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Heartbreaker by evergreenwriter83 Rated: R [ - ]
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When Brooke Carter embarks on a whirlwind tour, the last thing she expects to do is fall for Nate, her sexy new photographer and web tech. To make matters worse, just when her love life starts to sizzle, someone else reappears to shake things up. Will Brooke make the right choice in the messy game of love? Or will she be the one to get burned?

(part of the Coaster Girls series; a spin-off to the Coaster Series)
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
 Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 68965
Read Count: 104665


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Published: 10/12/10 » Updated: 12/10/10
Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/13/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

--"Did anyone ever tell your dad that he makes a lousy spy?" he asked. hehehe, oh Nicky...

--"Ignoring my dad," I said. I got a dimpled grin for that.-- sometimes, ignoring Dad is the best thing :)

--"That way I can have the best of both worlds."-- been watching Hannah Montana again, huh? :)

--"Want a bite?"
He cut into the toast sprinkled with powdered sugar and topped with whipped cream. He speared a good size piece and held it out. I leaned forward to take it.
"AH-CHOOOO!!!"
I whirled around. Dad looked up at the waitress that was standing at his table.
"Allergies," he said with a smile.-- PRICELESS!

--And exploding probably wasn't the best first impression to make.-- yeah, probably not :)

Author's Response: Oh crap I didn't even realize I used the phrase 'best of both worlds' lol. That's it...hubby is BANNED from H.M. LoL Nick sneezing was pretty classic...and cheesy. Did anyone tell my man that he's getting too old for the cute stuff? :)

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Date: 10/15/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

--I don't know. She mumbled dad's name and said 'Oh My God' about six times. Before I could ask her what was going on she turned, walked down the hall, and locked herself in the bathroom. Sound familar?"
My eyes widened. I scrambled up into a sitting position. "Oh my god, no WAY. You really don't think so, do you?"-- Woohoo, more Carters :)

--"I'm in the kitchen. Landon decided to see if eggs stuck to the ceiling. It's a mess in here."-- Have a mentioned how much i lUVS Landon?

--It was almost like a SWAT team operation. I could imagine grandpa in his younger days strategizing almost the exact same way.-- hehehehehe, a SWAT operation :)

--"I can't believe this," dad said. "How did this happen?"
I raised a hand and smiled. "I can explain."
Dad pointed a finger at me. "Zip it."-- hehehehe, man, it amazes me how often people say those words ("How did this happen?") when a pregnancy happens.

--"You could," I said. "But my dad just left to catch a flight home."
I flipped my hair. "I'm all alone," I added. I swear that my body was acting without my permission. I actually felt my eyelashes flutter.
Nate laughed. "Well, in that case it's my duty to keep you out of trouble."
"Out of trouble?" I asked. My mouth just couldn't shut up. He walked towards me. His eyes danced playfully. He checked me out.
"Do you like trouble?" he asked. He took my hand.-- Oh, BooBoo....

--He tapped my nose with his other hand. My nose!-- LMAO!

Author's Response: LoL I was having a fun morning in Carterland--can you tell? I love that Nick asked how it happened...I think Liv said that every single time. They should be professionals at this by now, right? :) And Brooke...Nick's gone less than thirty seconds and she's ALREADY flirting with trouble. You got to be wary of those nose taps... :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/15/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

--"Let me get one of you standing there and then I'll do a closeup of your bush."
"A closeup of what?" I asked. My mind had immediately gone to the gutter. Kay would have been proud.-- Oh, BooBoo, we're all proud. Our lil BooBoo is growing up :)

--"What's wrong?"
"I'm stuck," I said. His eyes widened.-- OMG! Totally LIvvy Moment :) LUVS it!

--So did Nate. His bag smacked into my hip. His face smashed right into mine. The bag was annoying.
His face was not.
"Sor-" he started to say, but I didn't give him a chance. I cupped his face to stop its retreat.
And I kissed him.
I don't know what made me do it. I guess I figured if he complained I'd just declare temporary insanity.-- WooHOO! GO Brooke!

--"You're trouble," he said lightly. I wrapped my hands over the door.

"Is that going to be a problem?" I asked. My heart was pounding. I really wanted to get to those lips again. He leaned towards me.

"Lucky for you, I'm a problem solver," he said. I smiled.-- "Problem Solver"... is that what they are calling it these days... LMAO!!!

--I felt like a little kid playing with a match. Nate was the match.
And I was close to setting myself on fire.-- Be very, very careful BooBoo.

