Reviewer: DragonStar Signed
Date: 02/03/11
Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
It's been a while since I reviewed, so let me see if I can find a way to sum up anything I've wanted to say but haven't had the chance to(sorry if I've actually said some of this and forgot lol):
THANK GOD HE TOLD THE GUYS.
Poor Kevin, I can only imagine how that must feel to get that news. The way you've written the guys' reactions seems very true to how they'd really react if, God forbid, this situation ever happened.
Now he just needs to tell his family! More concerned with him telling his sibs than his parents, since it's likely to be less drama--not drama free though--without Jane and Bob.
And now I'll skip some of the Nick/Cary comments I had and just go with: YAY ITS ABOUT TIME HE FIGURED IT OUT AND KISSED HER!
But DAMN YOU FOR THE CLIFFHANGER! lol. I can't wait to see Cary's reaction to this.
Okay, I think I'm done now.
Great job! Love the story. :D
-Mel
Author's Response: Thanks, Mel!! LOL I think originally, I was going to have him wait longer to tell the guys, but there was just no way. I felt bad that he waited as long as he did. It was nice to finally have him tell them. I appreciate your compliment about the guys' reactions. Who knows what they'd really do and say, but I tried to write them the best I could. His family will be next... haha, that should be interesting to write too. And yay, the kiss! I'm gonna try to finish the next chapter today; we'll see. Thanks, Mel, I'm glad you're caught up and still enjoying it! :)