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When Nick joined a guild in World of Warcraft he didn't expect to fine his soul mate, but after months of talking, and skyping it led into a romance he would never forget, he just wished his mother approved. Will their relationship last or will this crash and burn before him?
I'm liking this story so far. We've gotten a little bit of background on both characters and their situations at this point.
I feel sorry for Nick, he's just broken it off from a three year relationship. Being with someone that length of time then suddenly being by your self can be pretty rough.
As for nameless woman :), I feel bad for in a long distance pretty much non existent relationship, she is stuck being a single mother. It's hard when you're the only one doing it especially with two small children.
Now I'm curious as to how this leads up to them meeting since they're both in different states.
Great start. Keep writing. :0)
Author's Response:
thanks! :) I have been out of the writing BSB fan fiction for six years...most of this story wil be based off of me but with a little BSB flare ;) I am soo glad you like it! :)
I feel bad for Rayna, she is holding on for dear life, for someone who seems like they didn't want to be there in the first place. I mean the guy got a job OUT of STATE. I know people do it all the time, but most don't do it to escape from their responsibilities.
As for Nicholas, I am glad that he talked things over with Brian. He needed some good advice, and Brian's not only looking out for him he genuinely cares for him like a brother.
I enjoyed this chapter, like Nick said, hopefully Rayna will learn when she closes one door it paves the way for more doors to open.
Keep writing! :0)
This girl is smiling huge. I love that the real "fanfic" that Nick is writing is really on here! Did I tell you are a GENIUS! This is gonna be a great story I can already tell. So Nick to decapitate the head off poor Lauren's body. Love this! Can't wait for more. :)
The ending of this chapter was totally baffling!
I feel sorry for Nick, not only did he lose Lauren in the car accident, but he has to sit through the funeral thinking about what happened all over again.
I hope going to Maine will help Nick to cope with things.
I am very curious to find out why Leighanne is being charged with murder and not vehicular manslaughter.
Great chapter. Anxious to find out what's really going on. :0)
Author's Response: I'm not very good at police stuff. Do you write? Do you research junk for your stories? I should try that. Thanks!
I'm glad Nick made it to Maine ok.
As for Brian and Baylee, I hope they are ok. And that we eventually find out what the hell is up with Leighanne. *hint hint*
As for this Sarah chick, she seems like an ok person. I'm anxious to see how her character interacts with Nick during his stay.
Really loving this story. Can't wait to be able to read more. :0)
P.S. Btw, I don't write & share. I have personal experience with a friend who was charged with vehicular manslaughter. Maybe I'll tell you about it sometime.
That so called physical therapist has got to go! She was a complete airhead, there was no one home. I don't know if she is gonna cut it especially if Nick wants to be mobile ever again. Get another therapist! Fast!
As for Tammy feeling Nick up. LOL. That didn't seem to go as planned. Definitely would get a qualified therapist Nicholas. I mean you wanna be able to Bom Chicka Wah Wah with Tammy soon, right?
Awesomeness equals this chapter. Going to read more. ;0)
Well that was a buttery mess... and I loved it! You guys are so dirty, doing it on the dinner table.
I knew Tammy couldn't resist the Carter charm.
So glad the old couple didn't come to dinner. They would have gotten an eye full and probably have heart attacks.
All this chapter needed was a bucket of popcorn... awesome. Can't wait for more! Keep it coming. :0)
We're cousins, best friends, and both of us are Daddy's little girl. Being a daddy's girl has always been fun, but what happens when you grow up and the fairy tale ends?
I'm glad that they are on speaking terms again. And that Calleigh finally stood up for herself when Reese was being mean to her.
I just wish Reese would see that Jake is trying to distance him self from her for a reason. And I don't think it's only because he doesn't want to go to jail. Maybe I'm wrong, but it's just a feeling that I'm getting.
I have a feeling Reese is about to get her heart broken for the second time.
Great chapter Rach. The story is progressing beautifully. :0)
Author's Response: Yes, it's nice that they are speaking again. Reese is very stubborn. She wants things to be her way all the time. Unfortunately it can always be her way. Hopefully Reese will mature. Glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for reading! ~ R
I'm glad that they aren't fighting anymore. It's so draining and it really doesn't accomplish anything.
I'm glad to know that Reese didn't have sex with Jake. I wasn't sure for a hot second if she had or not.
I think them finally talking it out was the best solution. But many times when we are in the heat of the moment, we don't react the way that we would like to.
