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My little boy LOVES "going on a bear hunt"!
Way to leave an impression, Nick! I was so excited to see an update for this one! I totally understand what you mean about writing being your "therapeutic escape." Glad to see you found some time for yourself!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to be back while I can!
Nick recounts the day he and his wife met as a bed time story for his daughter.
Yay for a Mare romance! Reading on....
Woot! lol
I like the "dancing with Daddy" scene. Reminds me of my own dad.
aww that's really sweet! I'm glad to know there are daddy's who dance with their little girls. Cute!
Nice twist! Pretty insightful for a four year old, isn't she? Really though, little kids know so much more than we give them credit for. At least you didn't maim her as I suggested! lol I'd like to see more of the genre from you, but maybe this really is "The Closest We'll Ever Get" :) Well done.
It really is surprising how kids that age really do understand, We don't give them enough credit in fact the reason I even created this little girl is because of a student I had who said she knew her mom and dad were pretending to love each other just for her sake. It was heart breaking to hear but I think sadly it's the way of the world these days. I wanted to kill her or have her get hit by a car but alas, I let her live to see another day. Who knows maybe if there's a sequel I'll have Skylar become possessed and kill her mom or something! lmao I keed I keed! Thanks for reading, Emily! Now YOU have to write an action/suspsense story! :O)
Well, as always with your storeis, I'm really liking this one so far! Don't guess NIck can have a drink now, can he? and what DOES he mean by THE girl??
I went into this chapter thinking I don't like this Nick character, then I softened a little after this chapter. I'm looking for him to eventually really redeem himseld. Poor Desmond, though.
Wow! Interested to see what happens with Nick and Desi now.
Well, okay. I "enjoyed" it. I even enjoyed it. I'm not gonna lie to you-- I have to say that during some of the more graphic parts (though good job with making it not overly graphic, yet still descriptive), I might have pretended the narrator was a female. Still, the story overall was very believable, which really surprised me. You're right-- I think it had to be Nick and Howie here. Really insightful. Again, really believable. And I'm totally a Howie girl, actually. Well, it goes Kevin, Howie, Nick, and they alternate depending on what kind of mood I'm in or what they've done recently that it the cutest...lol. You really have a way with words and a knack for description that not many writers have. Example: " so I went over to him and ducked under his arm, draping it around my shoulders for support. It hung there like a large snake, limp and heavy, weighing me down." I could actually see and feel that in my mind. That's just one example. There are many. I'm not sure I'm on the bandwagon with making this the beginning of a novel, but honestly, I might read it, too, if that ever happened.
Well, this is just full of win! I smiled and/or laughed through the entire chapter. You really characterize them well- even elderly. This is going to be a fun read!
I sure hope it's going to be a fun ride! I've got a lot of ideas and plans for this. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you were smiling and laughing!
Well, I went from laughing at Kevin's morning ritual to saying, "Oh, how sad," and back again! Of all of them, Kevin is the one I wouldn't imagine getting Alzheimer's, so it's an interesting twist. I also really liked the line about AJ thinking he ran the place. Sounds like him. This is still great!
Dun dun dun! I'm really liking this so far. Nice old school feel.
Oh, how heartbreaking to read them like this. Sadly, I'm sure it actually was like this on some level in the B&B era. I'm already looking forward to seeing some sort of resolution for them as a group after they go through whatever bad stuff they're going to go through. A girl can hope that's how it's going to go, at least!
Author's Response: I think that you may be right, because it seemed like this to me as well. Thank you for the review!!
Ooh...another nice little cliffie. Now the question begs to be asked: Russell or wild animal? And why can I leave a review???
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, new chapter was posted yesterday so you'll find out lol!
One is lost
One is broken
One is a prisoner
Two are trapped
Well, this is definitely an intriguing start! I'm really interested to know what the deal with this Tim character is, exactly, and I spent a long time trying to figure out who "the little one" was. I actually assumed maybe we were going old school and it was Nick! Howie's a very good choice for captive, though. Excited to read more!
Author's Response:
Well that was very insightful of you because I did never mention when this was taking place exactly. LOL you could have very well been right! I mean if we were talking 94 or 95 then pretty much everyone would tower over Nick and he would clearly be the smaller one. good thinking Sherlock! This almost did take place back then! and who knows it might still be in the past. Just another mystery. Thanks for reading! :O) I do like the idea of Howie being held captive. Poor guy needs some kind of attention! hehe
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