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Hey everyone Vanessa here updating on sopmething new i will be giving a whole new angle to A Family Apart and I will be revamping Gypsies Passion once i get my brain going Plus look out for a whole new story that i am in the process of writing and will not be posting until i feel that it is good enough. well see you guys soon and please review my stories i crave reviews and want to know how to make things better.

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American Honey by evergreenwriter83 Rated: R [ - ]
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My name's Brooke Carter and I'm sixteen years old. There's two important things you should know about me...

Number One: My first single hit #1 on the Billboard charts on my fifteenth birthday.

Number Two: I'm still a virgin...even though the whole world thinks differently.

Being famous isn't easy, but finding true love is even harder.

(part of the Coaster Girls series; a spin-off to the Coaster Series)
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Assault/Rape, Sexual Content
 Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 65170
Read Count: 100756


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Published: 09/03/10 » Updated: 09/20/10
Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 09/29/10 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

LOL at Landon i mean wow i hope if i do have a son (my first pregnancy i'm on month 4) He won't do that lol. I love the sister moment i think Payton needs more of it.

Author's Response: LoL you HOPE your son wouldn't do that. I'm sure a few ornery girls would try it too :) Congratulations on your pregnancy!

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/04/10 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Trevors Dad and Mom need to be reported to child protective services ASAP! Can't wait to read more about Brooke and Trevors experience at the wedding.

Author's Response: I agree...bad situation right there especially with such a little one. Trevor can't protect them all. :(

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/04/10 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Sooooo can't wait for the reception chapter in both stories, can't wait.

Author's Response: that's my homework tonight. I only have outlines for both so it's going to take a little work. :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/10/10 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Trevor is an idoiot, He should be there for his family and take his dad down. I hope Brooke finds an Actual nice guy. guys like trevor don't know how to defend themselves or be man enough when they need to.

Author's Response: He can defend others but not himself. You pegged that 100% Brooke's going through guys like her papa went through girls haha

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/12/10 Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue

Wow this will get a sequal? That is awesome. I love this and I love how Landon wants to go on the tour with Nick and Brooke. I wonder if there is a new song in the drive can't wait to read more about it.

Author's Response: Yup, this is the only one that gets a sequel! Her story couldn't be told in one part. :) Stay tuned!

Fallen Angel by evergreenwriter83 Rated: NC-17 [ - ]
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My name's Kayleigh Littrell and I'm sixteen years old. There's two important things you should know about me...

Number One: My father and brother are famous Christian artists. Needless to say, I've lived a pretty sheltered life.

Number Two: I break free whenever I can.

I love to walk on the wild side. I don't mind getting hurt. Been there, done that. But the biggest danger is getting caught...
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Assault/Rape, Sexual Content
 Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 80887
Read Count: 43617


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Published: 09/22/10 » Updated: 11/13/10
Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/08/10 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OH, I really hope she gets help and can tell her parents how she has felt. I have been down that dark road in high school and it's not fun. Mostly because of the teasing that maded me go down. but i know she does have good parents and they can help.

Author's Response: This week has just made me so incredibly sad with all of the teenage suicides that have happened due to the whole gay bullying issue and cyber bullying and...ugh. It just has to STOP. Kay does have good parents. And I teased, but she's not going anywhere yet.

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/07/10 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

LOL Jen: Don't worry i am feeding my addiction by re-reading the coaster series. I just realized when reading "With The Band" That Kay should really tell Leighanne about what happened to her(Kayleigh) after what Leigh said at the hospital after the "Incident" with Brian and Olivia.

Author's Response: Oh I was wondering if ANYONE was going to remember that! You actually brought up a VERY important piece of Coaster history there. That's all I'll say. haha.

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/09/10 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am super glad Leigh told Kay about her own happening. I thin k it will make them a bit closer and kay can talk to her easily about what she feels. I really can't wait for the next chapter! I hope Claudia gets caught being a total bitch and that they all see how fake and spoiled she is.

