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RokofAges75:
Glad to see this updated again! I loved Chapter 26. Good for Brian calling Nick out on being a hypocrite because he's only come out to one person himself. And that shower scene... steamy! I loved the description of Nick massaging Brian's biceps and shoulders. Drool. I was a little surprised Brian let him go in the back door just like that, LOL, but I guess they had to give it a shot sooner or later. I think this is the first slash I've ever read that I've been able to take seriously and suspend my disbelief enough to enjoy. I definitely have a different perspective on it after writing SAMS, but I still haven't read many slash stories, so it's a huge credit to you for developing their romantic relationship in a way that makes me root for them. Keep up the great work!
FrickingKaos:
LOL I am glad you enjoyed that shower scene, I was inspired by Brian’s shirtless gym photo and was able to come up with that description, I drooled while writing it.
It was about time Brian told Nick he was being a hypocrite because he can’t tell Brian to be honest when he himself is not being honest. it doesn’t work both ways, Nick lol.
As I told you on twitter, this was my first slash sex scene I wrote so I was very nervous to post this chapter as I wasn’t sure how it would read. I think all their fooling around led up to them finally having sex. I’m glad their relationship feels realistic cause that’s what I was going for. Thanks for all the compliments :)
FrickingKaos:
Chapter 27 of If I Knew Then has been posted.
RokofAges75:
Glad to see this story updated! I enjoyed the new chapter. I liked the back story about watching gay porn with Lou. If Nick really were gay, it would make a lot of sense that that was what first made him aware of his feelings. I was surprised but happy that Nick came out to Kevin like that and even happier to see Kevin accept him. I wonder what Brian will have to say when he finds out that Kevin knows about him and Nick. Looking forward to the next chapter!
FrickingKaos:
Chapter 28 is now posted :)
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