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FrickingKaos:
Thanks so much for the feedback. I did that on purpose because like both of you said, it wasn't as acceptable in that time as it is now. This is why Brian's so conflicted. Nick is more comfortable with it on the other side of the spectrum but because Brian isn't as accepting he's certainly doubting himself as well. I am glad it sounds realistic because that's what I'm going for.. Thanks ladies!
RokofAges75:
I think Brian's religious upbringing would also make him more reluctant to come out, even to himself, whereas Nick doesn't seem as religious, so that would be less of a factor for him. It's definitely believable.
FrickingKaos:
Chapter 24 of If I Knew Then has been posted
RokofAges75:
Oooh, Chapter 24 was eventful! I figured something would happen on Nick's birthday, and you did not disappoint. That was so funny when Nick kept playing footsie with Brian, and Brian thought it was Leighanne. Poor clueless Leighanne, LOL; I feel kind of bad for her. I loved the scene in the bathroom! I wonder what they'll tell Leighanne when they come back, LOL.
FrickingKaos:
Chapter 25 of If I Knew Then has been posted!!
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