--"I'm going to go...somewhere else," he said with a laugh. "You and water running isn't a good combination for me right now."
I blushed. "Why?"
He packed up the laptop and stood up. I was frozen in place. He walked right up to me. His eyes were smouldering.
"Because you're sixteen, you give the best kisses I've ever had, and you look way too good to me right now."
He kissed my forehead. My forehead!
"So you go take a shower." He walked towards the door. "And I'm going to go take mine."-- hehehehehe, cold shower for Mr. Nate? :)

Author's Response: LoL yeah her getting stuck was so totally Livvy. haha yeah I guess problem solver IS what they call it these days!! :) And you better believe that was a cold shower for Mr. Nate...

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/16/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

--"Boy, you're warm. Are you getting sick?"-- yeah, love-sick :)

--idk how i feel about Jane being allowed in Logan's life... or ANY child for that matter

--"But she's...but she's nuts!"-- yeah, that about sums her up

--Angel and I looked at each other. She pointed to the door, winked, and left.
My awesome aunt scored a million points in my book with that move.-- Yeah, Auntie Angel is just awesome like that :)

--"But I'm anatomically correct!" I blurted out.-- OMG!! LUVS it!!!

--"I'm going to go," he said slowly. We both exhaled at the same time. "Before the dressing room becomes an un-dressing room."-- smart move, buddy...

--BTW... i like Trevor... but i'm starting to fall more into team Nate... Trevor better show up soon if he wants to change my mind...




LJ--
--"Only you, Liv."-- yep, only Livvy :)

--Feathers.-- was this a Twilight reference? :)

--"Oh my god, you're not human."-- Nope, my Nicky has super-sperm, remember :)

--I just needed to be alone and away from the male Carters in my life.-- Yeah, specially the one that caused the 'problem' to begin with :)

--TWINS!! Woohoo!!

--"It's...not a baby," I said.-- I luv Liv

--You know what's awesome?" I said. He turned.
"What?"
I smiled. "You getting a vasectomy."
The smile left his face. "Hey, now...wait..."-- LMAO @ Nick's reaction to getting a vasectomy :)

Author's Response: Haha like I mentioned to someone else. Trevor will be back in the next chapter or two. Then the fun REALLY begins. Feathers was not a purposely done Twilight reference. Nick didn't harm any pillows in the making of his babies, haha. LoL the smile leaving Nick's face plays out in my mind everytime I re-read that. I can imagine that face of his, haha

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/18/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

--"So you're not going to give me a digital boob job?" I asked. I had given up on worrying about my mouth censor. It was completely and utterly broken around him.-- i luvs my Boo Boo! "broken mouth censor" cracks me up!

--Nate's eyes sparkled. His eyes scanned the area around us and then focused right down into my clevage. The hand that was resting on my knee trailed up my body. He grabbed my breast for just a second before sliding his arm around me.
"They're perfectly fine," he diagnosed.
My mouth flapped like a fish out of water. I wanted to say something witty, but he had just grabbed my boob! He chuckled, leaned over, and kissed me.-- oooh, Nate's getting a lil gutsy, with Auntie Angel sitting so close!

-- "Well, I don't want you to spazz," she warned.

"What? I don't spazz!" I said. Nate snorted. I smacked his shoulder. "Who is it?"-- heeheehee, yeah, right baby girl!

--"Brooke, come out of the bathroom. We're almost ready to buckle up again and you need to be back in your seat," Angel said. She tapped on the door again.-- lmao @ her running to the bathroom... like mother, like daughter :)

--Dad laughed. "Twins."
"And she didn't kill you?"
Dad stopped laughing.
"Let's not get into that right now."-- LMAO!

--I had no idea where Grenadine was staying. Not that I cared. I didn't. Not at all. Uh-uh.-- sure, ya don't, BooBoo... :)

--Aw, i do hope that she gives him a chance to explain. i am almost positive it has something to do the his a**hole parents...

Author's Response: Nate was totally gutsy considering Angel was sitting behind them.. Dont think he would have tried that 'smooth move' with daddy sitting there. :) I love that Brooke hightailed it to the bathroom...it is like mother, like daughter! LoL And you're right..she wasn't very convincing when she said she didn't care with Grenadine was staying, lol. Knowing my Brookie she'll give him a chance to explain. :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/18/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

--"Stop doing the bathroom dance and knock," Kay whispered.-- Kay is hilarious!

