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FrickingKaos:
Updated If I Knew Then with Chapter 5
FrickingKaos:
--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on February 21, 2019, 07:15:56 PM ---Just read Chapter 4 and enjoyed it! This is such a fun throwback story, and the time period is perfect for this plot. It makes sense that Nick would be so insecure about his sexual preference, and Brian would treat being gay like it's taboo because it still was back in the 90s. I like that you included the Everybody video shoot in this chapter!
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Thank you for the feedback, and I'm glad that I am getting the time period right. Unfortunately a lot of people were new to people being gay then and not everyone was as understanding as they are now. I thought this would make a lot of sense for Nick to be figuring things out at this point in his life when they were still young. Thanks again!
RokofAges75:
You're welcome!
I just read Chapter 5. I laughed at Nick calling Leighanne "Boob Job Barbie" - ha! I also got a kick out of him hiding Brian's wallet, and then Brian figuring it out right away when he couldn't find it. I loved the last scene where Brian threw Zelda out the window and called Nick out on being jealous. He knows exactly what's going on.
Keep up the great work!
FrickingKaos:
Chapter six of If I Knew Then has been updated
FrickingKaos:
--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on February 24, 2019, 01:53:55 AM ---You're welcome!
I just read Chapter 5. I laughed at Nick calling Leighanne "Boob Job Barbie" - ha! I also got a kick out of him hiding Brian's wallet, and then Brian figuring it out right away when he couldn't find it. I loved the last scene where Brian threw Zelda out the window and called Nick out on being jealous. He knows exactly what's going on.
Keep up the great work!
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I really laughed as I typed out the Boob Job Barbie quote, I think that would be something Nick would call her if he was pissed off. Brian’s pretty smart and he’s onto Nick’s shenanigans. I’m glad you’re enjoying the story, thanks for the feedback!
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