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Unsuspecting Sunday Afternoon by DaniGiggles Rated: R [ - ]
Summary: Past Featured StoryI was captured by that stare, now I'm shattered but I don't care, and the people walking by don't have a clue, that I kissed your face, 'til the sun was in our eyes, 'til the afternoon arrived...

Brian and Leighanne are in the midst of planning their wedding and Brian feels trapped. What happens when Nick's new girlfriend, a dancer named Leslie, turns his world upside down? What happens on an unsuspecting Sunday afternoon?
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian, Nick
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sexual Content, Violence
 Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 165755
Read Count: 101452


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Published: 12/08/07 » Updated: 12/19/13
Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 01/18/08 Title: Chapter 15: I Could Hold You In My Arms, Forever

Nick really need to find out it so go to kill him when he finds out. With Nick he just want to give him really big hug esp when he finds out x update soon x

Author's Response: lol Hopefully Nick won\'t \'Kill\' him but I\'m excited to see what he does do! Heh, thanks ALM!

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 01/22/08 Title: Chapter 17: She's Everything But His

ok she got no right to yell at Nick for just dancing with girls er she sleeping with his best friend x Im sorry but she startin to annoy me now she just being really selfish just caring about her needs not for Brian, Nick, Leigh or the other guys needs x just b/c Brian being ass does not mean she to take it out of Nick who doing northing wrong x but Brian I liked him in this chapter

But great story x update soon pls



Author's Response: You\'re right, she doesn\'t really have a right to yell at Nick, not when she\'s the one cheating on him. She took out her anger on the wrong person, and I think if she hadn\'t already fought with Brian, I don\'t think she would have reacted seeing Nick dance with another girl the way she did. I think the situation is just getting a little too overwhelming for her. I\'m glad you liked Brian in this chapter... it was fun writing it lol I\'ll update soon and thanks for your constant reviews!

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 01/22/08 Title: Chapter 18: Cat's Out Of The Bag

She said the word trust to Nick her of all people is she idiot or something x poor poor AJ he in the middle of his two best friends x hehe at AJ he not going to stop Nick when he finds out do not blame him though yeah Nick is nice guy but would not like be in the wrong side of him i be like just as longs as he ok with me I will be fine lol. I think Leslie is more worried about what going to happen to her if Nick or Leigh finds out that what I got from this chapter x U be happy that im starting to fell for Brian he got more to loss than Leslie has like his fans (but is diehard will still like him though), his family, friendship and Brotherhood with the guys esp Nick.  If or when it all come out Leslie can go away form the tour hide away for little while but Brian had to stay to deal with everyone being mad at him esp his best friend and Leigh. Not only Leslie has deal with Leighanne she deal with Kirstin, Leigh (who both think Nick has little bro), Rachel, all of the other girls that in tour with them or maybe even Nick's sisters my heart goes out to her NOT.  Do not know why im starting to dislike Leslie over Brian now b/c it does take too maybe when everyone finds out it is bye bye to everybody fave double act Frick and Frack 

Great sorry looking forward to next one happy that someone find out about them it is so going to be good now that AJ knows just happy that it was AJ.  Do not think im ready for Nick and Leigh to found out just yet.

 



Author's Response: ALM, I must say that this might be your longest review yet, and I enjoyed every word :) It was very hypocritical of Leslie to use the word \"trust\" with Nick, I agree. I thought you\'d like the fact that AJ won\'t stop Nick if he ever decided to kick Brian\'s ass. And you\'re also right about Leslie being able to run away from it if she wanted to but Brian having to stay and deal with it all, which totally sucks. I\'m glad you liked the chapter though! Thanks so much for the great review hun :)

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 01/24/08 Title: Chapter 19: I Know You

oh man AJ never stayed mad at her for long thought he would x hope when the time comes he will stand by Nick b/c the guy is so going to be hurt and he will need all of the friends there for him. Yeah AJ had little thing for Howie girl but he was a man about it and did stayed away x oh what Leighanne up too x I really dislike Leslie and why cant she do Nick favour and leave him or better yet he finds out dumps her  b/c he better of without her anyway he can do alot better than her alot better and I think Brian is better of without her (but that not going to happen)  When it comes down to it I will like a guy that  will do anything for me not worry if he knows my faves book or that but that just me x Nick can do a lot better than her

 



Author's Response: You\'re so angry and I oddly love it because at least you\'re into the story, which is all I want. Though AJ is not judging Leslie, I think he\'ll definitely stick next to Nick when he needs him, because Nick is the the real victim in all this unfortunately. Thanks ALM!