--She started going through them. After a minute she held up a box of condoms and shook them in my direction.-- Well, at least we know he's planning on being safe... ? hehehehe

--He didn't have a good voice. But what he lacked in musical ability he made up for with the way he moved his body. A rush of delicious wet heat rushed south. It became worse when he dropped his towel.

My mouth opened; I couldn't contain the moan that was going to burst forth. Before it could escape, Kay clamped my hand over my mouth. I exhaled hot heavy breath against her fingers.-- Thank God Kay was there to clamp that hand over Brooke's mouth! LMAO! i couldn't imagine if he had caught them...

--lol @ Kay hiding her face

--"Is it hot in here? It's hot in here," I complained.-- heeheehee...

--"That shower head looks like it'll do a good job!" she teased.-- Oh, Kay! She is having way to much fun teasing Brooke!

Author's Response: Kay so totally rocked this chapter--Brooke was perfect entertainment.for my Kay-d bug. :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/18/10 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

--I blinked. I knew I was supposed to do something, but what? Oh right!-- Gotta luv the brain fart moments!

--Kay laughed. "Girl time? Don't be silly. That comes way later tonight. You up for a panty pillow fight BooBoo?"-- Like i said before, she is having WAY too much fun teasing Brooke!

--"Well," Nate said lightly. He winked at me.
"Looks like I'm just going to have to work harder."
He walked up to me, kissed my cheek (my cheek!) and left. Kay walked over and grabbed my arm.
"If he works any harder, I'm going to have to get parental permission to watch this unfold," Kay said. "He's pushing NC-17."
All I could do was nod. My thoughts were already X-rated.-- oh, i have a feeling this is gonna be either really good, or really, really bad...

--"Did you like what you saw today?" he whispered as we swayed. I lifted my head.
"What I saw?" I asked in confusion. My pulse picked up. The dimple came out in full force.
"It was hard not to notice your blue eyes poking out from under my bed," he said huskily.
I moaned. He knew!--OMG! He saw her! Holy crap! Time to die of embarassment!

--I knew that if Kay hadn't been there that I probably would have skipped dinner.
I wanted to go straight for dessert.-- good thing Kay was there, then, huh? :)

Author's Response: It's SUCH a good thing Kay was there. Her dad's impulsivity is coming out right now and that's DANGEROUS. :) Of course I think it's totally hot that Nate knew she was there the whole time. haha But in real life I would have DIED of embarassment...

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/18/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

--"It was fun," Kay said. There was no sarcasm in her voice. She smiled at me.
My bestie approved.-- Yay! Kay approves :)

--When we got back to the hotel, Kay slid into the room claiming that she needed to floss. It was a lame excuse, but it left me and Nate out in the hall.-- "I gotta floss" luv that excuse!

--Somehow that little kiss landed me against the wall. Nate's hands returned to the back of my dress. They slid under my panties and grabbed my bare ass. I gasped. My fingers clawed into his hair. This was bad.
In a good way.
With his leverage on what I always considered too much backside, he pulled me forward for our groins to meet. I about died when I felt his erection. His lips fell from mine. His dark head lowered to my neck and sucked greedily.
When he finally looked up, I was sure that he was going to scoop me up and take me back to his bedroom. Instead he stroked my face.
"Sweet dreams," he whispered.
"But--" I started to say. He kissed me quickly and walked down the hall. I didn't move until I heard his door close.-- Damn, i think I was just as disappointed as she was! rotflol!

--"Need another shower?" Kay teased the moment I entered the room.-- KAY! Quit teasing my Booboo! hehehehe

--The revelation didn't shock me. Ever since the night at the hotel, I had a feeling that my bestie and my brother were going to end up together.

And I was okay with that.

NoNo was a great guy. And Kay was a great girl.

I loved them both with all my heart.-- YAY! Booboo approves of Kay & NoNo!!

Author's Response: LoL flossing is TOTALLY a good excuse to give your bestie makeout time :) I had to laugh when you said YOU were disappointed! Nate's just that good I guess, lol. :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/19/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

first off, isn't this chapter twelve? the header says eleven :)
Now for the review:

--"I didn't mean any of the things I said. I didn't want to break up with you. My mom called me that night at the hotel screaming. Dad was going beserk. I took the first flight I could back home. Things were a mess. Mom ended up in the hospital; she lost the baby. And dad...well, dad suddenly wasn't happy that I left in the first place. He made me call you. It was either call you and be an asshole or watch him punch my nine-month old brother in the face."-- I KNEW it had to do with his father. God, he needs to get himself & his mom and siblings out of there.

