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RokofAges75:
No problem! That is probably the best, most detailed account of it from Brian's POV (and it has a sidebar from Leighanne's too).
About Nick - absolutely! No one wants to read a story just about Brian and Leighanne. Nick should play a part in it, and that will make it more painful for Brian when he doesn't show up afterwards. Ooh, I can't wait for the drama!
FrickingKaos:
Chapter 15 of If I Knew Then is now posted!
RokofAges75:
Just got caught up, and oooh, things are definitely about to go down! I loved the confrontation with Lou during breakfast. It surprised me when I first found out about the whole Lou thing that Brian was the one who initiated it, because he seems so laidback and mild-mannered; I would have expected Kevin or Howie to be the one to file a lawsuit first. Go Brian!! You did a great job portraying his anger, and I think the fact that Nick is the only one who seems to support him at this point will help bring them closer together. Can't wait to see what happens next!
FrickingKaos:
Thanks for the feedback, Julie. I loved writing the breakfast scene because Brian's anger is reaching its limit.
When I saw the documentary in NYC and found out that Brian was the one who got everything going... I knew I had to include it in this story. It fit in perfectly and things started clicking. I'm glad you enjoy it.
FrickingKaos:
Chapter 16 of If I Knew Then has been posted!
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