|
No |
Alias: Jenna [Contact] |
Real Name: Carrie/Caroline |
|
User Level: Member |
||
|
Member since: 06/17/03 |
Last logged in: |
|
|
Skin: |
||
|
No |
|
|
|
No |
|
|
Messengers |
|
|
Favorite TV Shows |
I've always liked your writing style. I can picture the scenes as I read. You're doing a great job with this story and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and that you like my style. I write what I see when I picture the scene in my mind. I see everything I write like a movie. Maybe that's why it comes across that way! Thanks for reading and for leaving reviews! <3
Love the chapter & the emotions in the descriptions with how Nick is feeling.
I have been reading this story but I'll be the first to admit I'm being lazy on reviews and I apologize. Please keep up the great work you've done with this story; it's a very unique concept.
Oh no this would happen to Nick that he forgets and becomes the old, immature one that doesn't think about his actions & be responsible. Thank God he told Brian about everything before he talked with Kevin. Hopefully Brian can keep Nick down the right path! Anxious to read more:)
Good start. Will be interesting how this one plays out. Keep up with the writing anxious to read more!
More suspense! I'm enjoying where this is heading....
“We had it all, this love so strong. Now everything we had is gone. If you could read my mind, you’d know I’ve crossed that line…”
While Nick struggles to deal with what happened on the cruise, Howie’s indiscretions lead to dire consequences.O_O
Author's Response: Hahaha, love it!
Okay.....I normally don't read slash but with you writing it I figured WTF why not read it? Only you would have my attention to wanting to read more. The twist you have in this had me blind sided with Howie. This will be interesting to see what other evil
you will unleash lol....
Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a try! You know I don't normally write slash, so there had to be something more there. I wrote the short story as a challenge just to see if I could write a slash seriously, but this is really what happens when I try to write "slash" LOL. Don't worry, it's definitely going to be more medical drama angst than slash. I'm glad you're eager to read more! Thanks for the review!
I'm still reading this story. (it's like when you rubber neck at an accident and have to look).......anyway I would be royally pissed too like Leigh is. Nick is gonna blow a gasket when Howie gives him the news about a possibility that he may be infected...
Author's Response: LMAO! I guess I'll take that as a compliment? :) I can't imagine getting that kind of news... Nick's reaction is going to be interesting! Thanks for reading!!
Lots of mentions of things you should not do with people that are HIV positive in this chapter.
Nice short 'family' chapter. Nick's hopes and dreams, his awkward feelings of what happened with Howie on the cruise still in his mind....
Looking forward to "the conversation" in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! LOL Yes, this was meant to make you squirm, knowing that Nick has been exposed and that, if he is infected, he could be exposing Lauren.
Howie telling his family at Thanksgiving to gather /prepare himself no doubt himself how he would tell Nick was a brilliant idea on this already twisted fic lol. At first when you had his mother put her hand on her heat I thought OMG she's gonna take out
Howie's poor mother lol.
Yup I knew was gonna blow a gasket with Howie's
bombshell. He had sympathy, denial and the rage
within a split second. Howie put him over the edge when he offered to go with him to a clinic to get a
rapid HIV test.
The mystery continues on was the *infector*
Author's Response: Haha, aww, I'm not that cruel to kill Howie's poor mama! As if giving his baby AIDS wasn't bad enough! I loved reading your reactions to both scenes! Thanks!!
Damn. Why do you have to be one of those writers that doesn't use realistic testing results (aka we run the test & the dr. will be back in a sec. to let u know the results). I agree with Nick still being pissed with HIV Howie.....funny for Nick thinking he'll have to keep his dick in his pants away from horned up Lauren til he gets the results back.
Hurry up with the next infested HIV chapter please. :)
Author's Response: LOL I know, right? You crack me up! I will probably post the next HIV infested chapter on Friday. :) Thanks for the review!!
Way to stall on the results for Nick!!! Howie has a lot of guilt on his shoulders and feels horrible about everyone, everything that has changed because of his slip up.....I will be curious to see what Nick's test results are. If he is HIV positive I would think he would kill Howie or himself......
Author's Response: You know I love to keep you guys hanging! It'll be in the next chapter, I promise. Nick killing Howie if he's positive would be pretty awesome! LOL Thanks for the review!
LMAO!! Team America. ....orafice is a gross word but so is butthole, ointment, salve, balm, lubricant....You get the picture lol. Great chapter & yeah with your twisted mind you could not give Nick HIV. Now the question I have is who got it first????
Author's Response: LMAO Yes, yes, there are many gross words in medicine! Thanks!
Howie's world slowly unravels one person at a time....funny how he's cling to the hope that Lauren could possibly leave Nick so that he would turn to him and possibly become friends and then lovers lol.
Nick being cold towards Howie wouldn't be too far from reality. I would never see him turn back to the person that ultimately changes my life forever in a positive way; especially with HIV!!!!
Since the time line doesn't add up for Nick to have been the carrier I will be interested in seeing how this goes....will your twisted mind (lol) infect everyone in the band with HIV so we'll never know how this originally started?!?
Author's Response: LOL Hey, Howie's just looking for the silver lining in all this! ;) I'm glad you can understand why Nick is being so cold. LMAO That would sure be interesting if the whole band was infected! I'll take it as a compliment that you think me capable of such evil LOL. Thanks!
Holy cliffhanger Batman!!
Poor Howie. Bad Nick. At Least Lauren isn't hating Howie.
Update soon! ;)
Author's Response: LOL Thanks!!
Affiliates
Want to be an affiliate with Absolute Chaos? Email: mods@absolutechaos.net
Disclaimers (i.e. covering legal butts): All fiction is copyright to the individual writers. Do not copy in whole or in part. All trademarks belong to their respective owners (including but not limited to: Warner Brothers, JK Rowling, Fox Television, Jive). The stories here are intended as entertainment only and are not to be implied as true in any way shape or form. Characters that resemble real people are fictional versions of those people. No harm is intended.