--"I know," he said. His voice took on a hard edge. "I went to the police. Like I said in my note, these past few weeks have been a nightmare. My mom checked into alcohol rehab; grandma took my little sister and two younger brothers. Dad's sitting in jail. And my management team has been working tooth and nail to keep the paparazzi oblivious."-- THANK GOD they're out of that situation.

--I blushed. I was so confused. He was being so open and honest with me. I could understand why he had to lie. But things were complicated.
There was a little someone called Nate in my life now too.-- Aw, poor BooBoo, i sure hope she can figure this out

--I thought about how I felt that night in the hotel room. I still harbored a lingering bit of rejection. But I also harbored love and gratitude for him. After all, I would never be able to forget how he had come to my aid when I had been at my most vulnerable.-- I don't think she ever really had *those* feelings for him. I think it was really just the sorta hero-worship thing going on, cuz he was there for her after the Garrett thing.

--"I'm fluent in French and English but not in 'er,'" he teased.-- Nate is frickin awesome :)

--"So I don't stand a chance do I?" Nate asked.
"NO!" I said loudly. I clapped my free hand over my mouth. Landon wasn't the only one in the family who needed volume control.-- hehehehe

--Nate smiled. "Well, y'know," he said lightly. "we are both teenagers. And teenagers date. People."
He squeezed my hand. It felt nice.
"Are you saying that maybe I can see both of you?" I asked.-- I luv, luv, LUV, that he gave her an option, rather than some kind of ultimatum. Like i said I like Nate :)

--"You can buy something sexy, but you have to wear it during my time," Nate teased.-- ROTFLMAO!

--I watched him walk towards the weight machine. He slowly eased himself down. His legs spread out to balance the weight. I had a total 'Kay' moment in wanting to try to peek up his shorts (not that I didn't know what was up there). Between that thought and the sheer idea of his muscles rippling as he did reps was too much for me. I made a beeline for the door.-- Run, BooBoo, run!

Author's Response: LoL it is now Chapter 12. That's what I get for updating so early. :) I love reading your reviews and comments especially when you said that Trevor and fam have to get out of the situation and then the next line you were like THANK GOD. Cracks me up in a good way :) I love that Nate doesn't speak 'er' haha. He was pretty cool giving Ms. Brooke an option. That also helps my story out - thanks Nate! ::waves::

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/21/10 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

--Anyone that dated me had to like Kay. After sixteen years as besties, we were kind of a package deal.-- NATE likes kay, (wink, wink)

--Trevor's reaction to the situation kinda sux

--I kicked off my shoes. "Kay's also going to be there," I added. I hadn't wanted to come right out and discuss her, but I figured there were other ways to get to the point of the matter. This was my first tactic. I hoped it would work.- YAY, she's gonna talk about Kay :)

--"No, not at all. It's just...I owe her an apology."--- heeheehee, smart boy :)

--My initial thought was 'hell, yeah!' My second thought was that they needed a chaperone. My third thought was that I wasn't setting a great example lately to even think of being their chaperone. My last thought was that they deserved an actual date.
"Go on," I said. I waved at the door. "Enjoy yourselves."
Kay nudged Noah aside and poked her head in. "Are you sure?" she asked. She looked totally happy. If I wasn't sure before, I was now.
"Absolutely," I said. "Go."-- aw, the first date! CAn't wait to read that in FA :)

--Noah was staying with Nate. That could be interesting. Or bad. Or both.-- I'ma go with BAD... :)

--How much trouble could we get into?-- famous last words :)

MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/23/10 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

WOOHOO! UR BACK!! OMG, u are so lucky!! Whhy couldn't ya tell us before? did they make ya sign a confidentiality agreement? hahaha j/k... When does it air? Aw, a Briam air-kiss, so cool! And yay for Kevvy showing up :)
Now un-mush so we can have more awesome stories :P
p.s.- i prolly woulda spazzed too. (in the bathroom, of course!)

--So that was how Nate and I ended up in my bedroom twenty minutes later waiting for Thirst for Blood 2 to start. The TV in the lounge didn't have the right connection to watch movies.

I had to wonder if that was some sort of fate.-- and again, it seems technology is guiding her, heeheehee...