I think it's a good idea that Aspen got Reese the appointment. Though it's gonna suck for Reese, it will show her what the consequences can be for having sex at an early age. Plus give her all the information she needs to make the best decision in the future.
Loved this chapter Dot. Can't wait to see how things go. :0)
Author's Response:
Thank you SO very much!! It's really hard putting ourselves into 'angry teenager' mode. I'm trying to remember what my sister went through with my niece not so long ago. LOL THANKS again!! ~ D
I really wish the girls hadn't watched that DVD. I personally think it would have been more than a little awkward for me to watch my aunt getting freaky with strangers.
I think Calleigh hiding the DVD in Nick's studio is a horrible idea. I can just see the scene playing out in my head. For some reason Jade will go into the studio accidentally find the DVD there and accuse Nick of wanting Lilly behind her back. Not a good thing at all.
I'm glad that Reese finally sees Jake for his true self. He only wanted her because she was going to have sex with him. I'm sure Ree will get over it soon. But you're first love & heartbreak are the most devastating.
Wonderful job with this chapter Dot. Can't wait for more. :0)
Author's Response:
THANKS so much!!! Reese is such a wild child, it's scary! Watching the DVD probably wasn't the best move, but I couldn't see her passing up the chance to 'rebel' again. Leigh sure didn't want to do it. LOL Thanks again!!! ~ D
Oh boy! The hormones are kicking Jade's ass. Down girl! Your man loves you and only you. I'm glad that Nick didn't miss interpret her mood swing for something else. It could have been a disaster but I think Nick handled it beautifully.
As for Jade letting the girls babysit by themselves after everything that gone on, um I don't know. I feel like it may be a little to soon to put so much trust in them again. But we shall she how it goes.
Really love the sisterly bond in this chapter Dot. I'm curious though if Jade will call Lilly. Reading on :0)
Author's Response:
aww THANKS for your thoughts!!! I think being the parent of a teenager is hard enough, but add a famous dad into the mix? Hard to know when to trust and when not too. Hopefully Jade can put all the crap with Lilly to rest. Those nagging doubts can drive a person crazy. THANKS again! ~ D
I'm glad that Aspen insisted on Reese going to the Gyno Appt. I think even if she didn't admit it to her mom that she may have picked up on some useful information. I know most girls don't think about it in the heat of the moment but regardless of what most people say, once you have sex your relationship will forever be changed. Whether it's for the good or the bad.
I didn't think Age and Aspen[s problems were about them being intimate. Hmmm, I wonder what cause that separation. I hope that got it back cause they are good together.
Glad that I'm not currently raising a teenager, think I'd wanna crawl under my bed and hide. :0p
Great chapter Rach! Reading more :0)
Author's Response: I think it was a good idea for Reese to go to see the gyno. She needs to be aware of what can happen when you have sex. I don't think raising a teenager would be fun. Hopefully AJ and Aspen will get everything worked out between them. They love each other a lot. Thanks for reading. I enjoy your reviews. ~ R
Omg! I think I just became the happiest girl alive :) They Grey sisters are back and all grown up with families and everything. I can't wait to see how this forms. A cousin's bond is just like a sister's bond, tightly knit. I can't wait to see the relationships that AJ and Nick form with their baby girls. *Jumping up and down* :D
Author's Response:
So glad you're excited. Yes, the girls and the teenage years. Think they can survive Nick and AJ as their fathers? Think Nick and AJ can survive?? Let's find out! THANKS for checking us out! ~ D
Oh boy! Reese has so much of AJ in her I think it's gonna be a problem. As we already see her all up on the boy. She's got some balls doing that in her PARENTS house while her PARENTS are STILL in the house. Wrong move Ms. Reese if you ask me. Hope AJ doesn't kill Jake for trying to violate his little girl.
Lol at the Grey sisters always being pissed at their husbands.
Great chapter ladies. Catching up
Author's Response: Reese is definitely bold. She's going to be in a lot of trouble for her actions. AJ is livid. If I were Jake, I'd run far away and not look back. Right now it's not a happy time in the McLean house. Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~R
Wow really Reese?! I didn't see that coming at all. Hormonal teenagers. At that age we think we know everything, and we're so impulsive.
I hope this Jake character doesn't hurt Reese. She thinks she's in love with him and he's probably only invested his time in their 'relationship' to get a certain thing.
I'm worried about Reese. She doesn't know the road she is paving for her self.
Scary chapter, you never know what is really going through her head. Reading on :)
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