Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 02/23/08
Title: Chapter 16: Author's Note/ Disclaimer
Ur are right about cheating it is wrong but sometimes people do get push into things like cheating like for this story Sean starting to act like an ass and shayla will do not get me started lol but overall cheating is wrong x Im in team Nick and Alyssa b/c I really do think Alyssa is the one for Nick b/c Shayla is for going out to dinner, partys etc but Nick he loves to party but he also love to just stay in and watch tv or something and that what I thing of Alyssa too x Im not a big fan of Sean b/c for me I just thing he being worse the Nick when he dated he Nick did cheated on her but Sean beng way to control freak both wrong wrong in my eyes
Me and my sister was talking about cheating we ask will u do cheat and My sister says yes b/c she can not see herself with just one person but I said no reason because i put myself in my b/f shoes and how they will fell but if they cheated on me still no
but bottom line this is a really good story if they are people out there going to take this story and Unsuspecting Sunday Afternoon like real life will they do need up b/c at the end of the day A Little Taste of Sin and Unsuspecting Sunday Afternoon are fiction people really do need to get that x by the way im all for Nick and Alyssa but on Unsuspecting Sunday Afthernoon im like oh bad Brian and Leslie lol think it is b/c Brian doing it with his little bro girl and got northing to do with the boys lol at the end of the day U are a really good writer and u should keep the good work it is getting good xax
Author's Response: Yea I know you are a fan of both USA and ALTOS which are similair in some respects. I've spoken to Dani the author USA about the cheating thing and she said she's gotten a lot of hurtful comments about Leslie. And I've had comments made to me that if Alyssa cheats on Sean she's a whore. It's interesting cuz its always the woman that gets the flack. But back to USA Dani and I find it interesting how our stories are so similair, but people are a lil more open minded with my story. At first I thought it was the "poor Nick" syndrome. In fan fiction readers usually always sympathize with Nick no matter what side he's on. But obviously not because some people are still upset. Maybe it IS easier to dislike Sean because he is an original character. If he was one of the guys it would be much worse I guess. Either way it just hurts that some people would just label Leslie and Alyssa whores and be done with it. I LOVE USA and I know for a fact that Dani does a damn good job in trying to show just how torn Leslie is between Brian and Nick and the guilt she feels. I really want to do the same w/ ALTOS.