Reviewer: Im_A_NKOTBSB_Chick Signed
Date: 11/20/12
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I feel really horrible for Nick. He doesn't deserve to be treated like he is unwanted. They are the ones who opened up their home to him. If they didn't wanna take him in than they shouldn't have, even if Brian begged them to.
I'm sure he would have been treated much better in a orphanage, than to have people spewing mean comments about him. Especially when he could be around any moment to hear them.
I don't understand why they feel that after having him in an abused environment practical his whole life, that Nick can just forget about, turn it off like a switch, and miraculously change.
I just wanna wrap Nick up in my arms and tell him that it's all going to be okay. I know he takes everything to heart and it kills me that he doesn't know any better.
And I really wanna slap the shit out of Jerald and Ann, they are not different than his psycho mother.
I really feel for Nick in this chapter. Wonderful job.
Can't wait to see more. Keep writing. :0)
Author's Response: Nope they really aren't and you're right, Nick probably would have been better off living at an orphanage. Thanks so much for the review :) - Tracy