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Howdy :O) Not much to say really. I have been writing fanfics for awhile now. All BSB related which led me to get my very first book published. You can find the info here: http://www.freewebs.com/melstree/melstree.html Thanks for reading my stories!

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Dodging the Daylight by KeepThisSecret Rated: PG-13 [ - ]
Summary: Past Featured Story"You gain strength, courage, and confidence by every experience in which you really stop to look fear in the face. You must do the thing which you think you cannot do." - Eleanor Roosevelt

When the unthinkable seemingly happens to one of their own, the remaining members of the group must work through their pain in order to piece together what is left. The result is an inexplicable turn of events that leaves each of them fighting to save themselves, as well as each other.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Suspense
Warnings: Death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 107927
Read Count: 116909


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02/28/14 » Updated: 08/20/14
Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 06/07/14 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Brian

I admit I lol'd at the website. There are a few forums that could easily change their name to coincide with the one you came up with and some people who post on those forums are crazy enough to do something like that. I am honestly scared for the boys sometimes just based on how eerily attached some people are to one or all of the guys. Just yikes!! Well this should be interesting now, to see Joey try to cover this up without giving himself away. He's kind of a moron so it should be fun to watch. LOL

Author's Response: There's no doubt in my mind that some people in the fandom are a bit too obsessed. It seems crazy to me that people are able to develop such an unhealthy infatuation with their favourite celebrities, but I know that it happens all the time. Strange!

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 06/15/14 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Howie

Aww, I know this is going to sound funny coming from me, especially since you read "Hope" but I hate when the guys are tied up and held prisoner. Not that I hate it as far as a story cliche or anything, but more like the idea of them being that helpless. When I read about Howie's hands being tied up I actually cringed. The two of them being so vulnerable makes me antsy! And I'm sure I wouldn't be helping the situation any because when Kevin was going on about being so dumb I was thinking, "Uh...yeah you were kind of dumb!" LOL curious to see what that TV screen is all about and if the other three will be getting a message.

Author's Response: It does sound a bit strange considering the fact that you almost had Nick buried alive in Hope :P, but I suppose part of the writing process is pushing ourselves to write things that we're not really comfortable with. The thought of the guys actually being in such a situation makes me cringe as well. While I am enjoying writing this story, I'm definitely having a hard time putting the guys in a "bad" situation. We'll see how I hold up as things move along. On a side note, Kevin was pretty dumb. The clue was literally right in front of his face! OI!

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 06/22/14 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: AJ

Wow, I'm glad I never tried to access that forum. I did not know a single answer to any of those questions! I wonder if that actually exists? Where you need to answer questions to be able to join. Maybe we should do that on AC, only instead of answering questions you have to write a few sentences grammatically correct! LOL

I loved the line AJ said about being happy that Brian had things in his life he wasn't proud of as well. I have a feeling he's not as much of a saint as people think he is and I wouldn't be the least bit surprised if infidelity was one of those things. It would also make sense why his dreadful wife has such a choke hold on him most of the time as well. Looking forward to seeing who this person is. I don't think it's a crazed fan though. She seems to smart and well thought out to be someone who had a one night stand with the guys and now wants revenge.

Author's Response: I also didn't know any of the answers! I had to Google every single one of them. It seems as though I would not be allowed to access the forums either. LOL - I almost died from laughing at the thought of people having to compose grammatically correct sentences in order to join AC!! I teach English, so I have no trouble imagining how hard that would be for some people. There is no doubt in my mind that Brian has a very strong faith, but I agree that he is in no way a saint. I'm not really sure where that perception of him has come from. To me, he doesn't come across as being overly perfect. As someone else mentioned in a review, he is likely a "closet freak" LOL

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 06/27/14 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Kevin

Okay, this chick needs to be their manager because getting them back in the spotlight was brilliant. Okay, so she killed someone and is slightly nuts. You gotta admit, her tactics work! LOL and of course it's Nick's fault! Of course she's one of his insane fans! I bet that's what both Howie and Kevin were thinking. I do have to say, good choice of name. I have to admit, every Sarah I have ever met is kind of crazy-ish. I hope none of them die because of this. No dead BSB's slightly maimed...okay not dead! ;O)

Author's Response: LOL - I have to agree that she would make an excellent manager. Clearly, the boys' current manager needs to try a different tactic because I think I heard In A World Like This all of three times on the radio when it was released. If I were Howie and Kevin, I would have been cursing Nick the entire time. In all fairness, the majority of Nick fans are nice, sane, friendly people. It just seems that every time my friend and I come across a total nut-job at a show she has 'Nick' scrawled across her forehead in war paint (or something equally strange). I'm glad that you approve of them being "slightly maimed". :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 06/30/14 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Nick

There were so many great moments in this chapter. It's probably wrong of me that I was laughing through the whole Nick and AJ fight/pity party. It seemed like such a real thing that could happen with those two. Having AJ's inner jealousy of Nick come to the surface and then Nick getting angry enough to use his fists. It's the visual image of them and then AJ and Brian on the floor which had me laughing. Then of course when AJ ends up on Nick's lap!

