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It's been a long time since that night that forever changed the Richardson family. They tried to move on, but certain events and a new case reunite old friends and a past that haunts will bring them back to harms way.
Aw...poor Howie. He's definitely the sympathy vote getter this story...well, him and Charlie.lol
Well, I don't know how sorry you should feel for Charlie but yes, poor Howie he's definitely getting screwed over! Sorry, Howie! lol
Oh, Stacey, I'd say yes to be surrounded by all the handsome men, too. I literally laughed all the way through the proposal. Sounds just like AJ. I don't know far into the future this story goes, but I'm just going to say that as much as Nick hates what his father and brothers do for a living, I can totally see grown up Nick going into law enforcement after all is said and done.
LOL thanks! for some reason I thought it appropriate to have him show her an empty box! And as far as Nick, you'll juat have to wait and see!
I knew the name sounded familiar! And left field theory already starting to fall apart. Sigh....
aww! What was your theory? lol
Oh, I knew I should be worried about Stacey, but having Kevin in the building? That's just mean, Mare. If I'd been reading this as you were writing it, I'd be pretty pissed right about now. And if you really want to know, my "left field" theory was that maybe Patty has a little bit of "like father like daughter" in her. Doesn't really seem feasible at this point, and yeah, I'm a psycho. lol
I know! I made many people mad with my cliff hangers for this one! Plus I was running out of mojo at the time so my updates were becoming sporadic. Aww yeah, you psycho! LOL kidding! :OP
I knoe I need to be worried super worried about Howie, and I am, but I keep thinking, "Poor Kevin. Jo died, and he still has no romance in his life." lol
But aren't you the least bit impressed that Stacey managed to live? I'm sure you thought she was a goner. Kevin is best left single because anyone he's interested in ends up in the morgue. See, good thing Emily isn't in this story, huh? LOL
Well, you got me! I definitely didn't see that one coming! I figured this story would loop back to Kevin Sr. and the witness protection thing, but right now, I have no theories. I'm confused. Haha. (btw, I did take note of your not killing Stacey....yet. And touché on the Emily bit. LoL.)
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Wow, you're all the way up to 20! I've been reading ahead of you on this one because I'm thinking of changing it into an OF which is why I have known what you've been talking about as you've been reading, but you have now caught up to me lol Glad you didn't see the half sister twist coming. Now you'll start to see exactly how batshit crazy Ariana really is! I better read the next chapter now. hehe
Yep, batshit crazy. haha. This is the part where I confess that kept reading last night after the last review I left, and I'm probably still ahead of you. It was one of those "can't sleep" nights. That being said, I'm a really fast reader, so I promise I'm not just spending ALL of my time reading this. lol. I've been thinking the whole time that this and the prequel would make a fantastic OF, so I'm glad you're going that route!
Aww well, yes now you are ahead of me! I hate those can't sleep nights, pretty much the etire summer is like that for me. I develop really weird sleeping habits because of the heat in the summer. Up at 3:30 am back to bed at 6 then up at 8 etc... although I would take it as a compliment if you did spend every waking moment of your day reading my story! lmao God, I'm glad you're thinking that too! I have PS re-written about halfway and then kind of stopped.
Ooh, Charlie's back! Apparently I'm still a psycho, because I still like this character so much! He's a twisted little dude, but there's some sympathy for him, too.
Yeah, I agree. but I am also a psycho lol
Ooh! I like the flashbacks! I'm ready to figure out where this all comes full circle.... And again, poor Howie. I was all waiting for him to being out his inner Charlie's Angel- er, James Bond and fight off Charlie,
LOL poor Howie! I'm sure deep within that little 5 foot 4 Puerto Rican frame is a warrior no one wants to mess with!
Welcome back, Kevin! I'm glad we didn't totally lose you out there in the woods.
LOL yay once again I have no clue!
Lol. That's supposed to be about Kevin finally getting suspicious of Ariana. When he was starting to buy into her BS while they were camping, it was just weird.
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Oh, I was like "Did I have Kevin get lost in the woods or something? I don't remember doing that." lmao
Again, I'm glad I wasn't reading this back in te day with all the cliffies :)
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Yeah, I kind of have the reputation of leaving people han
LOL at AJ and the maracas, and I liked the line about Charlie knowing he was living on borrowed time.
LOL thanks! Every good suspense story needs a scene that includes maracas, a sombrero and a pinata! :O)
This may be weird, but I literally laughed out loud during this chapter. First, the Miles Davis line, then AJ and the handcuffs, wishing they'd actually gotten to the part where Kevin and Brian teach him how to get out of them. Ha! Anyway, I told you I liked Charlie. It really showed that he's not such a bad guy after all in this chapter... For now anyway. I'm wondering if there is going to be more explanation behind Ariana's motive and mission here. I mean, I get that what Kevin Sr. Supposedly did to her family is really awful, but her plan seems a little weird, considering the awful things she's already done. I mean, I know she's "batshit crazy," but I feel like maybe I don't know the whole backstory.
Author's Response:
How weird that I got this review as I was reading and reviewing your story! Maybe we are psychically linked or something. Poor AJ and the handcuff thing, I actually remember that! I always get excited when I remember something. Yay Me!! As far as Ariana's backstory, I don't really recall how much we know already but I think it was revealed that Kevin sr. killed her parents right in front of her. I think if someone killed my parents right in front of me when I was only 8 it would have made me a tad insane. It is funny how people handle intense situations in different ways though. In her case, witnessing that and then wanting to be close to him but constantly feeling rejected most likely brought about the birth of a monster. Like I said, not sure if everything was revealed yet. I want to say there's a little more backstory coming up that might help that along but this also shows you what I was talking about in the thread about how I am kind of weak with my female characters. Even the evil ones. lol
Sigh. I'd been worried about Patty since I met her, and had sympathy for Charlie, too. I'm hoping they are both okay, but knowing you, I'd bet at least one of them is a goner.
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LOL What? Me? *innocent face* I do not know WHAT you are talking about! *I did forshadow that one of them was going to kick the bucket*
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