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American Honey by evergreenwriter83 Rated: R [ - ]
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My name's Brooke Carter and I'm sixteen years old. There's two important things you should know about me...

Number One: My first single hit #1 on the Billboard charts on my fifteenth birthday.

Number Two: I'm still a virgin...even though the whole world thinks differently.

Being famous isn't easy, but finding true love is even harder.

(part of the Coaster Girls series; a spin-off to the Coaster Series)
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Assault/Rape, Sexual Content
 Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 65170
Read Count: 102607


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Published: 09/03/10 » Updated: 09/20/10
Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 09/18/10 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I feel bad for Brooke. She probably didn't picture her going to the prom like this. You can sense her disappointment. Garrett is a jerk. I can't believe he dressed like a pimp. Well, I actually can....what a loser.

Author's Response: LoL yeah between HAVING to wear a red dress and then him looking like a freakin idiot...I think everyone feels for Brooke right now!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 09/18/10 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Garrett is a piece of work. Trying to get his 15 seconds of fame. Sad thing that is all he is going to get. What a jerk!!!!!

I hope that nothing bad happens for Brooke. Sure a boring and annoying time is bad, but I hope nothing worse happens. She is such a sweetheart.

Author's Response: LoL I wouldn't even give him ten seconds of fame, but y'know. :)

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 09/18/10 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Garrett is such a major asshole. I knew he was using her. He knew how to manipulate her to think he was a sweet guy. He knew making a move on Kay would get Brooke upset. What an ass!

Yay for Nick! He was a smart dad for making her learn self defense. It finally came in handy.

Don't mess with a pissed off woman! Brooke is a strong young lady.

Author's Response: Oh there's nothing dumb about daddy Nick...he takes care of his little 'bear' cubs. :)

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 09/19/10 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Trevor seems like a good guy. Thank goodness he was in the park and could help Brooke. I could kill Garrett. He is such a scumbag.

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 09/19/10 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Poor Brooke. My heart goes out to her. At least she has a loving family and a great best friend to support her.

I knew there was more to Kay's wildness. I hope that she can talk to someone about her issues.

Author's Response: Yeah if Brooke didn't have such a loving family, she probably wouldn't be 'here' today to even get a 'teen' story...she is a lucky girl in that respect!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 09/19/10 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

You go Noah! You go Noah. Kick the crap out of anyone who gets in the way. Garrett deserve what he got and more. What an ass!

Poor Noah for feeling guilty for not protecting all Brooke all these years. All the guilt turned into rage. Don't mess with NoNo!

Garrett is such a prick. Telling everyone lies about Brooke. He will get his and more. His dad sounds like a prick, too.

Author's Response: Yup Noah still didn't get over that...he bit Aaron but it wasn't enough. So tonight was kind of retribution. I pity those high school boys that got plowed over by Noah, haha. Garrett is a prick...and all the other names that you guys have called him.

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 09/21/10 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Glad that Garrett got what he deserved. I hate guys like him who thinks he can treat women as his conquests. He is lower than dirt.

I am happy that Brooke is able to move on. T think she will do a lot better with Trevor as a friend or boyfriend. Isn't it funny how we judge people and they turn out completely different.

Author's Response: First impressions aren't always the right ones for sure. Garrett did get what he deserved and I put those girls in for two purposes - one to give Brooke more of a voice and secondly to show that sometimes if you don't speak up then you're contributing to putting other women in danger. ::sigh::

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 09/23/10 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Trevor sounds like a sweetheart. I think Brooke has found a good match. I feel bad that he has such a screwed up family. I think he will be a nice fit in the Carter family.

Author's Response: LoL the Carters tend to gravitate towards screwed up people :) Maybe because they're a little screwed up (but in a GOOD way!)

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 09/23/10 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Poor Brooke. Trevor is just acting that way because of his stupid father. It sucks, but realize that Trevor really isn't a jerk. He's trying to protect you from his dad and his attitude. Things will hopefully get better.

Author's Response: You're right...that's EXACTLY what he's doing. I hope things get better too lol :)

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 10/06/10 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Brenna and Landon are adorable. I want to take them home.

Author's Response: I'd so take them home. They ARE adorbz :)

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 10/07/10 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I know that Brooke is mad at Kayleigh and Noah, but I think she is very jealous because of her own situation. I think she should mind her own business because she is only going to cause more trouble. I hope things don't blow up in her face. I smell trouble again.

Love the drama. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Brooke's more mad at Kayleigh...but NoNo has to get in the way and argue because that's what brothers and sisters do, haha. Oh there's major trama (trouble and drama mixed together) ahead!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 10/10/10 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Ahh, I feel bad for Brooke, but she is right to not settle unless the guy is the best. She will find that love.

I feel bad for Trevor. I am sure there is more to his story than he is letting on. His life is more troubling than anyone probably knows.

Nick is an awesome dad. I love the conversations he has with his kids. He knows how to talk and comfort them without acting like an old stodgy dad.

Author's Response: Trevor makes me sad. Brooke's a smart girl though...she's made from tough Carter stock. and LoL Nick could never be stodgy and old.

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 10/12/10 Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue

Can't wait for the sequel!

Author's Response: :)

Something Bigger by luna610 Rated: PG-13 [ - ]
Summary: Kevin is passionate about his profession, but questions his current job.

My response to Karen's challenge in the AC forums "What I Do From Day to Day": http://absolutechaos.net/fictalk/index.php/topic,2180.0.html
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group, Kevin
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Humor
Warnings: None
 Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 8770
Read Count: 11051


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Published: 09/16/10 » Updated: 11/05/10
Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 09/16/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good start. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll probably be posting chapter one this weekend.

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed
Date: 09/20/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Great job. I like this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! Next chap is done and will probably be up in a few days.