And getting back to Sarah and her management potential...she even can control their website! At least she's a smart psychopath. Also an incredibly rich one. See boys? This is what happens when you do things like Gold VIPS and cruises. You get rich psycho bitches thinking you are doing it for them personally! Way to go!

p.s.please do not kill Howie or Kevin. :O) If you have any homicidal urges you can fly in one of their misc people like anyone of the Carter clan or Leighanne? lol

Author's Response: I love the fact that you found this chapter funny!! FYI, I just about died laughing at your last comment about flying in some of Nick's family members and/or Leighanne just to kill them off. ROTFL!! That would be the most random plot twist ever ... although it may be kind of funny. The amount of money that some people have to spend on the boys astounds me! I have no idea how people can afford to do VIP at every show and after parties and cruises. I would be bankrupt and living in a box if I tried to do all of that.

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 07/03/14 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Brian

Ut-oh! Well looks like phase two has now officially begun. Is it sad that I already have your story mapped out in my head lol visions of Nick being separated from the rest of the guys and having to choose who will be tortured or die first type of a deal. At least if I were a kidnapping psychopath, that's what I'd do. Although I wouldn't kill them, I'd just make it look like I did and she's plenty rich enough and clever enough to do that. Very intense scene there with Brian trying to make his escape!

Author's Response: I wouldn't call it "sad" that you have the story mapped out ... although it does put some pressure on me to make it turn out as good as it already has in your mind. LOL The fact that you know what you would do if you were a kidnapping psychopath is a bit unnerving ... remind me never to get on your bad side!! Bahahahaha!

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 07/05/14 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Howie

I like the fact that they are all back together again. And poor Nick, once again I had to laugh when Brian said Nick thought it was all his fault. Awkward...I am looking forward to hearing what Sarah's explanation is going to be. Hoping to hear two words...naked Twister! :O)

and no worries about me being a psychopath. I just enjoy writing them and occasionally thinking like them. I'm kind of like the crazy person's version of visiting grandma and grandpa's house. Think of ways to maim and torture the boys and then send them off on their merry way unharmed. LOL

Author's Response: OMG - Naked Twister!! Bahahaha!! I love that you will maim the boys to no end and still have them all be able to walk away in the end. That's so sweet(?) of you! Although, I pretty much feel the same way. I don't know if I have the heart to be able to kill one of them off ... unless it was peacefully from natural causes or something like that.

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 07/08/14 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: AJ

I thought it was adorable that Nick hid behind Kevin for protection, it's seems like such a Nick thing to do. And AJ, should you really be the one chastising Nick for goading a younger fan since you used to date fifteen year olds? LOL That Kaci girl ring a bell?...seriously. I'm glad Howie wasn't shot. Poor Howie! And this girl is pretty cuckoo! Seems to me she would have benefited more by spending less of her money on the boys and more on therapy!

Author's Response: You're the second person to mention that AJ used to date teenagers. I think I missed this whole AJ creeping on the younger girls phase. Or, I just blocked it out of my mind forever. Who the heck is Kaci?? - LOL Nick's not dumb ... he knows that Kevin is the only one who is big enough for him to hide behind. LOL I mean, let's be real for a second, who else would he cower behind? Howie? Brian? - Both of them are too short!!

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 07/09/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: AJ

When they were on the Never Gone tour shortly before Kevin bailed, AJ was dating one of their opening acts which was this 17 year old girl named Kaci. It was odd and creepy because he was probably close to if not already 30 by then. *shudders* And good point about Nick, the other three are borderline gnomes in size comparison. I had actually left a much longer review for you but for some reason half of it got cut off and now I don't remember what I had said. I think it had to do with Brian and how in my head it was so weird to think he would try to fend off anyone. Again he's a gnome, maybe bite someone's ankles lol

Author's Response: Wow!! I really don't remember the whole Kaci/AJ relationship. I don't even remember someone named Kaci opening for them, nor do I have any idea what she looks like. LOL It annoys me to no end when I write a long review and then it gets lost. I can NEVER remember what I wrote. :( Also, Brian may be a gnome, but he's a strong, handsome gnome. Bahahaha!

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 07/10/14 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Kevin

I loved this little passage because I feel like it's so accurate: Regardless of the other relationships that had formed between the five of us, it was Nick who held us together. Each of us had a bond with Nick that couldn’t be duplicated; albeit some of those bonds were noticeably stronger than others. Without Nick, the four of us wouldn’t be able to carry on, and we had all just acknowledged that fact loud and clear.

Poor Nick is going to need some heavy duty therapy after this! SO Kevin actually heard the bullet and not just a click? It had to have been a click because there's no way you would have things come to an end so quickly and besides, you wouldn't kill Kevin! He'd never forgive you! She's all kinds of batshit bonkers. lol

Ooh, I also loved Kevin's whole wanting to put the pieces of the puzzle together too because that's what I was feeling as well. Why do these goons care especially because they have to realize she's one creme filling short of a twinkie!

