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Last Christmas by rebellious_one Rated: PG-13 [ - ]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Brian had the perfect trip planned out for the group, in hopes to recapture and relive the good times and enjoy one of the greatest gift life has to offer, friendship. What wasn’t planned was the unimaginable event that would occur, turning their trip into an unforgettable one and a fight for survival.


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group
Genres: Action, Drama, Humor, Suspense
Warnings: Graphic Violence
 Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 54216
Read Count: 63069


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Published: 12/22/09 » Updated: 11/09/11
Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 12/27/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think I know exactly what or WHO the other gift to the guys is!! I can't wait to see if I am right! I freaking loved the parts where the guys were ragging on AJ's style because I dress like AJ and everyone comments on the fact that I only wear black and have a bunch of skull stuff. This is entertaining as hell, Please update soon!!

Author's Response: Haha, I had to bring up AJ's style somewhere in the story, because as I was writing, I was like, "Hmm... I can totally picture AJ being the only dude rocking dark colors and skulls during Christmas time.", lol. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 01/06/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yes!! An update! I laughed my ass off through out this entire chapter. Your banter between Kevin and AJ is hilarious! You can tell AJ totally misses having Kevin around even if he is constantly riding his ass about something. Nick and AJ's whole deal in the shower about acting gay and Nick's "penis hair cut" had me busting a gut!! I remember a thread on LD about that hair cut, otherwise I would of had no clue what he was going on about!! LMFAO!! This story gets better with every chapter!! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hahaha, I'm really glad that you laughed your ass off and really enjoyed this chappy. I LOVE writing banter, well, dialogue in general for these guys. And over at LD, I'm always and forever the only one that'll really refer to Nick's hairstyle back then as the "penis hairstyle", all thanks to VH1, LMAO. But thank you sooo much for reviewing hun, and I'm working on that update! :D

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 01/01/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I knew it was Kevin!! Haha.. "Lord Richardson"... I just LOVE how you write the interaction among the guys. It just seems so accurate. I cannot wait for the action to begin! I am always anxiously waiting for an update! Happy New Year!

Author's Response:

Haha, it was quite predictable, wasn't it? Lol. And thank you sooo much for your compliment about the way I write the interaction between the guys. For some reason, people on LD point out that the dialogue and interactions I make up for the guys is on point, and it makes me feel good to hear that, it inspires and encourages me, so thank you again. :)

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 12/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh man this is gonna be really good! I laughed my ass off at the banter between Nick and AJ! I could definately see Nick frolicing thru the snow and AJ being an ass and taping him! LOL I am so wondering what is gonna happen to them. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Haha, banter between Nick and AJ are my fave!! Thank you sooo much for reviewing hun, I really hope I can deliver with this story. :)

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 01/14/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Nick and AJ are such freakin' CHILDREN! LOL Putting things in the cart while their "daddy" isn't looking... LOL and Ewwww Bran Nuts!? C'mon Kev, stop being such an old man!

Ok, at first I thought all the danger was going to come from the snow storm, but right at the end when you mentioned the hidden car... wow man, I have a very bad feeling about whoever is in that car. I love your drama/suspense stories and I'm sure this is just gonna be full of angsty goodness! *waits anxiously*

Author's Response:

I was giggling the whole time I was writing this scene. I mean, cause first of all, it's something we can totally picture both AJ and Nick doing while they're shopping with Kevin, and second of all, it was personal for me because that's something I used to do when I went shopping with my daddy... throw stuff in the cart without him knowing about it until we were at the checkout line, lmao. And yups, Kevin is totally an old man, wanting his freaking Bran Nuts, lmao.

Anywho, I'm sooo glad that you enjoy my drama/suspense stories! :D Thank you sooo much for your review hun! :)

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 01/16/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I was eating while reading this and that was a huge mistake since I nearly spit eggplant lasagna all over my computer from laughing so hard!! Jesus Christ, this is hilarious! My fave lines are :

“Have you paid a visit to the lavatories this morning by the way? To drop your kids off at the pool? If not, I implore that you go and please know that I offer my assistance in wiping your ass.”

"...But this dipshit on the other hand seriously thought it was okay to throw a Poptart in the microwave.”

“I’m so locking my door tonight. And I’m setting traps so in case the asshole decides to wake me up early again, he’ll be in for a lovely surprise.”

