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Life doesn't always give you what you want. Sometimes it gives you what you need...rather you realize it or not.
Yoo hoo! I'm back with reviews! Let's just hope these turn out better than the last, not to mention hoping they end up on the right chapters this time, haha.
Okay.. Alex is looking for Renee.. I bet that hussy is in his bed! *keeps reading* :O haha I hthink I had to force my eyeballs back in my sockets, mouth up off the floor. I knew it, the dirty ho!
Haha, I dunno why it's so funny... the thought of Alex being accosted in his own bedroom. Sexual harrassment and unwanted advances... it's funny!
Renee’s green eyes grew hard and she yanked her clothes from his hands. “Do not talk to me like I’m a child.”
“Then don’t act like one.” <-- Ooooooh, SNAP! I be done sporked the hussy in the neck.
*Gasp* No she didn't.. hussy attacked him! *keeps reading*
Whew... who knew he had a pair of balls laying around like that. Go Alex...
"..... someone better let the bitch know before she got a hot poker to her eyes." <- Hahaha, SoG version of a good ol' fashioned sporking, haha.
Omg, cat fight!! Hahaha.
Oh hell she cooled off a lot quicker than I would've. I would've still been stalking that room and cussing and throwing shit... I'd be plotting that witches demise 15 ways from Sunday if for no other reason than to make me feel better.
But I knew it! I knew the bitch was lying the whole time, didn't I call it? Ugh, why do women gotta be like that? Okay, those kind of women cause we're not all that way.
Great job on the chapter, chicka, and you know it. You did such a wonderful job with the fight, even if it was your classic chick fight, haha. Loved it!!
LOL yes, let's keep the right reviews on the correct chapters. Well, she just hides her cooling off better, but she's not ever Renee's lil stunt by a long shot. Thanks so much and glad you thought the chick fight was good. I was hoping it was. :)
Yay! *does Special Ed* Yay! I got caught up, yay! LOL I told ya I would, even though right now I'm so sleepy I might have to come back and reread this chapter.
Gotta say, love the ending of the argument where she makes him admit that he wants to stop. That he's not just doing it for her her, but for him, too. Now, all he needs to do is shake the filthy parasite that is The Hussy and things should get a bit smoother. Hussy.
Hey, hey. What happened to the discussion questions? I want more of those, woman.
Anyway, this is where I'll leave this review. You're doing a fantastic job, even though I've already told you that. I don't see how anyone can not like the direction the fic is taking. What do they want? Brie and Alex are getting together... I mean... geeze. LOL. But yeah, you're doing so wonderful and you know it. I really would like to see some more journal entries, more Lily, and noooo don't make Denise leave. Gah.. lol.
But I can't believe I finally got caught up. Yay! *runs off like Phoebe & talking like Special Ed* Yay! Yay! yay!
Author's Response: Yay lol so glad you finally got caught up! And I'm so glad you like it and thank you for all your support and feedback. I will make note of the AJ journal entries and more Lily and Denise.
Wow. I really, really, really love reading Alex's journal entry. You did a spectacular job with it, girl, you really did. Can we hope to see more entries like that? That might be kind of cool. Also, the comment about Nick's fat mouth made me laugh.
He frowned and turned away from her. That had been very sneaky and smart of her.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I really tried and I'm glad it showed. LOL @ Nick's fat mouth. All I can say is...well, it is AJ.
"...completely butt naked and asleep." lol that made me literally laugh out loud.
Grab a drink, some popcorn, and get ready for a hella long review!
1. Do I think Brielle should have been so upset with Alex for leaving her at Nick's? Well... yes and no. Having been on the bad end of a pretty horrid bender myself I can understand how easy it could have been for Alex to have forgotten she was there. I mean, it's not like it was habit or routine for Brie to be there when he woke up at Nick's after drinking himself stupid. After all, she was in the bathroom when he woke up. Then, I can also see why Brie should have been upset. Regardless of understanding Alex's actions - it would still hurt to be forgotten in a strange place, with strange people, and no way to get home other than calling a cab. To top it all off, being awoken in the middle of the night to traipse down to some seedy bar with a man she barely knew to pick his sorry tail up, sleeping sitting up right after him saying that he needed her - yeah, I can see why she would be upset. But I think that it's not the kind of upset that she should continue to hold against him. I think an explanation and a heartfelt apology (plus flowers & chocolate) should cover it.
2. I agree with everything Brielle said to Alex during their argument. He needs his ass kicked and handed back to him several times over. I was rooting her on when she was throwing open the curtains and blinds then said fuck you right back to him. I don't know if she should have been more forgiving under the circumstances - she should know that he didn't mean it when he said "Fuck you.", that it was the alcohol talking. But that's the problem, it's the alcohol. I don't think she should hold what he says against him, but I definitely think she should hold the vehicle that made him say those things against him. You see what I'm saying? Like I said before, though, regardless of what it is and contrary to the old children's rhyme, words do hurt.. even if you know deep down they don't mean them or mean them the way they sounded. Words hurt. So, should she have been more forgiving? I don't know about forgiving, but I don't think she should give up on him. I think she should continue to hold his ass accountable for what he's said and done until he gets his self straight.