Author's Response: I also feel as though that passage is accurate. Let's face it, without Nick there is no BSB. He's the "glue" as my husband would say. He's going to need a ton of therapy ... if he makes it out alive. Bahahahahaha! *kidding* "One creme filling short of a Twinkie" may just be my new favourite expression!

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 07/28/14 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Brian

Yikes! Getting intense. So, AJ is dead? I was pretty sure he was just knocked out. Hope this all ends soon. I don't know how much I'll be able to take, let alone Nick.

It's kind of like wanting really badly to click to see what happens next, but yet not really wanting to know just in case it's a bad thing. It's how I felt watching The Following. I watched the very first episode and there was a scene with a dog being tortured and I never watched it again, but it was such a good show it got my curiosity peaked where I just skipped that first episode and watched the rest but if there was a time I felt like something oogey was going to happen, I would avoid watching the episode as long as possible.

This is the fanfic version of that right now lol

I have to admit I laughed at the "Are we shooting this idiot or what?" line LOL For some reason I was completely able to visualize that. Poor Brian! Seems like he's being tortured more than Nick.

Author's Response: Well, Brian THINKS that AJ is dead ... you will find out for sure in the next chapter. Hopefully, you make it that far. LOL OMG - I know exactly the scene that you are talking about in The Following. My husband and I sat down to watch the first episode together and when the dog was tortured, I yelled "done!" and walked out of the room. I seriously could not force myself to watch beyond that point and he ended up watching the rest of the season alone. :P For some reason, an animal being tortured hits me way harder than a human being tortured. That being said, I seriously hope that you are able to convince yourself to keep reading (even if you do have to give yourself a little break in-between chapters).

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 07/31/14 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Nick

I'm back lol And you should definitely check out The Following.You're missing out on a great show! I am the same way when it comes to animals! I can't stand the thought of anything bad happening to them. That's why I NEVER watch a movie about an animal. They never end well. Babies? Sure you can kick them the head, but leave the animals alone! lmao

YAY! I'm glad the police finally showed up! It was getting harder and harder to realistically believe Howie would still be able to live if they didn't barge in soon. Loved that AJ's first word was "fuck!" I can see that and I lol'd at Nick barreling Brian down as if he was a dog or something andf of course that hug at the end with Kevin. Awwww! Also got a kick out of Kevin yelling at everyone. Also a very Kevin thing to do. Great job! I'm sad it's winding down as well, but at the same time for progression purposes, also proud of you!

And I'll say it once again, you deserve all the accolades! Brilliant job with this story! Congrats! I hope you win everything you were nominated for, you deserve it! :O)

Author's Response: I think that my husband actually purchased the first season of The Following on DVD (he liked it THAT much). Maybe I will attempt to watch it. (And skip the first episode of course.) The police certainly took their sweet time showing up. Honestly, WHAT were they doing for so long?? Sheesh! LOL Knowing how much you love the Kevin/Nick pairing, I kinda figured that you would enjoy their little moment at the end of the chapter. ;) As far as the awards go, of course it would be nice to win something, but I'm just so surprised to have been nominated that actually winning something would be a crazy bonus as far as I'm concerned. :D

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 08/01/14 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: AJ

Poor fuzzy AJ. It was probably a blessing in disguise that he couldn't remember anything. Glad to see 4/5 of the boys are okay. Looking forward to finding out what the detective has to say.

Author's Response: I have to agree. AJ is better off being a little bit fuzzy on the details. It will probably save him some money on therapy in the near future. :P

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 08/02/14 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Kevin

Aww, I'm glad we got that explanation without having to witness it being executed, if that makes any sense? Also nice to know that Howie is awake and out of surgery. I'm looking forward to reading a Nick and Howie scene. I hope the guys file a law suit against this police department from hell! LOL

Author's Response: Yes, what you said makes sense. :P The next chapter will be a Nick and Howie scene, which I'm sure will make you happy, but will be killer for me to write. I have to gear myself up to write a Howie POV.

Reviewer: Mare Signed
Date: 08/08/14 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: Howie

Glad I finally got around to reading this chapter. My computer crapped out on me but thank goodness for this Nook. Anyway, I was relieved to see this was from Howie's point of view which meant he was alert and doing better. I loved the exchange he & Nick had. I know in real life it was very opposite whereas Howie was the one Nick seemed to confide in most,but I enjoyed this take on things. He certainly was a big old butthead to Howie often. Now that they almost lost him, maybe they won't be so quick to take him for granted. Looking forward to hearing this press conference. As always, nicely done!

Author's Response: Computer problems are the worst ... mine almost always seem to be Internet related. :( I agree that the opposite is true of Nick and Howie's relationship in real life (especially nowadays), but I kinda had to spin it the way that I did in order to keep things in line with Howie's feelings earlier in the story. Either way, I'm glad that you enjoyed the Nick/Howie moment. :D