see her singing it, too :)
-- fave part EVER-- What I did next will probably go down in the history books under 'stupid things artists do in front of an audience.'
I took my plaque and started hitting him in the arm.--
--"That was awesome," Peyton said the moment I walked backstage. "I want to beat up Noah."-- hahah! Luv Pey!
--"Great show. Is it always so entertaining?"
I whirled around. Trevor was standing behind me smiling.
I had completely forgotten that he had witnessed the whole event.
"Oh," I said. My face flamed.
"She doesn't usually beat anyone up," Peyton said. Dad wrapped an arm around her shoulders.
"Let's go this way Pey," he said.
"But---!"
He led her away whistling. Trevor and I were, for the most part, alone.-- Again, Luv Pey! And I luv that Nick was inconspicuously trying to give BooBoo a lil privacy :)
-- "Good night, sweet prince."
I whirled around. Noah was peeking around the corner.-- God, Noah can be such a... a... boy. I swear
-- second fave part-- He was going to be sorry when I caught up with him. First, I would thank him for writing an awesome song. Secondly, I was going to hit him again for not telling me sooner. And last, I was going to kill him for ruining my nice moment with Trevor.
Noah Gene Carter was going to be lucky if he lived long enough to write a second hit.
And if he did, it sure as hell better be another hit for me.

Author's Response: Your favorite parts were my favorite parts too. :) I love that she used her award as a weapon! And you also listed another one of my warm fuzzy moments...Nick suavely leading Peyton away to give his daughter some alone time. What an AWESOME dad!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

first of all: Woohoo! You're back!
Okay, on to the review:
hehehe, i luvs NoNo-- "Hey BooBoo, guess who's here?" he asked. He held up his phone. Wind Beneath My Wings started playing. I would have smacked him, but I didn't because I was distracted by the realization that the song meant Trevor had arrived.--
--"Hey mom, I kind of invited Trevor to Baylee's wedding," I said. The corners of mom's mouth twitched.-- i luv how she just kinda tossed that out there :)
Luvs this line-- "Daddy says I can't show mommy," Landon whispered.--
--"Have you ever driven a golf cart before?" Trevor asked.
"How hard could it be?" I asked.-- famous last words! Hahaha

Author's Response: Glad to be back! Did I mention I love NoNo? :) And then of course there's Landon. I can't imagine anything cuter than a three year old Nick. And Brooke and the golf cart--sometimes I don't think Carters should be allowed to operate equipment!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

what an awesome chapter, am REALLy looking forward to reading Brooke's story :)
(btw, did you get the title from the Lady Antebellum song of the same name? just curious)

Author's Response: All of the Coaster Girls stories are song titles actually, so yes, it's the Lady A. song :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/07/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

If i find out that this Garret bozo is just using my Brookie, I'ma be stealing Lenni's pointy sticks and coming after him & YOU, young lady :P
(j/k about the coming after you... but i WILL go after him!)

Author's Response: I think you might be worse than Nick! haha LoL And please don't come after you...don't break my writing hands! I kind of need them. :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/07/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hey... gots to protect my girl, y'know... and don't you worry, i wouldn't dream of hurting your hands... we need em too... we'd all die of suspense w/o your hands! hehehehehehehehe

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/16/10 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I think Kay is headed down a very scary road....
Garrett is officially a stupid butt-monkey, and i'ma slap him silly next time i 'see' him!
okay, I luv Liv (was there ever any doubt ;)? ) for telling Brooke to get both dresses.
Oh, Kayleigh, Kayleigh, Kayleigh... whatever will we do with you, child?

Author's Response: ::snort:: best description of the da...butt-monkey. Ha! LoL

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/18/10 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Trevor is officially my hero! Yay for saving my BooBoo. I so hope Daddy Nickolas gets his hands on that slimy, good-for-nothing, butt-monkey!

Author's Response: He's my hero too! :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/19/10 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

hehehehe! I totally knew that Nick & NoNo were gonna go track that slimy, good-for-nothing, butt-monkey down! I hope they find him!
And OMG @ Kay- "I've had the same thing happen to me," she whispered. My eyes widened in surprise. "I'm just glad you had someone to save you."
Now i know why she has been the way she is.... wow...

Author's Response: Yeah, you guys are getting a whole backstory before her story even begins. Do ya love me? LoL.

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/19/10 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

woohho! GO CARTER MEN!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/20/10 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

It's a good thing grandpa has that 'mask' otherwise, seeing him cry... i woulda completely lost it for some reason....
Aw, now she's feeling guilty for her dad & NoNo protecting her.
:::gathers BooBoo into my arms, and holds her tight:::
Man... i get a real bad feeling about Trevor's dad...
Thank God Brooke didn't run into Butt-Monkey, or his dad
Oh damn... hope there isn't paparazzi already... tho seeing as not one, not two, but THREE famous people are at the popo station... i don't see a way to avoid the vultures....

Author's Response: Yeah I don't think I could stand to make Mike cry...he's the strong one. I hate even making Nick cry really. Three famous people at the police station is every pap's dream...

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/22/10 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

OMG! I luv Landon "BOOBIES!"
Trevor's parents sound like douches (well, his dad, at least. Not sure about his mom yet....)
Hehehehehe, Pey's awesome too. Gotta screen the (potential) boyfriends
:::groans quietly @ sports talk:::
glad the boys all got along tho
ROTFLMAO- "A second later regurgitated cake was all over Trevor’s face. Landon burst into hysterical tears. Noah farted. Peyton spilled her soda. Dad yelled at Noah. I handed Trevor a napkin. So much for the perfect dinner"
Aww, luv that trevor had a good time, it seems like he could use a few more good times.

Author's Response: Oh Landon...if Nick and Liv didn't have their hands full I'd throw another little Carter into the mix because I love their kids so much, lol. I hate sports talk too but it seems like that's he glue that binds American guys together...it's sad and pathetic but so true :) And you've GOT to love the end to the 'perfect' dinner...plus, you're right - I think Trevor had so much fun because he doesn't get a lot of those happy family times

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/22/10 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thank god for no 'wardrobe malfubctions' hehehehe
So funny that Nick disagreed with the wardrobe choices, such a 'dad' move :)
Have a mentioned how much a REALLY don't like Trevor's dad? cuz i don't... i mean, really, really don't... did i mention i don't like the man? hehehehe

Author's Response: Yeah like Liv said - she'd be wearing a turtleneck if there was a m.w. :) I think you might have told me that you don't like Trevor's dad, lol.

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/23/10 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

good thing the press isn't harping on the Garrett thing (yet) But when they start, i'm grabbing some pointy sticks!
Ah, Nicky.. so naive-- "She's always well-behaved BooBoo."
I've said it before, i'll say it again- Kayleigh, Kayleigh, Kayleigh...
Aw, still scared of giraffes... hehehe
I'm glad Trevor called... hope all is well (or as 'well' as can be in Trevor's situation)

Author's Response: Lenni can pass them around...I'm sure she has a warehouse full of them somewhere. LoL I love that Nick's naive about Kayleigh...if he only knew! Brooke's never going to get over the giraffe thing...see what Nick caused? :)