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Fallen Angel by evergreenwriter83 Rated: NC-17 [ - ]
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My name's Kayleigh Littrell and I'm sixteen years old. There's two important things you should know about me...

Number One: My father and brother are famous Christian artists. Needless to say, I've lived a pretty sheltered life.

Number Two: I break free whenever I can.

I love to walk on the wild side. I don't mind getting hurt. Been there, done that. But the biggest danger is getting caught...
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Assault/Rape, Sexual Content
Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 80887
Read Count: 43617


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09/22/10 » Updated: 11/13/10
Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/21/10 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

--I know it doesn't sound like a big deal, but for me just being asked to go to a movie was something special. I had never had any real 'date' experience. My 'dates' had all taken place in closets or cars.

"I'd like that," I said softly. Then I thought of Brooke.-- I luv that Noah is taking her on a date. And I luv that even though it is the 'first date' she still thought of Brooke :)

--It was the small things that made me happy.-- aw, i think more people should realize life is all about the small things :)

--I suddenly felt like I was in an alternate version of Lady and the Tramp. Instead of meatballs, there was popcorn.

And Noah certaintly wasn't a tramp. But he sure made me feel like a lady.-- That's because you ARE a lady, Kay-d bug.

--I knew the moment that his hand trailed down my spine that I was a goner. I could almost hear Marcie's voice ringing in my ears telling me that it wasn't a good idea to move this fast.-- Kay, u were a goner from the beginning.... And as for Marcie's 'voice'.... this moment has been like 16 years in the making, it's not too fast :)

Author's Response: LoL well they've already had another moment...sure that was a result of stress and a little alcohol but it was still a moment and she CLEARLY remembers it. But I love the '16 years in the making' quote so I totally accept that. :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/08/10 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

--Oh, no! Oh, Kayleigh... hope the medics get there in time... :::pulls Kay in my lap and hugs her till help arrives:::

--I can guarantee you, it wasn't puce.-- even in 'death' she made me laugh. (tho just a lil)

--I just hoped that Claudia wouldn't be joining me anytime soon.-- and again with a lil laugh

Author's Response: LoL she better never have to see puce again -- just saying. Her wry humor got me through the chapter...it was a toughie to write.

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/08/10 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

--Here's my ID," I said.
I pushed down on my dress. His eyes burned into my breasts.-- Oh, Kayleigh, Kayleigh, Kayleigh....

--Aw, I luv that Noah asked her to dance... he would so be a good match for her... make her see she is worth it.

--Noah looked like he had just been struck by a speeding train.-- heeheehee

Author's Response: Ah you're a couple chapters back...you're just getting to the good part!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/09/10 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Woohoo! she's awake! Awe, I am soooo glad that Baylee stayed. I woulda hated him forever if he'd left. Oh hellz, that sux that her mom went thru it... too bad the wedding clouded her, or she'd have seen the signs. (cuz she should know the signs, after all) So glad Brooke & Noah showed up.

--"I'll probably butt in every now and then," Noah said.-- made me smile thru the tears, so happy he loves her.

-(btw, i read the 'talk.' It's actually alot like I imagined it would be.)

Author's Response: Leigh was totally blinded. There's a lot of self blame going on. Brooke and Noah wouldn't have dared leave (Baylee either) without seeing Kay. It's the whole thing that people DO care whether Kay realized it o not. Noah is so totally in lurve!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/08/10 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

--"I know she does. But it's girl code. You don't mess with your best friend's brother."-- meh.. in this case, i think we can toss the 'code' out the window... :)

--"Kay, I meant what I said. I want you to let me in."-- Come on, Kay. Let him in...

--She was like the sister I never had.
Which was probably a bad analogy considering I had just slept with her brother.-- yeah, not the best analogy... heeheehee

--oh, poor Kay... :(

Author's Response: Sometimes girl code (and bro code) needs to be tossed out the window--totally!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/08/10 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

--He had lifted me off the freakin ground without even breaking our kiss.-- woohoo! Go Noah!!