I seriously DO NOT trust this Adrianna chick right now. I am getting the feeling the guys might end up in some scary shit like the movie "The Strangers"

Author's Response: LMAO, totally did not mean to make you choke on your food! Haha. Maybe I should've put warnings in the beginning of my chapters, lol. But um, the humor will kinda start to die down now, as we get more into... the suspenseful stuff. Chee hee!! And I'm totally glad you enjoyed those lines hun, I got a kick outta writing those lines myself, lol. And yanno, I have yet to see that movie, but I've seen that other movie with the two dudes, brothers I believe, who come across this family and they act completely weird, only to take the family as hostages and play their weird, psychotic and deadly games with them. Not sure if you seen that movie. O.o But thanks for the review hun! :)

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 01/17/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Shit's gonna hit the fan now! Man, as much as I loathe the idea of something bad happening to the boys, I sure do LOVE to read fic about it! The more bad stuff the better! Yes, in the fanfic world I am a sadist. Brian's my fave, so I like to read about him getting hurt more than the other guys. Geez I'm sick. LOL

I am loving these fast updates! You would be surprised how many times I check for updates on this story! I really do have a life, I swear! LOL

Author's Response: Haha, yes, shit will hit the fan! Lol. And I think in the fanfic world, we all love it when something happens to our favorite guys for some reason, lol. Perhaps because we love how the attention is drawn towards them and like to read how they triumph over the peril they face. And aww hun, you're too cute, checking back on my story, lol. Thank you soooo for sticking with my story and for all your reviews, really means a lot to me! :)

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 01/23/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh, I so freakin' HATE you right now!! That was a cliffhanger from hell! But two chapters in one day is SWEET!! :) I have a feeling they are all gonna get the shit kicked outta them. Yay for suspense and drama! My addiction is being fed. LOL. It just keeps getting better and better.... :)

Author's Response: Aww, I swear, I love reading your reviews, lol. And thank you for putting up with my mean self with these damn cliffhangers, I swear, ya'll are all so patient and gracious, lol. Glad my story is helping to feed your addiction though! :D Now, if only MY addiction was fed, I think I'll crack out updates more often, haha. Hey, a writer's gotta read too yanno, lol. Thanks for the review Ashley! :)

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 01/26/10 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I knew that bitch was in on it! Wow, AJ's mouth is so gonna get him in trouble. I wonder what these two want from them, or maybe they are just sadistic enough to want nothing but to inflict pain on others? hmmm....

I'm loving the quick updates! Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: Mhmm, AJ's got a potty mouth! *giggles*

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 02/07/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Another cliffhanger!?!

*massive evil glare*

You are going to seriously KILL me! Shit, it looks like their escape plan just got busted. They need to get their asses outta there before those others show up! Once again, this story kicks major ass! Please keep the updates rolling!

Author's Response: Bwahahahahaha!! You know you lurve me!! :D Thanks for all your support and encouragement Ash, means a lot to me! :)

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 02/07/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Another cliffhanger!?!

*massive evil glare*

You are going to seriously KILL me! Shit, it looks like their escape plan just got busted. They need to get their asses outta there before those others show up! Once again, this story kicks major ass! Please keep the updates rolling!

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 02/11/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

You shot Kevin, you meanie!! LOL Very suspenseful chapter! I love all the BSB beating up you are doing. Give Brian a good beating just for me, K? LOL Yeah, the sadist in me is coming out. So, Nick and AJ are hatching a plan? That is scary... o_O Love the quick updates!

Author's Response: Haha, I'll try to beat Brian up in some form, way or fashion. ;) LOL.

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 05/09/10 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well, it's about freakin' time you updated!! LOL J/K... I can imagine how bad writers block can be, But, you pulled off one hell of a chapter! I'm amazed that AJ and Nick's plan has worked so far. And I just love your bad ass AJ! If any of the guys could whoop some ass, it would AJ. I really want to know how Brian, Kev, and Howie are doing. Awesome chapter, please update soon!

Author's Response: I know, I know... but having you lovely ladies get on my case about updating is what helps me! Lol. And yeah, we could all pretty much imagine how AJ would be in this situation; not wanting to touch the guns, not wanting to beat up any dudes and chip his fingernail polish, not really doing much of anything in hopes of NOT getting shot. So, I was like, eh, what the hell, lets have AJ be badass, but also shone some light on his "not so violent" side with him having the option of shitting his pants and getting them recaptured, lol. Thanks for the review Ashley! :)

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 06/03/10 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh fuck. Howie, Brian and Kevin are in some deep shit. Hopefully Nick and AJ get help, unless they are caught first. That 'one man down' remark was very clever, the way you made it seem like a good thing at first with one of the bad guys down, but then it turned itself around and also meant one 'good' guy down, meaning Kev. :( Love it!!! Please update soon!

Author's Response: OMG, soooo glad that you were able to point that out. It's EXACTLY the thought I wanted to cross the readers minds, but wasn't sure if it would; you simply confirmed that, so thank you! :)

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed
Date: 06/14/10 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Go Brian! I love when he uses nasty words... LMAO! I can't wait to find out what these psychos want. I feel so bad for poor kev! Awesome as hell, as usual! Keep up the quick updates!!

Author's Response: Oooooh, me too girl... me too! I love badass Brian. ;)