--He shifted his weight over me and in a second I was enclosed in a giant Nate cocoon.-- mmm.... a Nate cocoon... sounds nice :)

--Sanity struggled with my recklessness. I knew that this probably shouldn't happen. I mean, I wanted to give Trevor a chance. I was still confused.

But my body wasn't confused. The dial was cranked to max and was screaming to feel what I had never experienced before.-- uh-oh... i smell trouble...

--I knew I didn't want to give myself time to think. Mom always said dad was the first man that had caused her common sense to jump out the window.

Nate seemed to do the same for me.

He smiled and took my hands. As if they were baby birds, he looped his fingers with my own. His frame lowered onto mine. I buried my face into his neck and kissed the solid muscle.

"I want to see those pretty blue eyes," he whispered. I wasn't expecting that. My head fell back against the pillow. I was lost in his own beautiful evergreens.

He was so gentle...way more gentle than I had thought he might be. Our gaze didn't break as he entered me but as I exhaled a long shaky breath I didn't know I was holding, he gave me a soft kiss.

"You okay?" he asked. I nodded. I was okay. I was perfect. I was...

I was hopelessly lost in the moment. -- Aw, so very sweet... But... where was the CONDOM? are we gonna have another Shelby on our hands, here? I certainly hope not....

Author's Response: We were told in the email that due to surprises and the BSB appearance that we weren't allowed to say anything on any web outlet. They probably didn't want a BSB mob (even though BSB mobs can be fun, haha) We're not going to have another Shelby on our hands don't worry. I thought I had written in the condom part (because I told someone else I did) but after reading back I see that I didn't. So just rest assured that Brooke won't be a Shelby!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/24/10 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

--Kay pulled a long strand of hair from her face and wrapped it around the barrel. "Brookie, I claimed the Carters a long time ago."

I laughed. I neglected to remind her of all the years she had called Noah an ornery brat.-- heehheeheehee :)

--Unfortunately, I found out once the three of us got our clearance badges and headed backstage. Nate and Trevor were staring each other down.

This couldn't be good.-- And so it begins... :-|

--"So then what's up with Nate? He freakin' spent half the night working on pictures of you for the website. And he asked me all kinds of questions this morning."

"Questions? What kind of questions?"

Noah snickered. I stomped my foot. "NOAH!"

"Questions you would ask if you were thinking about a relationship," he said. "What the hell are you doing?"-- hehehehe, i knew that those two sharing a room would be bad :)

--I knew what Trevor wanted to talk to her about. I just hoped that she wasn't going to kick or hit him.-- oooh, i hope Kay wallops him good :)

--"Only Trev insists on singing live," Devon said. "But his voice ends up being jumpy."

"So? It's better than looking like a puppet," Trevor shot back hotly.-- I LUV that Trevor sings live, sux that the others don't :( And that it is causing an obvious split in the group

I was doomed. I had two amazing kissers on my hands. Most girls would say I was a lucky bitch.

I was saying that the whole thing was a problem.

A problem I didn't know how to fix.-- Honey, you are not doomed, there is an east fix to this.... PICK NATE! :)

Author's Response: LoL I know you're team Nate but Brooke's team confused. That's my story and I'm stickin' to it :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/24/10 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Just read the LJ exclusive... here's the review :)

--"How many male groupies does she have following her?" Bri teased. I made a face.
"I'm not thinking about that."-- aw, poor nicky would have a heart attack if he really thought about all the boys... (or even just the one... or two)

--"Stefie's sick," he said.-- oh, no! I hope she's okay :(

--I knew that Ally and Stefie had gotten pretty close lately. That's what happened when all of us decided to have kids at the same time. Friendships formed. And in some cases...romance.-- ain't that the truth :)

--"BUTTONS! LOOK AT ALL THE BUTTONS!"-- God, i f*****n luv Landon :)

--"Mommy said she's gotta poop," he said seriously. I glanced up at Liv. She smiled.-- Again, LUV Landon :)

--"Where's your girl?" Landon asked as if nothing had happened. AJ smiled.
"What girl?"
"The red one!"-- And, yet again, LUV him!