3. Move out or stay there? Hm. That's a tough one. Okay, not really. Maybe not move out, but I think do they do need some space. Hell, the house is big enough they can have some space just by staying in separate wings. I think if they move out, things can only get worse between them. But then, you know my philosophy, stay and fight through it - lol, you know what I'm talking about. So my vote for moving out or staying there is to stay there.
Just for fun: I don't know if there is any one thing he can do to gain her trust back. We both know trust is something you have to work on building, then rebuilding once it's shattered. He's going to have to do some groveling, for sure. No more saying I'm sorry. Those are just words unless you put the action to correct the mistakes behind them. He's going to have to prove to her he's not drinking again, and he's going to have to come completely clean to her about his past. The good, the bad, the ugly and the unbearable. I think with Brielle, he's going to have to bear his soul.
I like these questions, keep 'em coming!
(p.s. Nick's house? We're gonna have a talk about that, lol.)
Author's Response: Woot, thanks for answering the questions. They didn't go over so well with everyone. I think you're right with a lot of it. Basically it comes down to what you said...Alex needs to bare his soul and be completely honest with her. And she needs to realize he has a disease and she needs to meet him halfway. She can be upset and angry, but she needs to look at the big picture. Thanks so much for the wonderful review. :)
lmao Nick.. "Alex flew a kite?"
Dun dun dun.. the secret is out for sure. And as horrible as what he did is, I think this was one beautifully written chapter. Not to mention, the funniest of the story I think. Great job, girl!
Thoroughly enjoyed. :)
Aww Lily. I miss Lily, lol.
And your summarizing skills are superb!
Haha, "Ooh, is this porn?"
Oh gosh. I still think The Hussy was faking the pregnancy - but gosh. The way Alex took it. It made my heart hurt for him. Geeze. And her dad needs a swift kick in the balls... maybe. Gosh, Alex is being so hard on himself..
Whoa. Okay. Did not see that coming. I figured Eric was gonna be another dick or something. I had a fear he was gonna try to pretend that the baby was his and throw a kink in everything. Thank goodness, he didn't, poor Brie and AJ need a friggin break alread lol. And whoa diggity about the money. Now she can move out of Alex's. Uh oh. And woot, Alex "Let's do this."
Awww, poor Alex. Poor guy with his hopes dashed. Geeze oh Pete's.
haha that conversation did sound very dirty! it had me laughing.
“I don’t know if you could handle what I got.”
You know, even though I know she's a hussy, I kind of feel bad for her. I mean, I know she's manipulative and crazy but I can KIND OF see her side - but then she never really did love him if she can't take this like a woman and be there for him. Sure, it's got to hurt but if they had that arrangement then she's at just as much fault as he is in this for the situation with Brielle. Then again, he probably would've done it anyway, lol. I could understand her being angry for a while over it, but in the end if she really did love him she'd come around and support him - so it's her fault that she's shown her "true colors" and shown Alex what she's really like. A spoiled brat who throws adult sized temper tantrums when she doesn't get her way.
"And birth was a beautiful thing, but he didn’t know how well he’d handle all that…erm, beauty."
You know what strikes me? Renee is pregnant too, yet Alex keeps smoking around her, lol. Kind of telling of his emotions, isn't it?
Oh, haha I just read the part where she brought that up.
Awww, that was a very good talk. I'm glad you wrote it out instead of letting things continue on and them get more and more upset - and more and more misunderstandings and tension grow and grow from it. That was really good.
"Making love..." As opposed to "fucken like bunnies" right? LOL
So, here I am! I woke up early (of course, after going to sleep way too early.. heh) and I was bored. I thought about watching some Buffy/Angel reruns, and almost did, until I remembered, "Hey! I need to go read Summer's stories." So be proud!
Good job on making Benjamin Lutkas a jerk, I mean, seriously. She should've smacked him in the head with her stuff, lol.
And awww, Lily's a sweet friend.
Great start, now I'm off to read another chapter.
LOL yay *claps* glad you could make it! Hope you'll enjoy all the wonderful goodness. :)
What a dog. But considering the subject..... lol.
Poor Brie.. it's just one bad turn after another.
LOL. When can a girl get a break?
“Mom,” Alex rubbed the bridge of his nose, “if this is about Renee, please don’t start.”
“This isn’t about Renee,” she suddenly snapped. “Not everything is, you know.”
haha oooh.. go Denise!
Touché and not to mention, rarr. <- lol love that line.
LOL, thank you! Glad you're finally reading and reviewing. :)
*makes Laurel disappear* ahh, that's better. :D
Stupid Renee, I see your tricks you skank, lol. Good chapter, his house sounds familiar lol.
Wow, Renee is evil. But that's no big surprise.
Brie needs to stop blaming herself, she's gotta realize she didn't impregnate herself with his sperm - he was there, too. He made the decision to pick her up and sleep with her, knowing this was a remote possibility.
Also, I already told you this, but - too bad Lily has a fiance, she and Nick could hook up and plot evil things against Renee. Tee Hee.
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