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 01/28/08 Title: Chapter 20: Our Story Stops Here Sweetheart

OK what Leighanne did is really wrong and she should not do that x Yes Brian and Leslie should be together but it is hard with both of them really care for Nick I was going to say Leighanne too but i do not think Leslie likes her that much and when he finds out he going to really dislike both of them. Is Nick going to find out soon in way i do not what him to find out b/c he is going to be hurt but at the same time i would like him to find out b/c it is unfair for him he needs someone who really loves him for him

Author's Response: He does need someone that really loves him for him and it really isn\'t fair. I think Leslie\'s seeing that now, but she wasn\'t expecting Brian to \'break up\' with her so to speak, so circumstances may change for her. We\'ll just have to see :) Thanks for the great review ALM!

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 01/30/08 Title: Chapter 20: Our Story Stops Here Sweetheart

I just read the chapter again (so good) when Brian ask Leslie if she told Nick yet that was really dumb question er if She did tell Nick it would be Nick standing at the door not Leslie and he would be six feet under now lol



Author's Response: Yay! I\'m glad you liked it so much ALM. And I started to laugh because you\'re totally right. It was a dumb question because if she had told him, Brian wouldn\'t be standing there but be laid out on a hospital stretcher lol It\'s so funny cause it\'s so true. Thanks girlie!

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 01/31/08 Title: Chapter 21: Christmas Is Finally Here

Her sister right she needs to tell him but if she is going to tell him I think she needs to wait intil after christmas/ new year x Big sister lookin out for Leslie giving Brian hard time but someone should tel her that it takes two it is not all Brian x Poor Poor Nick juat what to give him a big hug and kisses he needs to opening his eyes but the saying is right love is blind x up date soon pls.

I think now Brian and Leslie should be together and I do not agree with it what they doing but the only reason why I see it now is for b/c Nick not them but Nick so he can find someone who loves him



Author's Response: I\'m glad you\'re softening up ALM, even if it\'s just a little bit :) My plan is nearly complete! Heh. Love is definitely blind and I just want to give Nick hugs and kisses too! Poor guy. He tries so hard. Update will be soon!

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 22: I Heard The World Break

poor poor Nick he does really love her but she does not love him x how on earth you can not love Nick is boyish ways, good looks and esp his laugh x hehehe love it where u put Howie and Nick the new double act their funny together. what Leighanne is doing is wrong she just dump him and go and tell Nick

 

 

you know what funny im reading another story called A Little Taste of Sin where Nick is married and so is the lead girl and they both are going to start affair really soon and im in their side lol im crazy do not know why i think it is b/c in this story both of the bsb guys in it and in the Little Taste of Sin it is only Nick x



Author's Response: I know ALM! How could you not love Nick? He\'s yummy. Poor guy. I\'m glad you liked the Howie and Nick scene. I figured I should throw something a little light hearted in there. lol I love how you relate everything to Nick, it makes me laugh. It\'s funny that you mention A Little Taste of Sin because Mellz Bellz and I were just talking about the similarities between this story and hers, what with affairs and certain circumstances! I didn\'t know they were both married... that\'s even more intense than this story. In her story, they gotta get a divorce to be together... yikes. Thanks for the lovely review ALM! It was great to read as always :)

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 02/05/08 Title: Chapter 23: I Do It Because I Love You

oh right she got Brian something but not her boyfriend x Maybe she should of got Brian a bag and put it over his head so she can not see him lol and more or loss keep saying this poor poor Nick he loves her why can she not love him x

Author's Response: She did get Nick a gift. She specificially says to him that they already exchanged their gifts (that\'s why she was shocked that he had something else for her...), I just didn\'t say what she got him. You\'re pretty ruthless with Leslie here, poor girl. I think she\'s trying, especially now with Brian leaving her. Maybe try and imagine Nick as Brian and Brian as Nick (reverse their rolls) and see if you might understand their feelings a bit better.. maybe? lol Thanks for the review ALM.

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 24: Finally Yours, Leslie

is this journal is gonna be big turn of trouble esp if Nick somehow gets his hands on it x About Leighanne when Leslie and Brian find out they will get really mad but they hav no right to be mad b/c what they are doing/did is worse x Im starting to warm to Brian but Leslie no and i think her sister is great Nick is dating the wrong sister x Are we going to see Nick point of view in this story x anyway update soon pls x I tried to review it before i went to work but i was in a hurry i pressed the x button instead of the submit lol

Author's Response: The journal does have the potential to be big trouble doesn\'t it? I never thought it like that... hmm, I like that notion. And I think Leslie and Brian do have a right to be mad, just because they were going to stop cheating and finally let Nick and Leighanne go (Which is definitely the right thing to do) but Leighanne is preventing that. They also haven\'t slept together in quite some time, so I think it\'s a step forward. But I understand where you\'re coming from. I\'m glad you like Amy so much! I love writing her, that\'s why she\'s been included so much lately lol And I can try and put Nick in a little more for you, cause I know how much you adore him. When I start writing, I get so engrossed in Leslie and Brian\'s story that I kind of neglect Nick. I realize that, and I\'ll try and be better about it :) I love your reviews girlie! Thanks so much, as always!