--AJ looked at me. "She's in Kentucky."
"Why's she there?"
"That's where she lives."
"Why?"
AJ sighed. "Because that's where her mommy lives now."
"That's stupid!" Landon exclaimed. AJ smiled.
"Tell me about it."-- Aw, poor AJ, i know it's gotta be so hard to be away from his daughter & grandbaby :(

--"Alright, we're out!" he said. He flapped his little hand in the air. "C'mon mom!"-- you know what's coming now, don't ya? LUVS him :)

--I glanced over to the couch. Livvy was fast asleep. I didn't know how she could have dozed off with the screeching and the loud voices, but she had.-- When my aunt is really, really deep asleep, the only thing that wakes her up is if someone (anyone, really) says "mommy"

--"The babies are growling!" he said. He pressed his ear close to Liv's stomach and squinched his eyes shut. From the moment we explained to Landon about the babies, he had become obsessed with Liv's stomach.-- OMG, again, LUV him! He's so frickin' cute!

--"Liv told Leigh she was pregnant but she didn't mention twins," Brian said. "I'm surprised you're not dead."-- we're ALL surprised he's not dead, lmao :)

--"He's not dead because he's getting neutered."-- hehehehe, i would so LMAO if even that doesn't work!

--I glanced back at the door. Landon was dancing around Liv. She was rubbing her eye. I had a feeling that while my back was turned Landon ended up poking her to see if she was still alive. He always did that whenever either of us were asleep and he wasn't.-- hehehehehehe... i think Landon pretty much dominated this LJ exclusive :)

--"I jabber-ed them with my elbowy bone." He held up his arm. I laughed.-- OMG TFF!! 'jabber-ed' & 'elbowy'.... my two new favorite words :)

--"No, what would be funny is if that still doesn't work," Brian said.-- omg, Bri & me are on the same wave-length.... trippy hehehehe

--"The best part is it's probably genetic. I feel sorry for the girl who ends up with Noah."
The look on Brian's face was priceless.
It was my turn to grin.-- omg, i almost feel out of my chair here!

Author's Response: Landon so rocked my exclusive. I f'ing love my littlest Carter. There's nothing cuter than a three/four year old. And you're right..it's KILLING AJ that Shel and Brenna are in Kentucky. No wonder Kevin didn't come back to record...he's relishing in being grandpa. ::sigh::

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/27/10 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Okay, so apparently my last three reviews didn't post, so i'm re-reviewing :) Here goes

*CHAPTER 16*

--I frowned. "There's only two," I said.

"That's one too many," he replied.-- ain't that the truth :(

--"It's okay," he assured. I knew it was okay. Less aunt time meant more Kay time.

My brother was easy to figure out sometimes.-- it's not just your brother, hunny... guys & girls alike all want alone time :)

--"I'm going to take the top bunk. It looks like your dad was eating Fritos in the lower one," Angel chided. I laughed.-- i can picture nick laying in bed eating Frito's :)

--I was glad that I Kay had been there to talk to when the whole thing with Nate happened. Even so, I felt like I needed to confide in someone else.

I needed my mom.-- BFF's are good, but sometimes ya just gotta talk to mommy :)

-- smiled. I realized that Peyton was probably in school. Mom actually had some rare alone time.

And she was giving it to me.-- Livvy rocks... 'course, we all know that already :)

--"He's a natural all right," I said. It came out dirtier than I had intended it to.

"Why don't I like the sound of that?" mom said suspiciously.-- cuz u know your daughter? :) hehehehe

--"Noah and Kay went and saw a movie and Nate stayed with me to watch a movie and..."

"Brooklyn, did he sleep with you?" mom asked.-- Good Livvy, straight to the point :)

--Mom sighed. "I think it's time you fill your prescription for birth control."

"They don't work for you," I pointed out.-- No, no, they don't hahahaha!

--"Sam told me that Nate's ex-girlfriend just had a baby a couple months ago. He might be the father."-- Damn, i knew my Nate wasn't perfect, but I think I still like him more than trevor :(

--"Those twinnies are going to have the best mom ever," I said. Silence stretched out. Then I heard Mom sniffle.

"Aww, sweetie...thank you."-- so true :) Luvs Livvy :)

--The Carter men weren't the only ones that had a 'temper' problem. Mine was bubbling just under the surface. Besides, I was feeling the beginnings of wicked cramps. I cracked my knuckles.

With PMS thrown into the mix, it wasn't going to take much for me to explode.

Things just might get messy.-- Run, Nate, RUN!!!




*CHAPTER 17*

--"We need to talk."-- Four words no guy really wants to hear :(

--"I talked to my mom last night. Why didn't you tell me about your ex?"-- I luv that BooBoo is so direct, just like her mom

--I needed an Advil. I needed a heating pad.

