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Hey everyone Vanessa here updating on sopmething new i will be giving a whole new angle to A Family Apart and I will be revamping Gypsies Passion once i get my brain going Plus look out for a whole new story that i am in the process of writing and will not be posting until i feel that it is good enough. well see you guys soon and please review my stories i crave reviews and want to know how to make things better.

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Fallen Angel by evergreenwriter83 Rated: NC-17 [ - ]
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My name's Kayleigh Littrell and I'm sixteen years old. There's two important things you should know about me...

Number One: My father and brother are famous Christian artists. Needless to say, I've lived a pretty sheltered life.

Number Two: I break free whenever I can.

I love to walk on the wild side. I don't mind getting hurt. Been there, done that. But the biggest danger is getting caught...
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Assault/Rape, Sexual Content
 Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 80887
Read Count: 43617


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Published: 09/22/10 » Updated: 11/13/10
Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/21/10 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Awww that was cute and who says you can't make out in the back of a movie theater? I hope you have fun wherever you are  going Jen. I love this chapter.

Oh and in responce to your halloween story

 

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: LoL the interruption ruined Noah's plans. Carters and movie theaters are a dangerous combination! Thanks! I'm sure it's going to be an amazing day. :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/25/10 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I agree with Kay that can not be Bay's kid. Who knows where she was when she was in "Africa". Claw-dia better be carefull.

AWWWWW Noah and Kay that was HOT and STEAMY!!!!!!

You are awesome keep up the good work.

P.S. I'm having a baby girl she will be here March 22, 2011.



Author's Response: I think everyone's going with the 'not his kid' theory. LoL good job Kay! And yes, Noah + Kay = hot. It should be illegal for two teenagers to be that steamy. P.S. - Oh congratulations! I bet March seems like forever away, huh? :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/26/10 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

i forgot to put this in my review. I wish there was an edit button for reviewers to be able to add stuff they forgot lol. There is a HUGE difference between Fans not liking significant others of celebrities and Family members a HUGE difference. You can't compare Fans not liking someone to familymembers i believe family members trumps fans any day.



Author's Response: I wish their was an edit button too! I agree that you can't compare fans and family members. We know that Leighanne's family loves Brian (of course, who wouldn't?) and visa versa. Brian does mean well though, his analogy just sucked. :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/26/10 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I can't wait to see what happens on Halloween. I agree with Kaiah on the aspect that Leigh and Bri should have paid more attention, However 9 times out of 10 a homeschooled child does better in academics then a child who has gone to regular school (i'm not saying all kids who go to regular schools aren't smart) However with homeschool you have a more hands on approach to the kids development. Leigh (in this instance) didn't pay any attention to her daughter during the homeschooling and that is where the problem comes from.



Author's Response: I agree that Leigh and Bri needed to pay more attention but I agree with you that homeschooling isn't bad. The homeschool kids come to the libary for testing and they are so polite and well mannered. I'm a fan of both h.s. and traditional school. It's just what works for the family. :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/27/10 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I am curious to know who went with Claw-dia to the doctors? From the estimated due date someone would be questioning. I really don't like how Leigh didn't catch the little snicker Claw-dia made. On the new Schedule i agree that i am sad that they cut Marcie Time but it will help her with school and if she still wants to be an actress she does need to read her scripts properly. She is a smart girl they just need to re-enforce that thought in her head. I also like that not only will it keep her busy to the point that she will get to see Noah faster but it will keep her mind off of Claw-dia.



Author's Response: Bay went with Claw-dia. I can't tell you exactly what was said because that just wouldn't be any fun! haha Anyhow, we all know Claudia gets away with murder! (even though we'd all like to murder HER!)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/27/10 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

OH no, I hope Leigh isn't falling back into the old routine. As for Kay's situation i don't think she's pregnant but what the hell do i know, she could just be late or the Super sperm is in action lol. As for Bay WOOOOOO! go Baylee! Now all you have to do is get an Amnio done and a DNA test and divorce Claudia.



Author's Response: I'm messing with your minds...it could go either way. I love cliffhangers! I also love how happy everyone is that Baylee's committing adultery. Cracks me up. Y'know a character's hated when everyone's pushing for an affair!