Author's Response: I think you and everyone else is waiting for Claudia's downfall, haha. But will it happen? Hmm

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 09/23/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sorry but i hate Claudia at this point. I mean i understand it's her weding and everything but seriously i feel like she's going to be a bridezilla. I feel like Kay needs an outside the family non-brooke friend that understands her and can help her out. I really hope Kay gets out of the hell hole she's in with the parents ignoring her or that she eventually just blows up. I would have by now. But please keep updating i love it and need more.

Author's Response: I love that you love the chapter but want to kill everyone. :) Claudia is an, erm, acquired taste that's for sure. You'll be meeting some of Kay's other friends soon. We're just getting started! I'm sure you'll have more rants to come. lol

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 09/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I feel really bad for Kay though i feel like slapping brian and leigh and asking them what the hell are they doing ignoring their daughter? I only hope they start to realize what they are doing before she gets too deep into trouble.

Author's Response: Don't slap Bri and Leigh just yet. Let's get a few more chapters in first. :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 09/24/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

No girl should have to go through that. I really want to give Brian and Leighanne the benefit of the doubt but I am having a really hard time. I mean how hard is it to acknowledge your daughter? How hard is it to pick up on her signals that she is going through something? I wonder how Kay has the strength not to blow up and say "Hello, i'm your daughter i still exist!" I mean i though Baylee at least would remember he has a sister and be there for her. Please don't keep me hanging i really want to read more once again i am addicted.

Author's Response: I know it's hard to give B&L the benefit of the doubt, especially in these first few chapters. As for Baylee, well...he's a little self-absorbed in his own life. I'm not saying that's right or fair, but...it is what it is. You'll find out (if you haven't guessed already) that instead of blowing up Kay acts out...Once again I'm working today, so we'll see how the update train keeps rolling. :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 09/24/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ok I really hate Claudia, Finally Kay is getting attention because HER (Kay) Day is coming, i mean how many times can one turn sixteen? I have a small feeling if Kay acted out in the "Gothic manner". Dye her hair black, dress in black.....I'm sure that will get some attention going her way, granted it might not be good, but maybe she can wake them up with a stunt like that. Or go the extreme route and get caught. Still I love this story and I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: LoL Claudia keeps getting better doesn't she? ::grin:: Wow, goth would be an attention getter...I can't even picture a Littrell all in black! Let's hope Kay Day goes over well and Claudia doesn't butt in TOO much...

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 09/25/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I have to say, I understand the reason for Kay's acting out. I mean how often does brian have a one on one time with her? Why could he not support Baylee another time instead of on Kays biggest day in batton recital? and if he did have to miss Leighanne could have been more supportive or given Kay more reasurance. Also, Baylee as the oldest shoud give consideration to his Sister, go out with her have one on one time with her. At least as a family they could look at her talk to her about what she like, what she's feeling, acknowledge her birthday and tell Claudia to shove it and stop interrupting.
Also This is going to be an interesting night! I really hope they don't get into a big kind of trouble just a get caught trouble which would be better.

Author's Response: Well, we've only seen about three days of Kay's life so far...I think you'll be able to better judge one we get farther in--but right now Kay's main complaint is her birthday party and she's feeling uber-bad for herself. As is all of my readers, I daresay. :) As for the evening - trouble DOES seem to be on the horizon. We'll have to see just how much...

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 09/26/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh use your switch blade girl cut his thing off! I hope kay can confide in Brooke and tell her that this is the guy who started it all.

Author's Response: haha all of you gals think alike :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 09/27/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awwwwww, see he needs to have more moments like this. Also claudia is most likely in on it but she should have at least let them talk about her birthday and not make her think she was being ignored that is cruel. I Still think Kay should be more open with Brian and Leighanne, she needs to tell them how she feels at times so they can reasure her and let her know that they do love her.

Author's Response: I agree that Kay needs to actually TALK to Bri and Leigh...but that's from the adult point of view. LoL but they DO love Ms. Kay-d Bug