I needed a punching bag.-- :::hands BoBoo a punching bag, some advil, and a heating pad:::

--It didn't take long for news to travel.-- it never does :(

--Even if I did win one. Or two. Or three!-- you're gonna win all three, BooBoo :)




*CHAPTER 18*

--"Is this about the two chimps following you around?"-- hehehe, chimps... :)

--It was a perfect working relationship. If he went with me, I was guaranteed a drama-free night.

I could so use one of those.-- yes, yes you could Brookey :)

--"Desert lilies," he said. "I figured they were the perfect Arizona concert flower."-- lil suck-up

--Trevor really was beginning to look like a clone.

It was kind of a creepy thought.-- yeah, kinda creepy...

--"You'd seriously take your brother instead of me?"-- See, this is why i'm no longer a big fan of Trevor... he seems like he gets jealous too easy...

--"You know, I'd appreciate it if you pulled your chauvinistic pig head out of your ass," I snapped.-- You tell him, BooBoo :)

--"You're so hot," he said huskily. I hadn't realized his lips had left mine. His hand snaked under the top of my shirt. He squeezed my breast. I wrapped my hand around his arm.

"We've got a show to do," I said.-- i think she likes Nate more... even if he, technically, lied about maybe being a baby-daddy...

--Plus, what would happen if the guys found out I had slept with both of them? Or worse yet, what would the paparazzi do with the information if they found out?-- things would get very ugly, very fast :(




*CHAPTER 19*

--"Not really. Your dad's having a minor thing done at the hospital today."-- uh-oh... V-day is upon us :::sob::: no more lil Nicky's :'(

--"If I don't see you again remember that I love you," he said woefully.-- so overdramatic, LUVS it :)

--Jasper nodded. "Your little blonde boytoy was telling the dark haired doofus that you were taking him. I'd figured I'd rain on his parade."-- stoopid boys... :-

--"You hide well," I said. "But not well enough."-- I think you mean NATE SAID, right?

--He stretched out his legs. "I had a nice afternoon in town," he said lightly. "I got a DNA swab done."-- woohoo! yay for "babydaddy" :) I knew i still liked Nate :)

--His eyes crinkled up. The dimple appeared. "Well, I realized I don't like Brooke Carter mad at me."-- smart realization :)

--"Would you kick me in the balls if I kissed you right now?" he asked.

Every fiber of my body wanted to scream no and just let him do it. I took a deep breath.

"Probably," I said.-- hahahaha

Author's Response: Review-o rama! I actually meant for Brooke to say that Nate hides well. I had that one right, lol. I think Brooke likes the one she's with at the moment the best...that's whats making her so damn confused! She needs to keep zipping some more harsh comments their way and standing up for herself. But we'll see if that happens. Sometimes my fingers have a mind of their own! :) And yes, it's V-Day for Nickers!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed
Date: 10/29/10 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

--"You're the busiest sixteen year old girl I know," my stylist said.-- of course she is... Carters don't do things the easy way :)

--This was the Trevor that I liked.-- notice she said "liked" not "loved" (yeah, i know, she hasn't said she loves Nate yet, but still....)

--"Someone might walk in," he moaned.

It was sad that he was trying to be the voice of reason. Hadn't I just said I was in charge of my own destiny?

"I don't care," I said.-- BROOKLYN NICHOLE CARTER!

----Trevor looked like he was going to pass out. Instead, he reached up above me. When he stood up I saw that he had wrangled the long weight bar from it's holder. He walked to the door and propped it under the knob.

"Problem solved," he said.-- smart thinking, Horn-dog


--Part of me realized that he probably thought I was a virgin. I suspected that he had been. I wasn't about to break his bubble in the middle of the experience.-- probably wouldn't be the bestest time break that particular bubble... tho you'll have to at some point, honey

--"I love you," he said into my clammy skin. His hand slid down my body like I was precious glass. "I knew you would choose me."

My heart stopped. He loved me? He thought I had made up my mind?-- Stoopid, pig-headed boy... just cuz hormones got in the way... doesn't mean she chose you

--Oh crap.-- You don't know the half of it, Brooklyn... this is gonna be bad... i can see it now...

Author's Response: I love how you said Trev's a horndog. Noah kinda pulled the same thing at the pool. Lmao. We just love Noah more, right? :) Hmm I agree...I think this is gonna be bad... :)