Reviewer: honey Signed
Date: 12/13/08
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Wow Erika! I'm super impressed. I can't remember which one of your stories I was reading before, but since everyone's been talking about this one, I figured I'd give it a shot. I have to say, not that the other one sucked, but you've come a long way. The voice you have here is just so perfect for the type of life he lives. And I can picture AJ in this role perfectly as well. I'm glad he's having trouble with the idea of killing Mason, but is it bad that I snickered when you said the target's name was Kevin? LOL nice to know I'm not the only one who picks on him! I'm looking forward to checking out more. The plot is so unique and I'm excited to see how you're going to write Kevin (and the others if they're in it) into the story. Great job!
Author's Response:
*Squee* Getting reviews from you again, an honor!!! Thanks, I do cringe when I kinda look those stories over lol. Yeah Kevin seemed to fit the bill for being offed this time. lol!! Nope I don't find it bad that you snickered, lol. Yeah you know now that I think about it, I've offed the poor guy in each of my stories that has him in it. weird!!! Yay I'm so stoked that you are taking the time to read and liking it. Thank you so much Kelly.