--Considering the strength he had to pick me up, when he put me down it was like he was putting a baby bird down. My head hit the pillow with barely a bounce.-- Wow, strong but gentle... so the perfect man... too bad it's just on my screen :(

--I didn't want to scream 'get off!' so I thought I'd try another tactic.-- yeah,, yelling "get off"... might just freak him out... just a lil...

--After this he could stop being so fixated on me...-- oh, sweet Kay-d Bug... it's not a 'fixation'... he luvs you, baby girl. Just open your eyes...

--He had a squeezable ass.-- oh, honey... i'll bet he does :)

--My scale had just been tossed out the window.-- teeheehee

--It was mind-blowing. All of the older guys I had sex with weren't as capable as Noah. He knew what to do to a woman.

The thought terrified me. Because it felt so good. And I had never let myself feel good before.-- well, there's a first time for everything, Miss Kay...

--Passion I had never felt before. Passion that brought tears to my eyes even as we released together. Passion that made him hold me tight and made me cry into his chest as I realized that I was too much of a skank to even deserve what just happened.-- Aw, Kay, you gotta open your eyes. You do deserve it.

--But I had lost my normal. This was as close as I was going to ever get. But it couldn't happen again.-- it's not lost, luv. It's just buried kinda deep. Let Noah find it for you...

Author's Response: So much going on. Noah finally getting his moment, Kay's confliction because this was the first time where she actually felt something...it wasn't just something to do because she felt worthless. There's still that depression that's she's struggling with and Noah caring just totally knocked her off balance.

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/20/10 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

--"Did you clobber him with a dumbbell?" I asked. Internally I was thinking that he was the dumbbell.-- sometimes I luvs my Kay D Bug... okay ALL the time :)

--"He's going to pick the prettiest girl and try to get under your skin. He's trying to play some psychology on you."-- Kay hit the nail on the head with this statement (I think) ( But i still luvs Nate.)

--"Don't mention this to your dad," Angel warned Brooke. "He thinks I have a shoe addiction."-- hahahaha, no way, Angel... a shoe addiction... who'da thunk it? (an' yeah that was sarcasm, btw (: )

--We decided to walk one block East to North Beverly. Angel left us outside Banana Republic to go buy some maternity clothes for Brooke's mom. As she disappeared down the street, Brooke and I turned and headed towards Victoria's Secret. It was great the way our minds coordinated sometimes.-- Victoria's Secrect... uh-oh....

--Angel laughed. "I won't explain your mom's theory. It'll just gross you out. I'll just say it must be something in the male Carter genes...or well, the other thing besides genes."-- hehehe Super-sperm LMAO! w/lil red capes :) yep, pretty sure it'd gross her out

--I loved Angel. She was beautiful, smart, strong, and independent. I couldn't imagine raising a baby alone, but she had done that and continued a successful modeling career.
In my opinion, Angel rocked.-- Totally agree :)

--I stopped. I blinked. I was sure I was delusional.
"NOAH!" Brooke said. She dropped her bags. He stood up and she hugged him tightly.
So I wasn't delusional.-- YAY! Noah showed up! :)

--I don't remember dropping my bags, but I did. The next thing I knew I was hugging Noah tightly and crying again.

"I didn't want you to hear it that way," he said. He pressed his lips into my hair.

"It was beautiful," I choked.

I heard the sound of crinkling bags. Through my watery eyes, I saw Brooke scoot around us and head into the room. I looked up at Noah.

"I've missed you," I said. Until that exact moment, I hadn't realized just how much I had missed him. He smiled.

"You have no idea how bad I've been wanting to see you," he said.-- Aw, i knew she was head-over-heels in love with him since the VERY beginning :)

--He took my hands. I had gotten used to turning them in just a certain way so that I could hide the angry marks, but he turned them the other way. He stared down. Slowly he brought each up to his lips. Then he hugged me again. I pressed my head to his chest. His heart was beating loudly. I knew mine was beating just as fast, if not faster.-- I F****n' luv Noah :) He's so sweet.