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/29/10 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

And so begins the downfall of the evil Claw-dia. I only see things going up from here. I only hope that Bri and Leigh wake up to Claw-dia's nastiness.



Author's Response: I'm sure once the truth comes out that they won't be team Clawdiator anymore!

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/30/10 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I'm curious to know how Claw-dia lost the baby, I was hoping that the baby would be given a blood test or an amnio so that they could prove it wasn't Bay's. I want Marcie and Bay to be together, i'm glad Kay is starting to open up more.



Author's Response: All (okay, not all) will be answered in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 10/31/10 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

To Legihanne she would know whats was going on with her children if she actually took the time to listen to them and pay attention. Also she would realize what a witch Claw-dia was before  this. I only hope Kay is ok and they don't react too harshley towards her. We don't need another AJ and Kevin keeping their kids apart moment. I am glad that Bay is taking action to find our if the baby is his.



Author's Response: Bay's redeemed himself in my mind. I've changed around this story SO much since I've started writing it. There's a thread in the Community discussing the power of character's altering their storyline, and Kayleigh has totally f-ed with me. I know that sounds weird, but it's true.

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 11/01/10 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Awwww Kay is thinking about being Married to Nono. But yeah Life in general isn't easy no matter how you spin it. and even PREGNANCY isn't simple lol (I should know i am 20 weeks and going strong lol). I like that Leigh poked some fun at herself with her daughter, and I'm glad Brian didn't blow up even if it was at the request of his wife lol. I loved watching old Popeye and Olivoil cartoons growing up i wish they re did them for a new generation. can't wait to read more and i think we need an update on the Bay Claw-dia situation there is defineatly something up her sleeve.

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 11/03/10 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Kay needed to be brought down a peg or 50. I only hope she sees that she has more potential to go to college then she gives herself credit for. It's ok to dream but you have to dream realisticaly. I think she needs another talk with marcie about her potential to get into a good college and prove to herself that she isn't dumb.



Author's Response: I'm gonna go with 50 pegs. If they do move to Florida, she's going to at least need another session or two with Marcie before that happens...

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 11/07/10 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Ding Dong the witch is gone! i'm glad they saw how evil Claw-dia really is. I hope everything works out ok from here on out though i think from the last chapter Kay needs a reality check on a baby scenario. She might be excited but she is defineatly not ready and mature enough to handle it.



Author's Response: Kayleigh needs a reality check for sure! I think if I un-exile myself that I'm going to focus on finishing Kay's story first :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 11/09/10 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I am very glad her bubble has burst finally. I hope they come to a decision and soon, either adoption or........well who knows maybe she'll wisen up by then. Though i have to say having them go through it with Landon being five is a bit more cruel then what shelby and mason went through when he was an infant, at least as an infant landon didn't talk back lol. I'm very glad that she has taken an interest in school and i hope it continues and she finds what she would like to do with the rest of her life.



Author's Response: It was so Liv's idea...and you're right. A four year old Landon is probably the worst thing to stick those two with, but it got through to them!

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 11/09/10 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Hey they actually made a mature decision, besides The last thing they need to feel if they keep the baby is resentment. I don't see why Leigh and Liv aren't surprised after the stunt they pulled. It was because of the Landon Trap that got Kay to think that way. Maybe they should have waited till the twins were born to give them a more subtle view of what it's like, Then give them the Landon Trap.

 

I love the names for the twins super cute, They are going to be a handfull.

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed
Date: 11/11/10 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Wow got all caught up, ok, very mature decision by Kay and Noah and I am very happy that Bay can help out. I feel very sad for Marcie, However if you have ever seen the Show "I didn't know i was pregnant" there are some cases in that show that women who have been diagnosed like Marcie end up having a child and brush it off as a cyst that is passing through or bursting. I too have a very tingly feeling that prom will be a handfull.



Author's Response: I'm addicted to that show!!! I think Liv should have had a whole 'two hour' special. I mean, she found out she was pregnant not horribly late each time, but the woman is a medical marvel. haha. Glad you caught up with us. I'm at the home stretch now! I always get totally pumped up the last ten chapters or so. :)