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Summary:


The war between good and evil had always gone on with little knowledge of humanity. Every thousand years a select few humans were chosen at birth and given special abilities. Those fortunate enough to be discovered at birth were trained. Those not discovered would live out their lives with no understanding of what they were capable of.





One special girl was foretold to be the child that would end the war forever and bring both races together to live in harmony.





One Demon sought to change that destiny and to change the very fabric of life itself. He desired only to control the girl, and the powers she possessed. Instead, he brought forth an evil that had been unseen for hundreds of years.





Her destiny was unaltered, however her fate had changed. She must now fight her own lust for blood and unite the forces of darkness and light to conquer the one who can destroy everything.



Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: Horror, Science Fiction, Supernatural, Suspense
Warnings: Graphic Sexual Content, Graphic Violence, Slash F/F, Slash M/M
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 25853
Read Count: 11438


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10/02/05 » Updated: 09/03/06
Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

good chapter good stuff good stuff

I had a little problem keeping track of things in the beginning, and even got lost a few times but when things got back to the mansion every thing became clear

the way that Katharine keeps playing around with Bianca, they way she sips wine in front of her, she knows she is watching but does not look at her, she gives her the chance to look at her, to love her, to fall to her beauty, to make her want the forbidden

from the look of things Darcy is going to find out he is way out of his league, he is going to be between a rock and a hard place, or if he is lucky a blood donor to every body else

i guess things will get complicating later on for Katharine with her old love (i think) and her new infatuation with Bianca



man I cant wait to read the next chapter to see what happens next



Author's Response: I am glad that your enjoying it. I\'ve worked hard on this story. I was beginning to think no one wanted to read it

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Nathaniel seems to be every bodies f**k boy, every body has a peace of him or should I say he has a peace out of every body ;) and Bianca is going to be the same since she is the new comer in the circle

Nathaniel in the other hand seems to have his own hidden agenda since every body is blinded when ever he walks in a room

Short but simply great chapter keep up the good work

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So it begins, you are amazing, in a few chapter you have put the perfect equation for seduction, jealousy and betrayal

And whats really funny that Darcy is in the smack middle of every thing he is gonna regret ever leaving the church

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Darcy has a choice, but at the same time he has non, this chapter raises Darcy's stocks up a few points Nick is obviously afraid of him, Kath really wants him to be on her side better then against her, I think he holds the key for protecting Kath and her new playmate or the power to destroy Nick and his playmate

I'm really getting in to this

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What I suspected is almost true as it appears from this chapter, Nath has a hidden agenda, and with the appearance of a new interesting character Angelina she is going to be a thorn in his side

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Nath, he is getting it bad from both ends of the stick

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, now that?s some thing I couldn?t have seen coming, this proves Kath has a lot of power to spread around, I thought she would keep the boy to lure his master but tossing him out like garbage, she is like " I do what I want when I want " and poor Nath didn?t shake it hard enough to be on her good side, it seems that Nick thinks Kath is a better bed partner with Nath but Nath thinks other wise



There is Darcy he is hiding some where, he is lucky that his stocks with Kath just went up a few more points since the tossing of poor Nath, he doesn?t know it but he is slowly making his way up to Kaths heart



and yes lets not forget every body is going to feed tonight, there will be some pimpin !!!!!!!

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Very interesting

So as expected Darcy joined her side and as predicted his stocks just went through the roof, Bianca for the first time is threatened by some one else this might bring her to maybe plot to kill Darcy or probably betrayal

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 08/02/06 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I don?t know about this, I got lost it seems that the whole chapter just goes on and on, like reading the same word over and over again


Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 08/02/06 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

First of all I just want to state for the record



SMOKIN BABY



Amazing turn of events here, from almost being a blood bank to Kath and Bianca and ended up being her boss its cool baby cool, but I'm sorry to say to me it didn?t last as long as I expected but there is other chapters on the way

I'm still waiting for Nath and Nick smoking session that would be interesting to read

Bianca feels left out, she was brought in the circle only to be left out at the corner I see an alliance with or a hot session with Nath very soon

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 09/05/06 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

nice chapter, Nath was about to get some but he had to screw things up, she should have waited till after he got some to raise his " girlish, im second best " issues tell after he got some
in the other hand he is right, Nick just kept him around as a F boy as soon as he gets the girl Nath is out (poor Nathaniel) with any way you putted he is not getting it like he should be, and which every side gets what they want he would be the first one to die

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 09/05/06 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

God he really did it this time, I knew he was about to do some thing but not like this (creep), she lets her guard down for one moment and shows up, all this means one thing, Nath didnt get any that night (sad face)
the asshole had the chance but apperaintly he still had feelings for her where she moved on, he came in behind her, he had the chance but he decided to do a Romeo stunt
My advice to dear Nick, settle for Nath, Kath is out of his league now
talking about Leagues, its great seeing Darcy playing with the big boys now a few chapters ago he was that close too being a "special treat" for sweet B ( Go Darcy ) lets just hope it doesnt goes through his head and F things up

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 09/06/06 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

hmmm, i dont know, Nick is the only one who knows Kath and her powers to well, better then her better then any one else I think he knew that she would cast a spell to keep him away, and he did that for a reason (creep) he is a smart asshole

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 09/06/06 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

he was going to marry her ?!
he was going to marry her !!

Reviewer: Supreme OverLord Signed Liked
Date: 09/07/06 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 * Final Chapter *

aaahhhhhh daaaaaaaaaaamn
IDIOT dumb STUPID girl kill her self like that
will the Creep formally known as Nick, has gone to bed and for the next 300+ years will have a never ending loop of nightmares of getting screwed over and over again by Kath
I still cant get over Nath (im not going to forgive you for this) , but the poor boy had it coming
Bianca made a very difficult choice, and i mean difficult, loyalty over love no matter how every body may think Kath is the only one who knew how she really felt at the very end
Darcy on the other hand if i put my money on him from the beginning but im known to be a bad gambler :-)
he managed to raise up from the dinner special on the menu to co own the restaurant, this guy has gone where no other man of god has gone before ;-) Darcy still remains a mystery, tho his love and loyalty to Kath, he is the only one i wouldn't give my back to, switching sides this way may make him switch sides again in the future