--"So does this mean I'm getting closer to boyfriend material?" he whispered. I laughed shakily.

"What would you say if I told you that my whole school knows you already are?" I replied.-- hehehehe luvs it

--He pulled away. Our eyes met. Those beautiful blue eyes had me drowning in seconds.

"I'd say," he said. His head lowered towards mine. "I'm a lucky guy."

His lips met mine.

And for the first time in forever, I was the lucky one.-- I'm so glad they both are finally together :)

Author's Response: LoL I love Kay too...gotta love her dumbbell comment! I also love that you put F*******n' rotflmao...what a happy ending!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Woohoo! Luved it! So glad Kay's story is finally here!
So sad that she feels like the wedding is all anybody cares about :(
I am so sure they have a massively wonderful party plannned.
btw, just one minor correction... wouldn't it be Nick'n'Liv's 16th anniversary.... if Kay is turning 16?

Author's Response: Glad everyone's so excited about Kay's story! It's going to be fun. :) and Argh that's right...I forgot...in Brooke's story Nick was doing little things each month for the whole year of their 15th...so I guess they'd wrapping up in a big way. I'll change that...good eye!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/24/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

aw, poor kayleigh... :''(
:::takes lenni's pointy sticks and goes off in search of pencil-d*ck loser:::

Author's Response: Lenni better have a bucket of sticks ready for today's reviewers...just saying

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/24/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Okay... so far... not likin' the she-devil (aka- Claudia) (i know, i know, "don't judge a book by it's cover" and all that, but i can't help it...)
Poor Kay... feeling like no one really remembers your b-day... especially one as all-important as the sweet 16!!! ( still holding out hope that Bay is planning some massive surprise party for his Kay-d bug :::crosses fingers:::)

Author's Response: LoL she-devil, that's awesome! You're right, you can't judge a book by its cover...but I hate to say we're a few pages in. I hope that we can stop saying Poor Kay soon, but I don't know. I have a feeling...

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/25/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

uh-oh... i smell trouble.... with a capitol 'T'....

Author's Response: Uh oh when we start capitalizing it's never good!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/26/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

aw, hell... where'd i'd put them pointy stiick's? gotta go protect my BooBoo!

Author's Response: LoL Lenni might be hiding it! She usually rounds them up after each use. :) BooBoo needs protection right now!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/27/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i so have a feeling that Leigh's "taking" of Brooke has nothing to do with the wedding :) I knew there was a surprise party being planned :)

Author's Response: :) I'm keeping my lips zipped!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/27/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Woohoo! See? told ya they were planning something...
Aw, Noah, how sweet! I hope Kay realizes soon what a good man my NoNo is....

Author's Response: LoL well I know it all along, so there! :p j/k Noah is an absolute sweetheart. My 'little' boy...

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 09/28/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

aw, what an awesome party!
Awesome presents... i luv Kay's reaction to the college fund-- "I looked at him in surprise. Eighteen? But I was sixteen! Did they seriously just give me a gift I couldn't use for two years?"
I luvs my BooBoo-- Brooke stomped her foot. "NoNo you tell me RIGHT now! Do mom and dad know?"
And my NoNo-- His eyes sparkled. He was enjoying this. "Mayyybeeee..."
OMG! I so just realized (after reading the whole chapter) what NoNo's present is! He totally wrote a song for her, huh?

--"Oh, and Brooke?"
Her arms were folded over her chest. She was still in her 'pissed off' stance.
"Yeah?"
"Did you get the text message from dad?"
"What message?"
Noah laughed. "Check your damn phone."
And with that he walked off.
"Ooooh, brothers!" Brooke said. -- Total Brother-Sister moment! Luvs it!
I luved Brooke's present to Kay.... Can't wait to see her 'vision' especially if she's anything like her mother!

Author's Response: BooBoo and NoNo's little banter was my favorite part of the whole chapter. I love 'my boy!'