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 25: I Love Him Dearly... I Love Him Madly...

maybe it been to hard on Brian and Leslie x oh boy it what i got to say about this chapter x Leslie was really mad at first but im happy she did not stay mad at Amy for long b/c that is so big sister thing to do x When Brian was reading that over again and Nick come up i thought he was going take it of him to he can annoy Brian x Wow Brian that was the first time he find out that it was not only Leighanne gets hurt it is Nick too and frist time he sees how much Nick really love her x Nick must really love her he thinking of asking her

Author's Response: I\'m happy she didn\'t stay mad at Amy either. I think she understood why she did it, and knew that it\'s partially her fault for even having the present there with her in the first place. I don\'t think she would have been able to stay mad at Amy for long anyway, just because she needs a womanly influence in her life, especially now when things have fallen apart for her. You know, it would have totally been in Nick\'s character to snatch the paper from Brian\'s hands just to joke around, and I thought about doing it, but it kinda strayed from what I wanted to happen, especially since Nick went over there with a solid, serious purpose. Thanks for the lovely review darlin :)

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 02/28/08 Title: Chapter 27: Goodbye My Almost Lover

oh I smell big load of trouble for Leslie, Nick, Leighanne and Brian esp for Leslie and Brian (cant not say fell sorry for them), Leighanne is startin to annoy me now if i find out that my b/f did what Brian was doing i would dump him, then go to his best friend and tell him x Leighanne is just the same just thinking about herself  she has not given Nick one thought just like what Leslie and Brian did at first esp Brian x Keep sayin this my poor Nick he going to get really hurt when is he gonna find out he is going to get hurt but he need too so that he can slowly move on x

Oh do not listen to people that giving you hard time b/c what Brian and Leslie doing this is a really good story keep it up and up date soon pls



Author's Response: Hehe, Yay for being annoyed at Leighanne! I couldn\'t help but throw in some sort of \'bad\' guy, even if what she\'s doing is totally justified in her mind. What she\'s doing is still wrong (so is what Brian and Leslie are doing... or did do rather). Nick totally gets the shaft doesn\'t he? lol And he\'ll find out, what story would be complete if he didn\'t? ;) And thanks ALM for being so supportive! You\'re wonderful! Thanks for the great review as always.

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 03/12/08 Title: Chapter 28: An Unsure Future

yipbe you up dated

 oh boy gonna be drama oh poor Nick does that mean that will find out really soon x oh boy if so Nick is gonna be really really mad really hate to see mad but if he is gonna find out in the next chapter really do not what to be Leslie or Brian and maybe AJ if Nick finds out he know

pls update soon



Author's Response: Hehe yay for drama! I\'m excited to write it :) Maybe this weekend I can get around to it. Nick is gonna be made, if he finds out. Some major shit will go down lol I\'ll update as soon as I can! Thanks for the wonderful review as always hun :)

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 03/27/08 Title: Chapter 29: ...It's Brian

she told him oh my they gonna be drama would not like to be Brian in the next chapter will Leslie x oh poor Nick he so sad i fell for him oh you can tell he loved her so much esp when asking her to marry him b/c everyone knows what Nick things about marriages and not so much for Brian but the boys and of couse the girls are gonna be in the middle of them x Wonder if Brian gonna be mad at Leslie for telling Nick without talking to him first x pls update soon so love to see Nick kickin Brian where it hurts lol

Author's Response: lol I loved this review ALM. I love how into this you are! Nick really does love her so much, and I think that\'s part of the reason why his reaction to the whole thing is going to be so extreme. This is a very very hairy situation, and I\'ve barely skimmed the surface of the drama that encompasses this entire thing. I\'ll try and update this week! Thanks a bunch girlie :)

Reviewer: ALM Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 30: The Shit Hits The Fan

OK that is it Leslie and Brian are not my fave people at the moment they just broke up the band and worse of all hurt Nick, I really hope the boys finish of what Nick started lol x Brian did not help much by saying that x lol it took three of them to stop Nick go Nick x that was so sad that he never thought about his Brian oh poor Nick

Do not just stare at him someone go after but not Brian or Leslie, he mad and not thinking right if something bad happens to Nick I will blame Leslie and Brian x pls Nick u did not mean what you said about the band you just mad  pls one of the boys go and talk to him or maybe the girls yea Kirstin she would be great x pls update soon oh the drama



Author's Response: lol Now now, we don\'t want anyone DYING here. I thought the whole Nick leaving the band would get a mad reaction out of you, which I was looking forward to! All this definitely is sad. I think Nick was a bit hasty in his decision, but it\'s understandable. I\'m a completely irrational person when I get angry, and Nick was infuriated, so no wonder he went off the deep end. I\'ll update soon! I promise :) Thanks a bunch girlie!