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Hey everyone Vanessa here updating on sopmething new i will be giving a whole new angle to A Family Apart and I will be revamping Gypsies Passion once i get my brain going Plus look out for a whole new story that i am in the process of writing and will not be posting until i feel that it is good enough. well see you guys soon and please review my stories i crave reviews and want to know how to make things better.

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Heartbreaker by evergreenwriter83 Rated: R [ - ]
Summary:
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When Brooke Carter embarks on a whirlwind tour, the last thing she expects to do is fall for Nate, her sexy new photographer and web tech. To make matters worse, just when her love life starts to sizzle, someone else reappears to shake things up. Will Brooke make the right choice in the messy game of love? Or will she be the one to get burned?

(part of the Coaster Girls series; a spin-off to the Coaster Series)
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
 Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 68965
Read Count: 104529


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Published: 10/12/10 » Updated: 12/10/10
Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/19/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good for trevor for finally putting his pants on and getting his dad out of his life. However that does not excuse him about what he said to Kay. Not once did he say he was sorry for calling her a slut. For those of you who say that she "deserved it" or that it was coming to her different people deal with trauma differently. Her way to deal with the situation was to give into what the asshole said, and you can give blame to Brian and Leighanne for that because of her low confidence level. I am team Nate all the way Trevor can kiss my butt.



Author's Response: I'm glad he finally put on his 'man pants.' I think you're right about the whole Kay situation. They didn't even talk about that. Is it too late for an apologize? Will he apologize? Will Kay kick his butt for you? haha I dunno

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/20/10 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I don't think Trevor will be sinciere, He doesn't even know her whole story so how could he "Appologize" and mean it. However I do like how Brooke let Kay and NoNo have their first date. I think in time she will get used to seeing them together.



Author's Response: I like how Brooke let Kay and NoNo have their first date too. What a rock-some friend :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/22/10 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awwwww see Nate isn't Bad he didn't pressure her into doing anything she didn't want to. He even asked if she wanted to. He wouldn't have asked her if he was a jerk.

 

On a side note do you know when they will air the show? I don't want to miss it.



Author's Response: Nate isn't bad...not in a bad sense. Maybe in a good sense. Okay I'm still rambling...don't mind the crazy girl right now. On a side note - It airs November 4. I was in the front row of the little (I don't know what you call it) bleacher things because I brought memorabilia. I was rocking my blue Millennium shirt with my bright pink long sleeve tee because it was FREEZING this morning!

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/25/10 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OK reviewing for 2 chapters at once.

Trevor had no right to do what he did, if he wants any chance with her his game plan should be not to Kiss her but to be even slower then Nate.

On this Chapter, We don't know Nat's story with the Ex at all. For all we know the reason they Broke up was because she cheated on him and it could be someone elses baby. Don't count your chickens before they hatch!



Author's Response: I agree...counting chickens before they hatch is dangerous. There's always a dud (or two)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/25/10 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I just remember i need to Review the LJ exclusive.

Landon is adorable! and Nick is so scared of the Vasectomy lol. I really hope that Stefie does not have Lupus that would really hurt Howie. I still wish she was getting her own story though. I can't wait for Alyy and Pay's stories. I was so hoping for a Coaster Boys follow up but i guess not somethings just have to come to an end.



Author's Response: Landon is cute...and yeah Nick's scared. LoL the end of an era... ::sigh::

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/26/10 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ok I sence a small it of Trevors Father in Trevor himself. Brooke needs to turn her bitch on and slap him silly. I think she should take Noah and thats that. Trevor doesn't deserve her attention. 



Author's Response: LoL if these guys don't watch out she IS going to start bitch slapping! :p I think all you guys just want more Noah screen time. ::grin::

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/27/10 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yeah Trevor is not a good guy this time around, alot of women are put in an abusive relationship because the boyfriend or husband becomes jealous. Nate at least has the sence not to stick his nose in Brookes business and he er told Trevor she was going with him and he doesn't flaunt around that he and Brooke did it. Brooke never said she was taking Trevor to the VMA's and look at what he says and does. That should be a warning bell going on in Brookes head.

On the LJ exclusive;

HAHAHAHAHAH sorry but i got the vision of Nicks swimmers having their "Capes" ripped off. I love these exclusives and I still hope that Stephi doesn't have lupus.



Author's Response: Well, Trevor needs to curb that jealousy for sure. And Nate is keeping his mouth shut, but of couse he's two years older than Trevor so maybe he has a LITTLE more common sense. L.J. Exclusive - LoL yeah the imagery of Nick's poor swimmers stuck in my mind while writing!

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/28/10 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

again his cockiness annoys me, did she say that she wanted him forever? NO. Just because she had a moment of weakness doesn't mean she thinks he is the sn starts and the moon. Trevor needs to get over himself. I have this very bad feeling that he is turning into his father.



Author's Response: I don't know if Trevor's cocky or just a little needy. Maybe I haven't even figured that out yet. :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/29/10 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Love Jasper! I am proud of Brooke for winning an award now she needs to get her act together.



Author's Response: Ah, if only getting her act together was so easy!

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/30/10 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm glad she is going to re-evaluate herself but I knew Trevor would try something like that. There is always a chance that when a child is exposed to an environment like the one he has grown up in he doesn't realize that he begins to act just like his father. I'm glad Brooke told him to take a hike. When it comes to Nate at least he had the sence to admit that what was going on was crazy. I respect him for talking to Brooke calmly and more like a real man then Trevor.

 



Author's Response: There's still my team Nate and team Trevor girls even after all this, haha. I love it. What you said about Trevor is valid. He needs to step back and look at things now that he's out of that environment and figure out ways to combat the temptation of falling into a pattern.

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/31/10 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thats a low blow a very low blow. The question is who put it up and who taped it?



Author's Response: Exactly!

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/31/10 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Ok this is for the LJ, Liv is awesome and Nick is just like my dad lol. I hope Brooke is right and it isn't Trevor because if it is then i will kill him myself it's bad enough he got on my bad side for almost being like his dad. It could either be The Hotel Security Camera or Nate (Hoping it isn't him).  I feel so bad for Howie and Leigh and I wish Stefie had her story so we could read what she is going through but i know you need to move on to new stories to keep us entertained. lol.

 

P.S I hope you have a very Happy Halloween



Author's Response: Liv is awesome. :P We'll see how this tape got leaked...it won't take long to reveal the truth :) Actually, you might get Stefie's story after all. I'm tossing it around...

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 11/01/10 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I am very glad it wasn't Noah or Trev however I hope the hotel finds whoever was working the camera room. I feel for Brooke and hope that the media also realizes that she didn't do it on purpose, then again this is the media we are talking about. I can't wait to see Livs mom and Mike back in the picture but i hope Jane doesn't cause any trouble i smell some jane trouble on the rise but i could be wrong. I think the best thing for Brooke right now is to have a friend and at least Jasper was honest even if he does think she is hot. lol.

 

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 11/01/10 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

*Edit: I meant to say Nate not Noah.

we really need and edit review button lol

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 11/03/10 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love this chap, Jasper is awesome and Landon is just adorable. Love the "I'm a girl" reference lol. I think Brooke is on the right track to getting back to being herself. I only hope the media thing blows over, then again the media is just very cruel. I kind of don't want her to bump into trevor at all ever, i still have a very bad feeling about him.



Author's Response: Jasper's pretty darn cool. Got to love that Brenna's taking after her mommy! :)