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Sci-fi/AU. The story of five brothers and friends who have to fight together to save the human race while learning that they are not as human as they seem. (Warning: Strong language)
OMG! OMG! OMG! Has it really been four years? I don't care! I'm just really glad you are continuing this story. Even not being with the others for years, there is still a connection for AJ. I love his reaction to seeing the older Nick. On some level, AJ knew something had happen to Kevin; this was the reason for his "dream" four years ago. Of course, we know Kevin isn't really dead....right?
Glad you're back! I'll be looking forward to the next update.
Pammy Whammy
Pam, is that you? Because I got a little confused by the name Balance hehe. Thank you for the review and yes, in fiction it has been four years... in real life more like almost six lol As for Kevin, I will have to keep writing (I'm trying not to stop) and you will have to keep reading :)
So happy for the update! I love the way you intermingle the flashbacks into the present story. And again, I'm drawn to the way you write about the relationships between the guys....it's the way I tend to imagine them.
Keep updating, Marina, and I'll keep reading.
Pammy Whammy
I'll keep writing Pam. Not so frequent updates because, well it's me lol but I'll keep writing for sure so thank you soooo much for reading it and reviewing it :)
It's been a long time since that night that forever changed the Richardson family. They tried to move on, but certain events and a new case reunite old friends and a past that haunts will bring them back to harms way.
Mare,
Will you be completing this story?
Come little children, follow me and you will see, that there is no harm nor sin in playing with me. Tell someone, anyone that you’ll no longer be around, for once you play, your soul is apart of my playground.Please, please, let's have an update!
Pammy Whammy
The boys are in one hell of a ride when they get picked up by four men, okay not really picked up, more like taken against there will. What do this men have in store for the boys? And is there anyway that they can get out, before things get even out of hand?
Yes, that's me. I would love for you to post Juppy again.
Pammy Whammy
Hey....when will we be getting an update to this story?
Pammy Whammy
I'll start writing the next chapter once I get home. Or I may start on it while I'm at school.
P.S. I think I remember you, weren't you the one who asked my about Juppy the vampire, but I got read of it? I'm actually thinking about rewriting it again.
Things have been weird, I keep having these strange dreams, a man with long white hair comes to me and says he wants to take me away. That we belong together and that he will take good care of me. He touches me, holds me close, But then I wake up, feeling weird. but never forgetting the man with the white long hair and golden eyes, and the last words he says to me. 'I'll never let anyone have you.' I never know what he means. Well, I got to go Kevin's calling me. See you soon. Bye.
This story really did start off with a bang! So, I'm guessing that all the Boys, except Nick, are vamps. And who is this mysterious man that Nick is dreaming about? I am anxiously awaiting more.
Pammy
So, did you forget about this story? I would truly love to read more.
Pammy Whammy
Ooooh....a cliffie! Great job at building the suspense. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Will we be getting an update, soon?
Please......would love to read more of this!
I love it! Sending them all to Timeout.....hilarious!
Author's Response: lol, grown men being sent to bed without supper! glad you liked it!
You know I'm curious.....and even more curious since I have read "An Ideal Marriage"...... who is Nicky's mystery man that he's leaving in the morning? I like this Nick! He's a lot more confident than he appears in AIM.
I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Pammy Whammy
I can't believe that I'm seeing this series here! I've been missing my Nick/Kevin love and you know that I love your stories. I am anxiously awaiting the next part to this story and the continuation of the series.
Pammy Whammy
First, happy belated birthday CJ!
The best laid plans of stepmothers and stepsisters..... I'm so glad Robert was one step ahead!
Now, I'm a little confused....are Kevin's parents still alive?
"I wish you hadn’t made such a bad and weak impression with the Richardson’s honey,” Monique said with a sigh.
“It’s not my fault they love precious Nick so much,” Annaliese said angrily.
Now, this seems to say that they are alive. Maybe it's because I'd been reading AIM, but I thought they had died.
But anyway, I love this chapter and can hardly wait for the next. Good job, CJ and Jaime.
Pammy Whammy
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